this is sooo good pls make a sequel

I'm really interested in the sequel! And I enjoy the way the characters all are in this fic. I hope you haven't stopped writing, if you did, please return and I'll throw a virtual party for you because I need conclusion to this story :D

I just kind of found myself burning through the last ten chapters to reach the end of it. I found the pacing odd since the beginning moved slowly but then shit hit the fan and then back to slow pacing again.

While I love your writing style and the premise of your story, I have to stop reading. I know that it's completed, but the one problem I have with your story is that Katara has so many conflicting emotions and feelings that it's almost like she has situational Multi-Personality Disorder. One moment, she's embarrassed and scared, and can't hear orders out of fear like a scared little girl. The next, she's cold and calculating as she watches the fire lord. Then, she's raging and has anger management when dealing with Kol. While none of these three cause a problem on their own, having all three of them together makes the story feel a little disjointed to me, and Katara comes out with a cluttered personality that is so fake because it just changes to fit the situation. After reading through only 13 chapters I see this trend over and over, and I just don't want to continue. I hope your sequal does eventually address this issue.

I am so loving this story! It makes me a little upset when people push you about when Zutara is going to happen. For me personally I would rather have a heart warming, exciting, well thought out story with Zutara in it as opposed to just Zutara fluff! Anyway on to the next chapters!

Ohh what a great intro chapter! I am so excited for this story! Thanks for uploading )

To be honest, I thought Zuko would at least visit her once, like on her birthday or something. But I really love how you developed this story, and the progression of Katara's relationship with everyone else. Please upload the sequel asap! And post a reminder in this story about the sequel:) THANK YOU

I KNEW IT! I knew it was azula. can't wait to read more of this. this was great

NOOOOO HARU!
I have to say that was one unexpected death, but no one can live forever right?
Anyway, I don't think anything should be changed, except that Katara is supposed to be beautiful (It still bothers me that people have told her she's ugly and Zuko thought a sweaty Katara was "unattractive" O_o) BUT hey! This isn't my story and I have to congratulate you. You turned an cliche plot into something so much more, I LOVED IT.
Well done with this story! I can't wait for the sequel :D

...I CAN'T WAIT A MONTH *sobs uncontrollably* I honestly thought Zuko was going to catch them just as the boat leaves, unable to stop them but seeing Katara run off with Jet (*cough cough* maybe a little jealous) and seeing her wretched state and the anguished look in her eyes. Then he would be too stunned to chase after her or something and then he would see her silhouette fade into the distance...but that's the cliché ending AND OH MY GOD I LOVE YOURS (although it's a cliffhanger T.T). It shows how much suffering she goes through, and how she grows from it instead of wallowing in her misery. I also like (well maybe not like but found it well written) how you killed off Haru. In a war you loose people, sometimes people who are close to you. And sometimes you don't make your amends before you loose them. Many writers tend to forget this and either completely don't kill off any characters or let them have those famous last words or something. I like that there was none of that. Life is not always what you hope for and sometimes there will be things that you regret that you can't fix. I really like how you show all this and this story is really amazing. I can't wait till your sequel (like seriously. how about maybe half a month instead of a month? XD).

Ichigo

OMG THIS STORY IS AMAZING! I really love the plot and the divergent weaved into and how well you developed Zuko and Katara's relationship. To be frank I thought this would be another 'why i just met you and now I love you' stories but decided to give it a go anyways...AND I LOVE IT. They don't just warm up to each other immediately, Katara is cold and hateful to him at first but then she gets to know him and slowly starts to warm up to him...it's so amazing. Also i love Katara's tougher character in this story, it really gives a perspective on how she would've turned out like if she had chosen a different way of dealing after her mothers death. Oh and her rebellious streak and toughness is awesome, finally, I'm so tired of stories where the girl Just lets herself get walked all over. And I have no idea why but everyone seems to write Katara in that way. Overall, amazing story, i'm sorry I didn't review at every chapter but I was too engrossed *-* also sorry for lumping everything here and I have no idea of you're reading this but YOU'ER AN AWESOME WRITER AND I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON!

Ichigo

hmmm, interesting. can;t wait

Wow... Just wow... This story is so amazing! It draws me in and I need to know what will happen! I need an update soon!

Ugh I wanna punch zuko in the face! you are seriously good at making me hate him! Can't wait for the next one!

Love it