I read this on the train coming home yesterday and it takes the prize for being the story most likely to make me shout out in a public place. "No! Don't leave! Don't go back to Atlantis without John!" I didn't, but it was a close run thing...
Loved it!

A wonderful story (well Sheppard might disagree, LOL) Liked the idea of them getting to the wrong Atlantis at first and all the differences in the characters. All in all, you did a great job!
Thank you :)

wow can we say just in time to save him. and teyla came running back real fast good to have the whole team back together again in one reality lol :)

well sounds like thanks to radik and ronon they finally found john :)

wow at least he finally got a good drink of water but they almost got him for a late night snack

wow i hope for his sake that help gets there soon

what reality is he in his or the other lol

humm is this really his reality ? :)

wow hope sheppard turns up cause this would suck without him.

wow good luck sheppard

boy i hope the cooking is better in this reality lol :)

wow this is not good

well sounds like the team is on his side now.

hummm i wonder if sheppard will find the kid.

wow the fact that him talking to her like that was completely normal is just plain sad.