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Aww, I'm glad I inspired you for this chapter! :D
Again, well-written, but their deaths made sad! However, I am intrigued by this whole Wish Granter business and their relevance to InuYasha (although it's starting to be seen)! Very unique story so far. Don't lose the inspiration to keep writing ;)

One suggestions, try writing in past tense it will make the story flow better

Hmmm, I see potential for this! Hope you update soon :)

Update soon

I am interested do cute but sad for her real mom can't wait for the next chapter

Ah you have re write this story. No wonder this sounds familiar to me. Update soon. I cant wait to read more.

So what happens next?

Interesting story. I look forward to see how you develop this story further.