This was beautiful!

GGGAAAHHH!
THE FEELS, THE FEELS, OOOHHHH, THE FFFEEELLLSSSS!
MAKE THEM SSSTTTOOOPPPP!

Jk, this was really good! Everyone was, more or less, IC, the conflict was realistic, and the parent-shipping for Emcy from V was adorable!

Dang It’s so edgy, I LOVE EDGY FANFICS U GO GURL/BOI I DUNNO I’M CRAZY

This is a very nice fanfiction. But just like everyone else have commented. His full name is actually Emmet Joe Brickowski. If you’re unsure just google it.

Adorable! Lol, how Emmet wouldn’t tell Lucy what he was thinking

Sometime emmet should say what he thought about lucy

i loved this fanfiction because we finally get to see emmet try to kill himself. Pain is just weakness leaving the body am I right

5 am at Harmony's
It starts at Harmony Fazcatbat's new pizzaria. Sandy Cheeks checks monitor cameras and hears a noise. in the right vent shows Mofy. Mofy stands and Sandy puts on a mask.

Mofy:Hi, Harmony.

Sandy:(exclaims)Oh, hey, Mofy!

Mofy:Have you seen the night guard? She's not wearing her costume again.

Sandy:(laughs and scoffs)Well, you know her.

Mofy:Yeah, but we'll find her eventually. It's just difficult with the spare Harmony head she's been wearing.

Sandy:Well, as you can see, she's nowhere around here, so, why don't you look elsewhere?

Violent female voice:Night guard! I'm gonna kick your ass!

Mofy backs up and out jumps Ela. Sandy turns flashlight on in Ela's face, scared and the light hurts Ela's left eye.

Ela:ARGH! FUCKING! GAH!

Mofy:Wait, you saw the night guard?

Ela:Aye, that's the night guard right there!

Mofy looks at Sandy, who was waving "Hello." to her.

Mofy:No, that's just Harmony.

Ela:No! She's doing that thing with that spare Harmony head again. You know, messin' with yer facial scanners!

Sandy flashes the flashlight in Ela's face again.

Ela:AAUGH! Damn it! If she's Harmony, why does she keep flashing that wretched flashlight in my face?

Mofy:Well, obviously, you're scaring her.

Ela:(shocked)Scaring her?!

Sandy flashes it in her face yet again.

Ela:(enraged)I'M GONNA GOUGE YOUR EYES OUT!

Mofy:Ela, calm down!

Ela:No! I'm the only one in this damn place who can see through that disguise! Madoka, back me up here!

Madoka:I don't relly care if she's Harmony. I'm just trying to get my hands on those sweet, succulent double a batteries!:3

Sandy protects her flashlight and Ela takes out a gun.

Ela:I've had enough of this! Show them you're the night guard!

Mofy:Uuuh, that's a prop.

Ela looks and sees a cork attatched to a string tied to a toy gun and lets out a raging snarl.

Ela:You know what? Where's Harmony? There can't be two Harmonies, right? Harmony!

Harmony:Yo.w

Ela is surprised.

Ela:Well, now we got TWO Harmonies in the room!

Mofy:Cool! :D

Ela:Mofy, oh, my god! I will slap you!

Harmony:Wait, what's going on here?

Mofy:We're looking for the night guard. :3

Ela:(now mad and points to Sandy like a brat)SHE'S THE NIGHT GUARD! :w

Harmony:Hmm. Pretty sure that's Harmony.

Ela:Ah, god damn it! (pokes Harmony's nose)YOU'RE HARMONY!

(squeak)

Silence, Harmony walks out of the office.

Ela:Where are you going?

Harmony:Fuck this shit, I'm out.

Mofy:(stammers)I don't get what's confusing.

Ela:Mofy, listen! Wait, what time is ìt?

Elangle:Hey, fellas.

Ela:Oi, Elangle. What time is it?

Elangle gets out her pocket watch.

Elangle:it is about 5:59.

Ela:(suddenly overjoyed)5:59?!

An excited Ela removes the Harmony mask off Sandy.

Ela:It be the night guard!

Mofy:The night guard?!

Harmony:The night guard?!

Madoka:Batteries? :3

Sandy tries to turn flashlight off, but no light. Madoka is holding the batteries and Sandy puts the mask back on.

Sandy:No, no, no! I'm Harmony, right, girls- OH, GOD!

Ela wedgies Sandy Cheeks and the time reaches 6:00 am. All the other girls froze, even Ela let Sandy go. Sandy looks at a scary Ela and pukes in front of her.

The phone rings and Golden Harmony picks it up.

Bubbles:(on phone)Um, hello?

Golden Harmony is so scared, she lets out a terrifying scream and she hides behind the desk. The phone hangs up and a petrified Golden Harmony peeks up.

End

So good

Poor Brickowski! Loved it. :D

That was really good! Great job!

I liked this, a lot. Partly what inspired me to write 'Guilt'. :)

I liked every part of it! ... Even the corny ending!

Well, it was good. Although, it would've been nice to show more of Emmet's distress involving the numbers. That would've made it easier to understand why he wanted to die. Also, you made it sound as though part of the problem was knowing what was on the other side of the abyss. You never resolved that.

What are you talking about, corny ending?I thought it was sweet!;)