yasssssssss hirato and akari!
also, keep doing your thing! you're amazing! :D:D:D:D

That was so hot pls update soon

Is this still going? I need it to keep going! Although I don't like hirato an akari in this, it's still such a great fic I can't get over it. Can't wait for another chapter!

I love the your story

Hi! Actually I am reading this repeatedly (now is the time that I got the urge to write a review and this is my first time writing one). I really enjoyed your story, to be really honest. I really wish Yogi and Gareki happiness. BTW, ahmm... can you please make mowr Silver Yogi x Gareki scenes more? :) And I look forward to Hirato x Akari moments! Hope you update the story but just take your time writing a wonderful story!

Please update soon!

Please continue! This is amazing!

To be honest I don't like the way yore leading your story. I can't make myself believe in it. At first in the situations, second Hirato's motivation and third - Gareky who is eager to kiss with everybody. BUT! It' s rare occasion when I'm bothering myself to write a review. Because some parts are quite nice. As the biting moment - it's really nice and I think verietable. And the direction. I like Hirato loosing his alfa-position. Because it's an illusion in manga )). So the idea is: I wish you more understanding if manga and anime characters and setting. You CAN make interesting things, you need just to be more accurate with the script and it will be rather cool!

I love you fic miss author! let Gareki enter Yogi if possible \(**)/

aawwwwwwww it was nicee :3 and 6th chapter was sweet 3 it ended perfectly without lemon part since it's decalration of love from both sides officially LOVE how you write romance and interraction and behavior between YOGI & GAREKI 3 like watching them in anime or manga! The one and only part I didn't like is Hirato o.o I mean he is father to Gareki so it's really awkward acting as he desires boy in romantic way so i skipped most of their scenes.. better you made it like Tsukitachi x Hirato since those two are lovers from younger days with Akari :3 but in all Yoreki romance and lemons were perfect 3 waiting for next chapter

Hotness! I love it. I personally love hiratoxgareki but hey a love triangle is fun too. Oh I also liked when u wrote about hirato and silver yogi...being hungrily dominant. Its hot, damnit gotta wait for next chappy.

¡Hi!

¡YES! ¡They are Dating! ¡ That makes me very very happy!...By the way..Was Akari trying to do what I think? He better not! I like you Akari, don't make me hate you! Yogi belongs to Gareki and nobody else! I'm so glad Hirato came in and interrupted!...

I feel Sorry for Hirato, when he embraced Gareki I was like "Awww! So cute!" but like I said at least he still has Akari! And now he finds out about what Silver Yogi did...uhhh...I wonder what will happen now! I need to know! I like this story more and more! It's one of my favorite stories of Karneval! I hope you can update soon! I'll be waiting for it!

¡See you later!

Hi I just discovered your story today! I had the sudden urge to look up Karneval fanfiction and BAM, I found this! Let me just say that I absolutely adore Yoreki :DD And this tory is fantastic! It's cute seeing how much Yogi loves Gareki, and seeing Gareki slowly but surely returning his feelings. I have no idea what Akari was trying to do with Yogi, but I'm glad Hirato came in and interrupted :)
AND Yogi and Gareki are dating YES I AM HAPPY.
As for chapter 75, I fangirled so hard when I read about Yogi almost confessing.
fghfkjg I'll do my best to review every chapter from now on. A story like this should be appreciated!

Of course we want a Hirato/Akari scene; or a Hirato/Akari/Tsukitachi scene. Was Akari trying to do what I think he was with Yogi? If so then with that Hirato/Akari scene, forgive me for quoting my roommate after a picture I'd shown him of the two, but "Doctor's in trouble, Doctor's in trouble."

I enjoyed this chapter, glad to see things getting to some point of reconcelliation with Gareki and Yogi, at least they know for sure where the other stands. I look forward to the next chapter.

¡Hi!

Yay! Three chapters! I was so happy to read them!...sorry Yogi...sorry Hirato...Silver Yogi was faster than you! He bluntly went straight to the point!...Somehow gareki cheat on Yogi with Yogi (?)...haha just kidding...I like it! The lemon was so hot! so...afajagahgj! I love it!

OMG! I want to know what will Yogi think when he finds out what his other half did! And if Hirato finds out what happened!? what will he do?! I'm dying to know!...well at least he still has Akari! Update soon please! I look forward to Chapter 6!

¡See you!