Amazing! I wish I could write like this!

I personally think they only love her as a best friend/sister but this is good

I did enjoy reading this story. Very nicely done.
The only thing I would have loved to know,is how chien-Po would see the Emperoros advice to Shang :)

So beautiful it made me tear up

I love it. :-)

Interesting und nice story.

Best thing I've seen yet in the mulan universe:):):):)

I enjoyed reading this and thought you did a great job writing it.

I like this. It's always interesting to get a different POV!

Nice work. The tone fits Chien Po voice great, though it seems somewhat detached.

Great story! I really enjoyed it!

Those three are right; Mulan is a girl worth fighting for. I have to agree with you that those three are a little in love with Mulan.

I really like the friendship between Yao, Ling, Chien-Po, and Mulan :) I wish it was expanded more in the movie, but you have done a fantastic job in this story! I really like that it's from Chien-Po's point of view too, because he doesn't really have very many lines in the movie. Thank you for sharing this delightful story, and God bless!

This is great! I love stories about the bond between Mulan and the trio. Although I don't think that what they feel for her is romantic love at all, I do agree that they love her a lot - enough to fight with her, take orders from her, and die for her if necessary. That's no small love for sure! I like your take on it though; I hope you'll continue this someday.

This was impressive and I think you are correct in saying that there could have been something more between the trio and Mulan. Though it didn't show in the movie that much(their love, whether platonic or not I don't know.) their respect for her was clearly seen. I loved this story it was a nice change to get inside their heads instead of Mulan or shang's.