Can I just say how happy I am that you've decided to continue this story again? Because I started following it a while ago even though it looked like you'd abandoned it at the time.

Anyway, I love how seamlessly you've managed to insert the soul eater characters into skyrim, and somehow have them fit so naturally that it makes the characters from the original game seem weird in comparison.

Ooohhhhh!
OuO

'Like literally all the rest of Skyrim, it was built to be intimidating.' True dat.

And here we go, Bleak Falls Barrow! I'm definitely looking forward to whatever happens next.

I feel like I'm repeating myself, but I do so love the way you've transplanted all the Soul Eater characters into Tamriel.

I thought that was Blair back in Riverwood and I was right! Ha! I also really appreciate the realistic details and explanations of the forge and the various workstations - even translating the game mechanics into something easy to understand, like the iron battleaxe being easy to sharpen (can be done even with a skill of 15).

Don't have much to say here, but Spirit seems pretty IC. I like how well you translated him to Tamriel. I suppose this means Adrianne doesn't exist in this fic? *shrugs* In crossovers you have to pick and choose what to keep and what not to.

Ugh, torture rooms are always nasty, no matter where you find them. Sorry, Maka, but I'm pretty sure Tullius knows about it all and appealing in Solitude won't change matters one bit. Theories are nice but reality is ugly.

I always just sneak past the bear, too. Partially because she doesn't actively attack, yes, and partially because I get enough of bears just trying to walk around the Rift. Argh.

Ooh, a soul gem. That's a good explanation for his name. I suppose he could have partially soul-trapped himself, like you have to do if you're going to the Soul Cairn without being a vampire. Side question: are you gonna cover any of the DLC quests (Dragonborn, Dawnguard)? Could be pretty cool. Then again, the main quest is enough to cover on its own, let alone in a crossover.

GO TO SOVNGARDE AND CLEAN UNHOLY PRIVIES TOGETHER. Oh my gosh. I love your writing so much. The snark is simply beautiful.

I'd like to think that Ulfric would actually know what Alduin means and be less dismissive, but it's equally valid that he's trying to keep his already terrified men from absolutely panicking, so I'll go with that for the moment.

I suppose you're doing more of an Imperial playthrough. Fair enough. Just please don't make the Stormcloaks into racist stereotypes, because there's so much more to them than that. *cringes at the thought of other fics I've seen*

Hey, fellow Skyrim addicts unite! XD Promising premise you've got here and pretty darn good writing, so I'll read on further.

I love Ralof, so the nickname of 'Cheap Armor' for him gave me a chuckle. Alas, poor Lokir. He didn't make it yet again. Glitches where he actually gets away are always so amusing.

Also, may I say that I really like the way you almost, but not quite, followed the dialogue of the intro? You gave it a little bit more flavoring and a more natural diction. It reads really well and sounds convincing, without being slavishly faithful to the game.

I don't what I was expecting when I started this story but I know one thing now and that is that this story is great in almost every aspect.

Short but sweet.

I'm not quite sure if I should laugh, be shocked or what that Soul was prostituting himself to get help from Maka and the fact that she agreed to it... WOW XD
Hehe they mke such an adorable pair even if I do feel Maka is very rapey for making him agree to repay her with his body

Last chapter you said, "raised" when I think you meant, "razed" and this one you called the Orismer High Elves when that's the name for Orcs. The Altmer are the High Elves
Damn, I'm feeling really bad for Soul at this point as if canon Skyrim isn't confusing enough for the protagonist he has to deal with a loss of memory, his memory being dangled in his face by an incredibly overbearing little girl and all of her many quirky and intense friends...

So happy to see you and your stories back!