This is really good! (:

Love that last comment from Edmund.

This was very well done. I enjoyed the writing; the characterization was also spot-on, and the dialogue flowed nicely. Edmund did a fantastic job cheering Eustace up.

Thanks for posting this!

Good story.

Lovely! Great to read something thoughtful and well-written on here - too little of it I'm afraid!
Thanks :)

Edmund the dragon and Eustace the dragon slayer, that was a twist I like it very much. Wonders if Eustace fully realises how much he been changed by Aslan and Narnia. Plus the added bonus that Edmund don't think he a thoughtless brat. Both have an interesting journey in their relationship as cousins and dare I say as warriors of Narnia.

Dear Ali,

Great little oneshot, I especially liked the end and the references to Eustace's dragon. :) I think this was a conversation that needed to happen. I'm glad you wrote it! Well done.
-Samuel