This was such a wild ride. I love it. Thanks for writing and sharing!

Wow...

I like the fact that you mentioned how Juice got his nickname, cleaver

Great story, I hope you're proud of it because it's very well done. Love the cliffhanger ending. I do think you could stand to ditch some of the ellipses... And just use commas instead. Sometimes it's a little distracting, as if the guys never actually finish what they're saying. Loved the BDSM, overall it seemed believable and added depth to the sex scenes. Looking forward to reading the sequel!

Aw, that was awesome. I figured Jax would step up. Great chapter.

Niiiice chapter. :D

Awesome that they rescued Juice and Ray both. I was hoping but you never know. And I've always been a fan of Tig (such a nutjob LOL) but this story is making me appreciate him more.

That was so sad, but Juice was so brave. I like how you portray as the heartless bastard he really is in canon. It wouldn't be realistic for him to give in too easily.

Holy crap! :D

Great chapter! I love how Tig is so possessive but turned on by the idea of hearing about Juice with other guys. Glad that the secret with Jax got worked out.

This was rough, hard to read Tig abusing Juice like that, but very realistic and well-written. I love how you're portraying Jax in this story!

Ha! I love this chapter. It totally makes sense that a guy raised in such a hyper-macho environment would have some deeply suppressed urges. Interested to see where this goes.

This was a great first chapter, if I hadn't mentioned before. :)

This was so good :) wish there were more like it

So the last chapter almost made me cry because it was so sweet Jax standing up for them at the table.
The ending to this chapter was a giant tease!
I would love love love a sequel. I wanna know what Juice's brother wants.
And I want to know how things work out with Jax and Ray.
And I would love to see some Gemma/Jax arguing over Jax liking guys and not going back to Wendy!