Your story is really awesome authorperson. I think it is kinda slow but I think it's pace fits well with the story but what do I know. Anyway Your story is awesome and you probably wont see this shameless ass kissing comment but eh. Keep writing you're a virtuoso

Gooddd luckkkk hope you move onn. Also I know exactly how that feels so I can relate to your lovelife problemm

It's ok to feel these types of emotions. We're all human and we shouldn't criticize you so harshly and at some point others have gone through this. I had a crush on this amazing guy, he was sweet, funny, he made me feel comfortable for the first time. Unfortunately, I never told him how I felt and I never saw him again because we went to different colleges. Now I can't tell you exactly how to heal from this because people have different experiences. It can either take a short time or take longer than expected. What I can tell you is that you should focus on yourself first, don't even worry about the story. You do what you gotta do in order to get yourself back up.

woah dude ... ok we understand, please be careful and take care

Next chapter please

Hey, if it makes you feel any better, I haven't updated any of my stories in months. Moving house, trying to find work, going to interviews, moving boxes around, setting up my new bedroom, sorting things out for Christmas, it's all been pretty rough for me too. You're not alone. And this chapter was pretty good too. :)

oh dude terribly sorry for your rough time

and i knew the Disney buying stuff news but i really didn't look into it but i do now and WOW

I miss this story... :(

Good story. But it starts stretching too far now. Get to the juice at once!

I'm not quite sure if that's the right order. Isn't he supposed to kiss her lips before starting to kiss her legs?

Oh my God! I'm so sorry for all that's been happening to you! It's almost unthinkable that so much is happening in one year.
Sorry for not reviewing earlier, I just got back from vacation.
I'm also sorry about embarrassing myself with that rant. It's just so rare to find stories with respect for the characters nowadays. I loved this chapter and your writing. Hope to see an update soon, but take your time.

Holy shit man. And because FanFiction will probably censor it, I'll say it again with spaces Hol man. If anyone had ever talked to me about bad luck, I would've just laughed it off, but now I think you've pretty much proved it exists. Damn. Sorry about your friend, and your dad and everything else. I know that's a lame way to put it, but I've never seen things get this bad all in one year.

About the chapter, it was really good. People are talking about Jack and Elsa's interactions, which were great yes, but my favorite parts were Jack addressing the other Guardians in his journal. Ha! Hedgehog in the toilet bowl?! What's the story behind that?

I'm very glad to see your opinions on Elsa. I agree wholeheartedly, lol! Oh and yes, that Guest was me, I thought I had signed it.

UHHHHOOOO!

What the heck are you doing in Europe?
Loved the chapter, and the interaction between Jack and Elsa

I remember one of my friends in San Francisco, his car was struck by lightning but the only serious damage was a 2 inch hole on the hood.

Oh, my...

I mean, good chapter but I'm more concerned about YOU. I'm so sorry for all the crap that's been thrown at you lately. And believe me, I know what it's like to lose someone you care about. But just remember that no matter how bad things may seem, no one is truly alone. They'll always be a way to turn things around. :)

And please take all the time you need with your next update.