I enjoyed the story up until the uncompleted part. Hoping it gets finished. Read several stories on here and they are really good but always unfinished which sucks.

I wouldn't say you screwed up at all, in fact I love this story! And I went to look for the rewrite and you've just written 3 chapters, I wish you continue because this story is unique, very well written and id love to read till the end, sooooooo please continue?

It was a really interesting story, I would have liked longer chapters but you did mention you had some problems while writing I hope you continue ;) I want to know how everything unveils :)

this is cool

Guess who's still watching every move of yours? Me! I completely understand the reasoning behind the rewrite.
I will read that fanfic. too. Have a nice day pickles

I thought the story was doing good until u gave katara the dreams if u had got them together in some intresting way then u could've rode the assassin plot line to the very end into a solid story but other then that this wasn't the greatest story but not a bad one either keep that in mind if u do rewrite which I hope u do

:'(. I completely understand how u feel and I can't blame you. Although I thought you were mostly fine when it came to plot holes... I was missing this story a lot and I am happy that you at least told us your decision.

I do want to say your writing was excellent and even though the story is over, I know that there will always be even better work coming from your profile!

Good luck with life, and I hope that I will find a new story on your page in the near future. :)

True... I didn't remember that part at 5 AM when I was reading it (this is a reply to the authors note in the beginning)

If you ever stop updating this story, I'll hunt you down. Seriously.

Okay this chapter was good: I don't think that spirits couldn't cross to the mortal world since Hei Bai crossed it too and abducted people.
Ending was really interesting and it was a really good idea to write that sentence without spaces because it resembles Sokka really well.

This story just keeps getting better! :)

I am a little scared though because you kept talking about how aang was going to suffer but nothing really major happened this chapter... So I'm guessing that Aang is getting himself in deep trouble for later...

Great chapter though! I laughed so hard when Aang was trying to figure out how he got the diary!

Oh and trust me. People are reading this! This is too good not to read... ;)

Interesting plot twist! I must say that finally knowing her dream has really helped clear things up. The fact that there are two main antagonists really adds more suspense. ;) really good chapter!

Sorry it took so long for me to review...

This chapter was really interesting: Dream part very good but too long (tough I don't know if it is really too long... like I still can't decide) "Normal" part really good, tough I think Katara wouldn't just ignore Aang still (Like in the episode where Katara decided not to go visit her FATHER and go with Aang instead.
Together: Beautiful
And just so you know I'm still the same guy so I'm still a fanboy of this story I'm just trying to be more productive :D

Review time: Now the lengths were perfect just enough to keep many people interested in the Rising Phoenix group, the dream part was really good my personal "favourite" part in it was when Katara didn't looked in the dark room because that felt so natural, not like in a lot of stories where they go in and ghosts and stuff (that sounded weirder when I wrote it down) . Back to the review: One thing that felt a little unnatural was when she rushed to the door to open it, but one single word changed her, and yes I know this is 6 years later but look at the last episode of Book 2 (Where Aang get's shot by a lightning bolt) Katara is almost close to an emotional breakdown... at least the fact she almost never left his side when he was unconscious only in the last 3 days before he woke up.
Together: Great chapter with few mistakes.

I sware. If you stop writing this I will hunt you down...

Really good chapter. I really liked the end... It sounds bad because katara is all messed up but still... :) the direction is really interesting. And I like the way you are handling everyone's emotions.

Keep writing this awesome sauce!