Reviews for Missing Piece
Ashena-Iulik chapter 9 . 2/7/2017
Oh I am glad you came back to the fic ;) I can't wait to see more of the story but maybe Jenny won't be shot again
TimeturnerJasmy chapter 8 . 7/23/2015
Good job, I love how you portrayed the darker side of the Doctor. Most people can't write that part of his very convincingly, but you were spot on!
I'll keep this in my Alerts and hope you are still going to continue it.
Guest chapter 8 . 4/12/2015
Awesome.
Loves to read books chapter 7 . 10/4/2014
This is a great story. Update soon. ;)
Larissaclark chapter 7 . 9/15/2014
I moved my mouse to click the next chapter button, but then there wa r. HOW COULD YOU LEAVE THE CHAPTER LIKE THIS AHHHHHHHH.

Also yes, very good. I am pleased and am very much so looking forward to seeing an update whenever you get around to it.

I don't think you describe quite enough- there's a lot of things left to the imagination that shouldn't be, and the pace is rather fast. However, the plot is great, and you've got a rather nice hold on the characters, and your lore is good. Overall, 7/10.
Duchess67 chapter 7 . 8/29/2014
Well I hope they're willing to listen, but I suspect that general will stab his commander in the back and take over, dooming all of his people.
Chinagirl18 chapter 7 . 8/27/2014
Are you using a compatible document to upload onto Fanfiction? The text is overlapping in this chapter, which makes it - as you can imagine - rather challenging to read. Hope this gets fixed soon, then I'll be glad to read it! :)
Imagination Live chapter 7 . 8/23/2014
LUV IT! CANNOT wait for the next one :D :D :D :D :D :D :D !
Imagination Live chapter 6 . 5/30/2014
I had a feeling it was sumthing like tht! but i keep wondering ; who is Simon ? :P lol. lol good job so far! :D
Duchess67 chapter 6 . 5/28/2014
Oh my gosh, the Doctor's wife and son? And a daughter-in-law, too, I see.

Oooooooh, so the ones who killed his wife and ELDEST son (?) could still be alive? I am now pitying these aliens, I really am.

This Simon sounds like a real idiot. I feel sorry for his sister.
Imagination Live chapter 5 . 5/2/2014
i really wanna kno what happens next! is that woman the Doctor's wife? or his sister? i'm really interested! good job so far!
Guest chapter 5 . 4/9/2014
Aaawww... :(
Poor Doc, update soon! :D
Duchess67 chapter 4 . 3/21/2014
Oh dear, this is not good... *worried now*
Duchess67 chapter 3 . 3/21/2014
So Jenny will have a TARDIS of her very own. How sweet! I hope it takes a while to fix it up so that she can spend some time with her father. *g*
Duchess67 chapter 2 . 3/21/2014
LOL I'm dying laughing here! *insert giggle fit*
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