The plot does suck, but it's better then most of the recent Kirby fics. I guess that's something to feel good about.

Awww, I don't think that was bad! It's much better written than the majority of the Kirby fanfiction archive...and quite a few other fanfiction archives, too.

Your 'tidbit' was nice, too. You don't know how glad I am to see a story where Meta Knight isn't 1) a demon beast or 2) a vampire or something along those lines. Seriously, most stories that have something on Meta Knight's past are so terrible I can barely stand to read them, but yours...I actually LIKED reading yours.

The whole story sounded like it was written intelligently, which is something that's nice to see between the balance of overly wordy and straight-out scribbling. Never, EVER delete this story, no matter how terrible you may ever think it is! (I know how the story-deleting thing is; I myself have deleted five) You've written a great Kirby story here; that compliment is hard-earned from someone as critical of the archive's status as of now!

-Cos

I loved it because it reminded me of Frozen.
"Do you wanna build a snowman?"
"Do you want to spar?"

Yay! It's another work from you!

Well, the plot certainly was a lot less original than Mask, but it's still fine.