Reviews for The End of the Beginning, arc 2: Inferno
SunMoonKitsune chapter 93 . 5/9
Omg yaaay I'm so glad you're coming back, and wish you the best health to come back sooner what ever it is that ails you.
Yaana chapter 93 . 2/3
Happy to hear you're still around! Re-read both stories a few weeks ago or so, would be fantastic to read the complete story but if it doesn't get completed it will still be among my favourites by how it grabs at your feelings. When Mephisto played Shiro I could really feel a pitch black pit in my stomach, felt as sickening as one would imagine for Shiro. It's amazing how your writing touch the reader.
o0Kairi0o chapter 93 . 2/2
DIMWIT! It’s nice to see you update even a PSA, my heart leaps with joy whenever I see your name, it’s always a pleasure to see you still around. I hope you’re well, or at least on the road to getting there, I’m in the middle of battling my own demons and I know the road is long and hard, know I, and everyone else here are here, waiting for you to return, even 5–nay, ten— years into the future.

I hope to see you pop by whenever you have the energy for it, whenever that is!

-Ri
You know who chapter 93 . 2/2
YOU. SNEAK.
On purpose, I bet. No careful deliberation.
A moment of Mephistophelish philosophy punched online by a moment of sheer Shiroish head-first fuckitall.
But lords is it nice to hear them speak through you again.
You should do Shiroish head-first fuckitalls more often :p
amethystfirechik chapter 93 . 2/1
I'm glad to see you're still alive. I've missed your stories. You're one of the few authors I always look forward to seeing an update from. I love how you would research real historical events and incorporate them into your story. It takes real talent and dedication from someone who will not gain much by doing so. I still think you could publish your work and make money out of it. I would definitely buy. I really do hope things get better for you. I don't know what you're going through, but maybe you just need to change your environment and restart a new to progress forward. Not that I'm trying to tell what to do, but I've found it has helped me. Even if you never finish this story, I'll be happy with what you have presented to us. Now I'll be be off re-reading your work.
exorpriest chapter 93 . 2/1
good to see you again :)
Rinstail chapter 93 . 2/1
Hey of course there are still people looking forwards to your story! I am used to waiting a long time - even if the story is never finished, I'll be happy rereading the amazing chapters you have already written
FuturisticVampire chapter 92 . 11/26/2019
I FUCKING LOVE THIS HOLY SHIT NO JESUS CHRIST ITS AWESOME
Eos chapter 92 . 9/15/2019
I bloody love your story, its the first one in many years that has gotten me so hooked I've not been able to stop reading. I'm truly devastated I've reached the end of the published story and I am eagerly awaiting more! I am also desperately waiting for more shiro sammy interactions. Even if it's just another dream. extra points if like the other dream.
Swift-Star9 chapter 92 . 12/6/2018
Oooh, that sweet, sweet tension between Shiro and Luka. Look forward to seeing that resolve. You've well conveyed the sense of displacement that comes with moving to a new place. How peculiarly kind of Samael to give Shiro some manga. I guess any reminder of home, no matter how close to the heart, is a beacon of normality. Thanks for the new chapter!
Fireminer chapter 92 . 12/5/2018
Is the post office service in the Vatican that great?

Anyway, this chapter reminds me of why I like your stories very much: Weird dialogues that actually feel real thanks to the natural delivery and historical cues. Keep up the good work!

Say, have you ever thought about demons being affected differently because of different rituals from diffirent cultures/religions? It may make for an interesting situation.
Rieska chapter 90 . 7/23/2018
I knew he would tell about about the tengu incident! I was worried if all the good stories were going to be just confidential. Now I feel like I need to read it again. And all the other stories! So! Good! I think I might save this chapter separately to recommend it to people.
Anon A. Mauze chapter 46 . 7/16/2018
According to a quick Google search 1976's Miss New Zealand was Janey Kingscote.
Guest chapter 91 . 6/30/2018
Nooo I caught up! *Prepares self for a long wait*
Jengurl24 chapter 21 . 6/25/2018
Can I just say your command of rhyme and meter leaves me in awe? I also appreciated that little nod to Mephisto's tendency to break the 4th wall and speak directly to the audience, lol. I'm not sure if that was what you intended but I'm pretending his bouts of spontaneous verse was meant for more than just Shiro's listening pleasure, because I quite enjoyed it! As always.
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