Wow! This is hot and sexy, and funny too acrually (Zoro playing matchmaker). Thank you for this

Well, you did jump in the proverbial pool of orgies with a very good and nice splash!

*blushing* oh wow...that...that was so hot and sexy!

This is one of my favorite Zosan stories I've read, for many reasons. But mainly because I love your writing style and I love how you write Zoro and Sanji's relationship! Great job!

Oh wow... just... wow... *gulps* hot...!
Love it...!
really
really much...!

I've been fucked senseless by this fic...
This has got to be one of the best smut I've read in a long time.

Dear lord, this was hilarious! Thank you so much!

You just dove head first into a fucking lake that's what you did.., and I loved every moment of it.., bravo

omfg This was hot and hilarious and wow Zoro in all of this. damn... perfect.

OMG.

No seriously, holly hannah. Okay, so at first I was super confused at how a little bit of role-playing was going to turn into an orgy, but then... damn. Like, fucking DAMN! I was stunned when the marines came in, but then they... and Zoro just... and Sanji agreed and... fuck!

"Zoro mentally fist pumped; move aside Christmas, it was Valentine's Day and he was fucking cupid."

I lost it at this line. I was laughing out loud like a loon and just friggin' lost it. There is nothing not awesome/amazing about this and just, holy friggin' everything is fantastic. EVERYTHING! Then Sanji got a little bit of his fire back and taunted the marines about doing nothing but sitting around and blowing each other, perfect. There was not enough of Sanji's sass in this, but that more than made up for it. Then I got concerned about how they were going to get out of the situation, but all it took was a simple little order and bam! Marines go bye-bye.

Perfect. No other word. Well, maybe 'hot-as-fucking-hell', but I don't think that's a word. Nami's reaction was gold, too. I just love all of this. Kudos and all that, amazing! KTN

You... have broken my brain. Trying to come up with an insightful/useful/coherent review is impossible, because you know brain broken...

(Actually I was quite surprised at the Marines being so eager to join when they'd just discovered a supposed Marine captain supposedly about to rape a captive, (makes you wonder if that's something that happens aside from pirate role-play and that's a bit disturbing) but then I thought back on how the scene had to look, and more brain breakage happened, so I figured what the hell, let's just go with it.)

Not sure if I was previously using my brain for anything, I can't remember, cause it's broken...

(That's actually a compliment for you in case that was unclear)

Wow! Really, just wow. That was awesome. Thank you, you've made me speechless.

Hottest. Lemon. Ever. If that's how you write all your sex scenes, I can't wait to see the next chapters of Shackled dissimulation! ;)

this was amazing. I loved it so so much. It was hot and funny at the same time and aaah. damn.
I'm now gonna add this to my favorites *blushes fiercely*
(also, I actually don't really feel like reading new stories anymore - as I know I should be working on school stuff and can't relax enough to read anything new mostly - but the summary promised me something I would really like and damn, I wasn't disappointed the slightest :D)

Ohh you have no idea how much I loved thiss! I actually really like marine AU's, but role playing works just fine by me ;) I loved it great job you're awesome!