| Reviews for Transparent |
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introvertedllamas chapter 4 . 3/26/2015 This is too much for me, every chapter brings a new set of emotions. Thank you for writing this! |
introvertedllamas chapter 1 . 3/26/2015 This is exactly what I needed. It's so cute! |
Random Writer's Account chapter 3 . 7/3/2014 I'm speechless. This was -I can't even. Excellent! I absolutely loved this. Your characterization is great and your writing skills are marvelous. I smiled and laughed a lot -you even made me squeal once or twice. I definitely adore their interactions, and the dialogue was amazing. That last line... If only for that, I had to review. Once again, it was wonderful. Thank you very much for posting. -Ana V. |
animelover432 chapter 3 . 6/12/2014 I love this story :):):):):) |
Jessica129 chapter 3 . 6/3/2014 beautiful writing, the last line truly brought tears to my eyes, i appreciate you writing this wonderful piece, thank you :) |
Aniki-xvi chapter 3 . 4/13/2014 aww, that last night... I can't! it's the best closing line EVER! |
Sparkle-de-Cat chapter 3 . 4/9/2014 I couldn't help but laugh when Nezumi said "If you want to cuddle save it for bed" It made me laugh so hard. It's only been a few hours for the two and Nezumi has to leave Shion again. It made me sad a bit. But at least he'll come back, hopefully. Anyways, keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Makaalaa chapter 2 . 3/12/2014 Not to sound pushy... But please please please finish the story! Ack, this story is so well written. And I just love this couple! So please finish... :D |
do-the-unthinkable chapter 2 . 2/26/2014 Pure brilliance is all I have to say to compliment this price of work! I'm enjoying myself with each update to every last detail. Keep up the great work! -DTU |
thecoldforest chapter 2 . 2/22/2014 Shion...-tries to reach though the screen to hug Shion- reunion will come, Shion. Please update soon! |
Fantome Star chapter 2 . 2/22/2014 The first chapter is so cute, the second is so sad..poor shion. Please update soon! |
Kjersti Nohr chapter 1 . 1/31/2014 Great read, I thought it was wonderfully written. It was meaningful, but wasn't too heavy. What I really loved most about this was that you were able to show their bond by them simply cuddling, I really appreciated that, it was really cute and sweet. |
teaandburgers chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 Ahhh I love this so much, you write them wonderfully! |
thecoldforest chapter 1 . 1/15/2014 This is so adorable! |