| Reviews for John's Past |
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   Simplyzutarabonnie chapter 2 . 1/12/2019 Awwwwwwww, |
| FalconRukichi chapter 1 . 2/21/2014 No critique but appreciated for this good short story. |
| lovemboth chapter 1 . 2/16/2014 So glad to see your version of the picture. I always felt the show should have addressed it and they didn't which was pathetic. You wrote it beautifully. |
| jakela chapter 1 . 1/26/2014 Another nice chapter in the slow evolution of their relationship - great work, OO! |
| J2CaReese chapter 1 . 1/25/2014 I just finished the 3 chapters of your series of plots holes. I like your descriotin the slow evolution of their declaration of mutual love. No 2 is still sure that the other could love. But tentative signs that either occur by words or gestures make it inevitable that they realize they both love very deeply. I look forward to read more. Thank you to you and all the authors to continue to live our CAREESE. |
| mschessplayer chapter 1 . 1/25/2014 Well thought out and very descriptive & true of their characters. We all need all need somebody to lean on. I'm glad they have one another in fanfic. |
| 007Renji chapter 1 . 1/24/2014 Wow that was great and interest chapter, I wish we can see this on the show. |
| crypticnotions chapter 1 . 1/24/2014 This is so lovely. It's so them and it strikes just the right tone of serious, playful, thoughtful. You are definitely becoming one of my favorite Careese writers. |
| stlouiegal chapter 1 . 1/24/2014 What a nice story. Joss did make the right decision to give john the picture. John has shown joss that he has gotten over a lot. He's not the same man that joss meet years ago. He's over Jessica's death. To see that picture didn't hurt. He was glad to see it. Glad to have it. He wasn't mad at joss. But thankful for her. I enjoy reading how their friendship has grown. How close they have come to be with each other. Great chapter. |
| Kayla2 chapter 1 . 1/24/2014 I love the plot holes series because these were the questions I wanted to see answered. You did a wonderful job on this. I love it. |
| Dutchie chapter 1 . 1/24/2014 Thank you for this wonderful story. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/24/2014 This was really good. Those sorry show runners should have come to you for advice on how to fill in their own plot hole. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us and long live Careese! |
| kaydimz chapter 1 . 1/24/2014 I love this series. |
| Jhill88 chapter 1 . 1/23/2014 Soooo I'm all giddy enjoying the plot holes that's been answered so far. I sooo hate how they left all the plot holes open. Andddd just my usually fangirl over the cuteness that is John and Joss. Wonderful story |
| carolinagirl919 chapter 1 . 1/23/2014 Great job OO! I really liked what you did here. This felt very in character to me and I thought it was pitch perfect. |
