Reviews for THE OUTSIDERS: Book II 'Fortuna's Champion'
lexi2638 chapter 18 . 1/8/2018
This story is fabulous. Characters spot on. Great work
Crimson rose chapter 18 . 6/18/2015
This just became my favorite story ever. Toying with people's emotions is always appreciated. Now I going to have to read your other works. Sigh... that's what I get for treating myself to a good story.
Mareritt chapter 18 . 11/25/2014
This is soooo professionally written! The descriptions are so vivid that I could literally see it, feel it, and smell it.
And the whole story is so tense. Many times, with only one aptly chosen word or short, simple sentence, you managed to almost stop my heart for a sec. or quicken its beat.
And it's amazing how you perfectly interlocked the dialogues and some events from the series into this story.
You're so talented in writing :)))
HeatherJS chapter 18 . 1/19/2014
Well I thought that was a very intense story. I loved it! I like how you followed along the lines of the show but with a few twist. You had me worried there towards the end. But at least everything worked out.
Thank goodness for the epilogue. Now I don't have to wonder what happened with the trio. Amazing work. I really enjoy your stories.
Great story. Keep up the great writing! :)
xentrya chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Exceptional would be a right word for it...it's incredible how much effort you've put in writing this story:)
Whirlwind421 chapter 18 . 8/15/2012
I enjoyed that very much! Awesome!
Elana chapter 18 . 1/11/2007
In the sense of a well written story it was great. But,... there was way to much pain in this story. I dont like how it ended with Eve!I thought the whole story way to evil. I hated this storie!(In a good way. I hated what you put the characters through.)
aserene chapter 18 . 12/21/2006
that was the best story ever! You really had me going thinking Ares was going to leave Xena and they would all just die but i'm so glad it turned out this way! I really liked this story! Great job!
Bolls chapter 18 . 8/2/2006
That was amazing, i really enjoyed reading this. You captured all the characters perfectly ] it was awsome. x
Gryffindor620 chapter 18 . 6/16/2006
I love this story! I love it love it! The only thing I want is a continuation or a one-shot with Ares and Xena.

This story was awesome!

Great Chapter!

Update Soon Son!
Jade of Purple chapter 18 . 1/7/2005
I loved it, both the first part and the second one. I really beleive that you're a great writer. Keep the stories coming.
LadyKate1 chapter 18 . 11/22/2003
What a wonderful work. Beautifully written (the descriptions are vivid but never excessive), with great dialogue and excellent characterization. The Xena/Ares relationship is in some ways better than it was on the show in Season 5, and Livia finally becomes a fully three-dimensional character whose redemption makes sense. Even the minor characters such as Athena are memorable and real.

Outstanding.
Tali-Sarah chapter 18 . 11/22/2003
One word, wow! Your hard work and time have paid off and the final result is a piece of fiction that you should be utterly proud of.
fymhrisfawr chapter 5 . 3/29/2003
Oh please, update soon. Even if it's just one chapter. I know there's a lot of work elsewhere going on (shipper season 8 and all). But you can't let it stay like this. I hope.
LadyKate1 chapter 1 . 10/24/2002
Absolutely wonderful - a must-read not only for Xena/Ares fans but for anyone who likes a well-written story. Waiting impatiently for the next part. :-)
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