love ur story

This was an interesting story! It kinda fell apart at the end and listening to you talk science was painful, but it pretty good otherwise. Though seeing weird British phrases coming from the Americans was rather grating.

fucking amazing

Hi!
I love your story concept, but I must say that you need an editor.
There are mistakes of all types littered throughout your story.
I really enjoy the concept and basic plot which is why I kept reading until chapter 18. However, the mistakes are rather jarring: they pull me from your story's world and make understanding your story difficult.

Please find an editor to go through your work and make it as good as your ideas deserve!

I have read both this story and the sequel many times and love them both so thank you.

Awesome story.

Just when I thought it couldn't get anymore perfect, I find out there's a sequel! Excuse me as I go Bing read the fuck out of that.

Thank you

Aw sad

Extremist is a virus, not a drug

Aw Jarvis is a good friend

18 still but it could be set up so you inherit multiple things at different times so 18, 21, 30, and so on.

I think you got it done perfectly. And if anyone says that they could have reacted different,y you can blame it on shock from meeting your only family member who you didn’t know existed or meeting your hero from childhood who is related to you.

I think your doing pretty good geographical wise. And even if you don’t know much, there’s always the internet!

i fucking hate gwen stacy or the goddamn black cat! you want to talk about toxic charecter these two fuckingtake the cake!