| Reviews for Rebirth Day |
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Steefwaterbutter chapter 1 . 1/20/2019 That ending though... AWWWWWWW! SO CUTE. XD |
6GunSally chapter 1 . 7/10/2015 YES I LIKE IT! It's awesome! I love the beginning the most, not very many stories explore Phoenix and Trucy immediately following him being disbarred. The part with him berating himself and struggling to come to terms with he new situation was very emotional and well done. Then suddenly IRIS! Overall, great story. I really think it has the potential to be something bigger. Look forward to more! |
teamBLAZE chapter 1 . 5/18/2014 I would like to say good job with portraying Phoenix's emotions well-especially the scene where he releases his pent-up feelings on his loss of duty. A thumbs-up for you, then. :D |
Rubikcube124 chapter 1 . 4/23/2014 I enjoyed that! Nice job! I really liked how you wrote the inner turmoil that Phoenix was going through in the beginning. It added some nice depth. I also really liked the pep-talk that Iris gave to Phoenix. I'm not going to deny it though, I felt a little bad for Edgeworth at the end... Seeing two people kiss is just too much for that poor man! :) |
MidnightEclipsed chapter 1 . 4/23/2014 Luv luv luv, la la luv... I la la luv this! |
RandomReviews chapter 1 . 3/28/2014 XD Instead of peeping Tom... Here comes... Peeping Trucy! XD |
Geoutlit chapter 1 . 2/11/2014 Love the story and I got kick out of the ending. Keep up the good work. |
Celestia's Paladin chapter 1 . 2/10/2014 Love it. She will help him, and he will help her. |
wesst1 chapter 1 . 2/4/2014 I like this story because I love the pairing. Hopefully Iris will be back in future installments, the kids at the Wright Anything Agency need a new mommy, to paraphrase Trucy. |
PokemonFreak90 chapter 1 . 2/1/2014 "If he saw another coffee cup again it would probably be too soon." Is Phoenix remembering the time that Godot threw his coffee at his head? That's a pretty funny reference! This was a nice, emotional one-shot and I love seeing Iris with Phoenix, a pairing that sadly doesn't get enough recognition. |
Reviewer chapter 1 . 1/27/2014 I really liked that. I am a big fan of Phoenix/Iris, so it makes me happy to see new stories for them. They don't come much though... sadly... Anyway, that was very good and it was also well written. It's great that your first story is Phoenix and Iris! Thank you for writing this! |
Animesrock145 chapter 1 . 1/27/2014 I really love this story. Near the end, you forgot to capitalize Phoenix at one point, but that's no biggie. I liked Trucy at the end. Didn't expect Phoenix to break out at her like that though. Anyways, I liked this story. Really good for your first fic. I hope to see more from you! |
White Weasel chapter 1 . 1/27/2014 I really liked this. It's a good first story. Tword the end you kept forgetting to capitalize Phoenix, but that's prpbably the only thing grammar-wise. I though the ending was pretty funny with Trucy. The story's pretty serious until that happened. Anyways, good job. I hope to see more from you in the future. |