Reviews for Transparent
introvertedllamas chapter 4 . 3/26/2015
This is too much for me, every chapter brings a new set of emotions. Thank you for writing this!
introvertedllamas chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
This is exactly what I needed. It's so cute!
Random Writer's Account chapter 3 . 7/3/2014
I'm speechless. This was -I can't even.

Excellent! I absolutely loved this. Your characterization is great and your writing skills are marvelous. I smiled and laughed a lot -you even made me squeal once or twice. I definitely adore their interactions, and the dialogue was amazing. That last line... If only for that, I had to review.

Once again, it was wonderful. Thank you very much for posting.

-Ana V.
animelover432 chapter 3 . 6/12/2014
I love this story :):):):):)
Jessica129 chapter 3 . 6/3/2014
beautiful writing, the last line truly brought tears to my eyes, i appreciate you writing this wonderful piece, thank you :)
Aniki-xvi chapter 3 . 4/13/2014
aww, that last night... I can't! it's the best closing line EVER!
Sparkle-de-Cat chapter 3 . 4/9/2014
I couldn't help but laugh when Nezumi said "If you want to cuddle save it for bed" It made me laugh so hard. It's only been a few hours for the two and Nezumi has to leave Shion again. It made me sad a bit. But at least he'll come back, hopefully. Anyways, keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Makaalaa chapter 2 . 3/12/2014
Not to sound pushy... But please please please finish the story! Ack, this story is so well written. And I just love this couple! So please finish... :D
do-the-unthinkable chapter 2 . 2/26/2014
Pure brilliance is all I have to say to compliment this price of work! I'm enjoying myself with each update to every last detail. Keep up the great work!

-DTU
thecoldforest chapter 2 . 2/22/2014
Shion...-tries to reach though the screen to hug Shion- reunion will come, Shion.
Please update soon!
Fantome Star chapter 2 . 2/22/2014
The first chapter is so cute, the second is so sad..poor shion. Please update soon!
Kjersti Nohr chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
Great read, I thought it was wonderfully written. It was meaningful, but wasn't too heavy. What I really loved most about this was that you were able to show their bond by them simply cuddling, I really appreciated that, it was really cute and sweet.
teaandburgers chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
Ahhh I love this so much, you write them wonderfully!
thecoldforest chapter 1 . 1/15/2014
This is so adorable!