Good.

lol Sneaky dwarf indeed. XD LOVE IT!

A pool of pity for thorin. Killi is a clever dog.

Oh how I wish there was more flesh to this story. I love it...but of course I'd love it even more if I could see some scenes of budding love between Bilba and Fili.
Take that Thorin PompousShield!

Loved it

As with "Play Along!", this is a very cute fic. I liked the plot-twist!

XD that was smart of Kili at the beginning of Thorin was being smart but by the end I thought he needed to lighten up.

Pftt...poor Bilbo, hope she hurt him good for that farce! At least Thorin only has grey hair too! So funny.

LOL
That's a hilarious reason for Thorin's graying hair!

Awwww! This is so...CUTE! Boys start liking girls early ;) I can just imagine little Kili XD and his poor Uncle! And your fem!Bilbo sound so sweet.
The conversation with Oin at the end was perfect!

Good fic!

Aww, I love it! And it gave me an idea for how to treat the appearance of Kiliel whenever I get to it in the fic I'm planning. Awesome! D

I love how you had Kili use his love of pranks and cleverness to show his uncle that there could be something "worse" than courting and marrying a hobbit! :) And it was perfect to have Tauriel go along with it! Poor Bilbo's reaction at first when she had helped Thorin in to see his nephews though.

Perfectly lovely!

"the dwarven king's majestic hair" Haha. I liked this one a lot. And you actually had a story behind it - not just either (a) Kili was a flirt from the start or (b) Thorin's hair is greying. They went together perfectly and I loved it!
:)