Reviews for Dark Desires
marcinkrycki2314 chapter 1 . 5/19
Starting hogwart at 16 and graduating at 23? It never worked...
alexbarnes806 chapter 5 . 4/11
please continue
the-wholived chapter 5 . 8/28/2019
Please add more to this story!
tammgrogan chapter 1 . 4/26/2019
I just wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying reading your Amazing story. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it.
hpf2114 chapter 5 . 11/1/2018
You should come back to this one. Dam good.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/25/2018
Know you said Harry is "evil" in this story, but you could always redirect that into him NTR'ing jackasses like Draco.

One of Nidoranduran's stories over at Hentai Foundry has Draco betting Pansy over a duel with Harry and the latter working her over so well, she goes Draco who? at the end of that chapter.

Pity the commissioner didn't have any further ideas for her, as it was a perfect setup for character development.

Moving her from an early days BtVS Cordelia Chase to a AtS Pre-Jasmine possession one. Only a Grade A Bitch to those who cross the line.

Anyway, seeing how Harry is far more Tom's heir than Draco, you could always demonstrate Harry's "evil" by completely mentally destroying Draco.

Losing Pansy to Harry.
Losing the other attractive girls in Slytherin to him.
Losing his mother to Harry.
Losing the position as Tom's heir to him.

Should be enough to shatter the blithering plonker.

And Tom:s position isn't completely unreasonable, wanting to take over the world to prevent WW3 from happening.

There is a small amount of nobility in that thought.
Especially, when you consider how much more potent modern weapons are.

Plus, there's the small matter of rapid technology development and Pure Blood refusal to adapt.

Considering the number of mobile phones around with cameras in our day and age.

How long would it be before a case of Muggle Baiting got Live Streamed across the Net, thus shattering the Statute?

The unwillingness to change and superiority/inferiority complex of the BWW Pure Blood movement would damn the entire wizarding world across the globe.

And the Old Wether has his own issues, which prevent him from doing anything about the problem.

So "evil" Harry taking over the world, might just be the only way to "save" damn near everyone.

Something to consider.

Kinda like Souen11's short story 6-8 chapters I think it was), that has Harry going dark after Hermione joins Ron in abandoning him during the Horcrux hunt.

A Harry/Tonks/Fleur/OC pairing.

Could Harry be blamed for the anti-magic Mundane stance in that universe?

Yes.

BUT it was pretty inevitable anyway. All he did was go for the Israel scenario to at least have a safe refuge for those fleeing persecution.

Something they would've lacked otherwise.

So it's damned if you do, damned if you don't.

Only other option is pulling a "Wizards Fall" by "Bobmin356" by expanding an island into the size of a continent and then hiding it away.

Oh and lest I forget, could the Dairy fragment and the part in Harry be merged and create a whole Tom and allow for a physical form?

Or could Harry absorb it and making his core even bigger?
DarkLord0012 chapter 5 . 4/10/2018
Really love this story so far hope you update soon can't wait to read what happens next
Zuulne chapter 5 . 3/5/2018
More please really enjoying the direction that Harry is going. Can't wait for the chaos that's going to happen when Harry gets to Hogwarts for the first time and how the girls who were effected by the ritual are going to react to his presence
JohnMonty chapter 5 . 2/17/2018
Brilliant story realy hope that you update and continue writing
daniel2610994 chapter 5 . 6/20/2017
Damn man harry really corrupted hermione xD and now with the ritual he will have a pair of twins hehe I bet he already did twins before because well he is harry xD but this will be his first magical twins, and its only the beginning of the many girls who will go crazy for him, now I can't believe I will say this but this dumbledore its pretty cool hehe and quite funny so I guess I won't get the chance to call him dumbo here :'v you menster xD anyway it looks like remus had a crush on lily if that last sentence is something to go by :v but then again lily was fucking gorgeous so no surpise there its actually quite the shame harry can't enjoy lily like his other girls man hut now that cho is open to be with girls then things will go really smoothly for harry hehe so much I wish draco was a girl because being toms heir that would have helped harry quite a lot after all narcissa is dead gorgeous so her daughter would be too and harry would enjoy taking narcissa and her daughter at the same time hehe and it would be funny because harry could mess with tom fucking his daughter xD damn that seems really hot :v anyway great story man really hot and a great read.
daniel2610994 chapter 4 . 6/20/2017
Holly shit thungs are going really fast xD but its for the best because this way harry will have thewhole third yeard to do wathever he wants, maybe even have the tri wizard tournament before so he can have fleur and gabrielle a year earlier hehe and I think harry is doing things right after all a woman in love is a woman who doesn't ask many quiestion of there is the possibilitty her lover would get mad at her now a woman in love really hard like cho will be is a woman that will do everything harry wants as long as he is happy with her so that way harry will be their master and they will not even notice xD and what could be better than harry taking all the hot virgins for himself, thatway the only love they will know is the one harry “gives" them hehe a perfect way to control them if you like and by the way I think fleur is a 100% virgin because I just can't see her letting a guy who can't even talk to her kiss her even less have sex with him so yeah :v
daniel2610994 chapter 3 . 6/20/2017
Damn this chapter was hot too :v and now that harry has made the ritual using a virgin as sacrifice, a sacrifice I am sure a lot of girls will want to be xD he is gonna become even more awesome man, now the only thing man that put me off a little was that harry already met hermione, oh and he met her really good but I think he might have made her a little slutty :v but I have to admit the hermione sandwich sounds really good hehe and damn you luna you made that useless jealous worst friend ever ron into someone totally different :'v now I don't know if I will be able to bash him and that hurts
daniel2610994 chapter 2 . 6/19/2017
Damn man harry is the embodiment of cunning xD he will definitely take over the world and they won't even notice haha but harry is thinking big and in the future because he bought the brothel, and that alone will give him a lot of money specially if he tells wizards about it anyway its great that harry will be able to perform the rital witouth making people raise eyebrows and he will become even stronger, in other things its good to see tom learned the error of his way and now he and harry will take over the world legally xD and when their souls finally merge they will be unstoppable hehe now I have to admit I was thinking harry could corrupt rita and make her write good things about him but now she is with that other guy, at least for now.
daniel2610994 chapter 1 . 6/19/2017
Lol that was definitely a change from the dark garry stories I have read but it was good still and I liked it quite a lot, but like I told you it really weirds me out that harry shares his girls with dudley...or any guy for that matter but I guess its kinda hot jus please don't tell me he will share with that useless ron or neville because then it will be very tempting to stop reading then and there :v
ElDaniWar chapter 3 . 3/8/2017
The goblin realize the soul of Tom but the aurors do not?
That cost an oath...
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