Great story so far. Please update soon

Dear Riolu,
Perhaps it would be a good idea to take the 'complete' part out of the summary.
It is quite the let-down to find out the story is not complete at all.
Thanks for sharing what you have written thus far.

Ok...confused.
I get Jay, I get Aiden...but who is London?

Hope for the sequel soon.

I liked this, good job on it! XD

Please post the sequal it was amazing

Just wanted to mention something.
Has anyone else noticed that the Weasleys are practically set up for war?
I mean, really. Take a look:
Arthur Weasley - Eccentric father, or the moral support for soldiers?
Margaret 'Molly's Weasley - Over enthusiastic mother, or camp cook?
William 'Bill' Weasley - Cursebreaker, or scout to check for traps?
Charles Weasley - Dragon Specialist, or the power behind the sky forces (dragons)?
Percival Weasley - Stuck up, or the organization management.
The Twins - Jokesters, or weapons specialist/creators.
Ronald Weasley - Average chess player, or the general/strategist?
Ginerva Weasley - Average sweet girl, or War Healer?
Oh, and Harry Potter - Good kid, or the one leading the charge?
See, it's all so... funny! By the way, great story. You're a good writer.
FireWire

I'm confused, "London cheated though[...]" and "London sighed[...]" what?

Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!

This was a great read

I can't wait to read the sequel to this it was a seriously interesting story.

The first chapter was a good start, but it has gone flakey.