| Reviews for Indecent Proposal |
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Guest chapter 7 . 12/22/2018 Esto fue...Me quedé sin palabras en el buen sentido. Lelouch pensó en la comodidad de suzaku. Es tan perfecto que no me alcanzan las palabras . Ojala pudiera leer más de estos fics Donde se ponen todas las emociones pero con todo se perdonan a y dejan de decir mentiras |
harley.quinnkaos chapter 7 . 7/24/2018 I LOVED THIS! awesome fic, sexy as hell and well written |
LampShader chapter 7 . 8/20/2017 This was actually really fucking good. Like all my kinks with none of the apologism and a good plot. Thanks for posting. |
aocchi chapter 7 . 7/26/2015 I actually don't really read smut. But since I've read (and loved) a few of your other stories, I decided to give this a try. As always, your story didn't disappoint me, and you managed to surprise me with the ending. I loved the idea that Lelouch was actually doing all of that for Suzaku ('cause yeah, Lelouch cares for Suzaku IS canon) and I agree with you, Euphy is truly brilliant. Overall, I really enjoyed this story. Good job! |
EternalFalsity chapter 7 . 1/7/2015 Lelouch crying is always touching, it's nice how you can tell in this story how important Suzaku is to him. I'm glad Suzaku called him out on his coercion though, as it really wasn't "consensual" no matter how Lelouch tried to justfiy it. Euphy's the best, I really like her character. & I think it definitely does fit the topic of fictional BDSM, as real life BDSM consent is a big deal. But since it's a story, the lines become much more flexible. Also throughout the story I also questioned if it was "right" for Suzaku to be with Zero and Lelouch, when he didn't know the identity of Zero. But then again, Lelouch did agree that it was okay for Zero to have him 1/7 days, so I don't feel he betrayed Lelouch. This was a great read, thanks for writing it! |
EternalFalsity chapter 6 . 1/7/2015 Ahhh, what a genius idea. Having them kiss, and allowing Suzaku to trap Lelouch. Lelouche's obssession with the pictures and showing off Suzaku's body is also adorable |
EternalFalsity chapter 4 . 1/7/2015 It's nice to have Suzaku on bottom, and doing all these kinky things wih Zero. I also like how he develops a relationship with Lelouch too, which of course is ironic. I loved the comparison to dating Lelouch being more like a courtship, while with Zero it was always some new/exciting experience. |
EternalFalsity chapter 2 . 1/7/2015 Love how Suzaku wanted to return the favor, and I like how the more they have sexual relations, the more they fall deeper for each other. Mainly Suzaku falling for "Zero", because Lelouche is already head-over-heels for Suzaku in this story. |
EternalFalsity chapter 1 . 1/7/2015 I like how the dub-con is written, especially where even though it certainly isn't 100% consensual, it's still gentle and caring. It was funny was Suzaku questioned if Lelouch wanted him to say "More? , Harder?". Suzaku's always just so, sweet and "innocent" and I love how you portray him. |
Guest chapter 7 . 4/20/2014 ... Firstly, it is still BDSM, even if they have not explicitly gone over limits. As long as the sub is in a position where they can refuse the scene, then that is fine. (Or if they go for a harder scene, where there is no safe word, then clear limits should be negotiated prior to it.) Considering that this is mostly soft BDSM... or more like B with a little bit of DS, it is not all that necessary to have clear limits. (It's not like it is sexual cannibalism or something like that). I wouldn't label it infidelity... I'm sure that prostitutes have boyfriends/girlfriends, and as long as their partner is aware of it... it is in this case, a partially open relationship. And yes, Suzaku does not have Stockholm Syndrome. (I do agree with you about Euphemia, she is brilliant :) ) |
xSonya chapter 7 . 3/15/2014 Aww I loved it! X.x when lelouch cried *sobs* his pain... *huggles him tightly* Thanks for bestowing us with this beautiful, and wonderfully written fic It was greatly enjoyable, i'd most certainly love to read more of this couple from you! Great work |
xSonya chapter 6 . 3/15/2014 Aaaaah, the tension is clawing at me like crazy! I cant wait to see how this unfolds in the final chapter although i'm a little sad i've reached the end of this awesome fic xD |
xSonya chapter 5 . 3/15/2014 Haha, i really can't get used to that innocent side of lelouch xD i was totally expecting suzaku to totally destroy him in the bedroom aha but it was the other way around xD *blushes* x.x that was so satisfying I'm really anxious for suzakus reaction when he finds outx.x i know how stubborn the damn guy is, i just siaosmfjeiwkjf damn it xD |
xSonya chapter 3 . 3/15/2014 things just became 10 times more immensely interesting! XD so curious xdkfer,dsaidjfhirwakjshufriukmecudf *more fangirl spazzing* haha |
xSonya chapter 2 . 3/15/2014 I don't know who to feel more sorry for, lelouch becuase he wants it so bad, or suzaku who's only thinking of others x.x *huggles suzaku* poor baby |