Absolutely fantastic!
Aside from the Doctor Who reference I just put in, because I noticed yours, this is a really dang good one shot.
Nice work! :D

Well, Batpuddingman, thank you for the feedback. I actually do read my stories back through before I post them. Honestly, I didn't see anything wrong with it. Like I said, I dreamt the whole thing... Except in my dream, the secret tunnel was underneath a merry-go-round in the school, and I thought "Well, that wouldn't make sense," so I did this instead.

Still wondering how on Earth what I did made any sense anyway, but it seemed right at the time.

Your story had an interesting premise with Luke and Flora in the play. And you did well with the romance in the beginning however you had a lack of detail when transitioning from place to place. Im mainly refering to the tunnel that led them to the auditorium, it came out of nowhere and confused me. One last thing is that the entire fair was unneccesary and really the story would have progressed mpre smoothly without it. But anyways you did a good job but i urge you to read over your stories in the future and make sure enough detail is given to the reader and that the story flows smoothly. -Batman out

I may not own a professor Layton game, but this fanfic gives me 100 percent reason to buy one. They always seemed interesting. Sure, it may not be in the game (I got let down like that the first fanfic I ever read) but i still want it! If a story can inspire someone to get the game, I have to rate it 10/5

AKA it's too good.

This was frickin amazing. :) This was the best thing ive read about lukexflora in forever

Here it is.

Perfect Doctor Who reference and great, adorable story.

This is one of the sweetest stories I've ever read :)

This was brilliant, and I could feel the awkwardness and fluffiness as well. I could see Flora and Luke performing in a play, and I'm excited to see more.

Cute! :D
Out of curiosity, how would this have gone if you hadn't made it romance?

Also, if you'd like a little writing advice, try using different words to describe the same thing. Like the biscuits. You could call them "the warm pastries" or treats, or something similar. See what I mean?

Overall, it was a very sweet story. Keep writing! :)