| Reviews for Chakotay's Maquis Shower Drabbles |
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KJC-56 chapter 5 . 12/7/2015 The last one was my favorite. A great assessment of her obvious strengths with the "angry warrior legend" already present in his mind - "for her"... |
northernexposure chapter 5 . 7/14/2014 I usually don't go for drabbles but I like these, perhaps because they connect together so well. They really build a picture of what was going through his head at the time. Ever thought of doing some set a few years later? Plus, kudos for putting him in the shower for these. Tonight I've read four of your fics and he's ended up naked or partially naked in three of them... ;) |
skadoo chapter 5 . 4/13/2014 Nice insight into these folks and good use of the drabble. A shower is a great time to let your mind wander and contemplate the day. |
Photogirl1890 chapter 5 . 1/30/2014 Ah, you snuck an extra chapter in then. And it certainly complements the previous ones very well. "At least out here it can be just for her." - I like that emphasis on him finding it easier to accept the one captain, rather than the full organisation of Starfleet. Also him respecting the 'courage of her convictions', an early parallel between their two personalities. Nice and succinct. |
CrlkSeasons chapter 1 . 1/23/2014 Sharp, insightful Well done. |
Lizzy chapter 5 . 1/22/2014 This is interesting. As one of the other reviewers said - keep going, please. |
Photogirl1890 chapter 4 . 1/20/2014 Nice application of the format. Works very well. You could add a few more if you wanted. There are plenty of other interesting Maquis characters. |
Delwin chapter 4 . 1/20/2014 These are great! Very nice use of the form for those quick, first impression reads on each new crew member. Nicely done. |
DeltaCat chapter 2 . 1/20/2014 LOVE this one :) |
hester4418 chapter 4 . 1/20/2014 All of these are great! And the characterization in each one is perfect, spot-on. It would be interesting to see the same thing again, after a couple of years on Voyager - to see how his perception changed by then, especially of Paris and Tuvok, probably even of Torres. I also love your shower image/thought! ;-) |