Reviews for Uncle
laily.spenstar chapter 7 . 4/3
You did it. You made me cry. God this is really good! How you wrote what Thorin was thinking and feeling. So sad! Lucky he's got two adorable nephews.
Mustard Lady chapter 15 . 10/19/2019
Perfect ending
Mustard Lady chapter 14 . 10/19/2019
Thank goodness it wasn't worse! Yes, Fili and Kili are great!
Mustard Lady chapter 12 . 10/16/2019
Best chapter! This was so good. Thorin's words of wisdom and comfort encouraged even me right now!
Mustard Lady chapter 10 . 10/14/2019
Wow, Kili! Impressive, little guy. Poor Fili. I felt the same way about math!
Mustard Lady chapter 9 . 10/14/2019
Oh no. I hate mine collapse disasters! They're so tragic. But thankfully, this one was mild compared to some. But lives were still lost.

Great chapter with Thorin's entire family trying to help!
Mustard Lady chapter 8 . 10/14/2019
Aww
Mustard Lady chapter 7 . 10/14/2019
That was hard to read. I HATED it when our parents argued! It was awful.

What did you expect to happen, Dis? Did you really NOT think the boys would hear with all that racket going on? Thorin was very longsuffering in this chapter. Thorin has been a solid, security figure in their lives since losing your husband. And now you just ripped him from their lives? Just like that? Just so you could be right? That was wrong! I know that men can often misrepresent what they really mean to say, but in this case, Thorin was very precise in what he said. Wow! Dis REALLY blew it, especially trying to turn the boys' minds against him!

I'm glad Dwalin, and the boys all stood up for Thorin. Yes, Dis was contrite and truly sorry. But I was glad Dwalin confronted her!

This chapter was ugly...but so well written!
Mustard Lady chapter 6 . 10/13/2019
Siblings. Yes, that happens. I remember those days.
Mustard Lady chapter 5 . 10/13/2019
Ohh, poor Thorin. Those rattling coughs are insidious! How scary for all of them. The dwarves are so kind to their own, especially Balin and Bofur, two of my favorite dwarves.

Dwalin ticklish? No way! Maybe that's why he always looks grumpy, so everyone will keep their distance!
Mustard Lady chapter 4 . 10/13/2019
Love little Fili and Kili! They're so cute!
Mustard Lady chapter 3 . 10/12/2019
Aww, poor Fili, thinking he did something to drive Thorin away!
Mustard Lady chapter 2 . 10/12/2019
That had to be really scary, especially for Fili. I'm glad Thorin could finally get some sleep. Fili was just too adorable playing with those potatoes!
Mustard Lady chapter 1 . 10/12/2019
Very sad chapter. Great story!
Always-The-Dreamer-Girl chapter 15 . 3/8/2017
That was brilliant! I really liked your passage of time. Very compelling.
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