Oh, lovely.

Hahahaha! That was amazing!

Excellent! This scene should definitely have been in the show. As far as l am concerned, it now is. Love the Holmes brothers interaction.

Good one! I particularly enjoyed the silent conversation between the Holmes Brothers. Spot on characterisation! Thanks for sharing.

My GOD this is so good! Your writing is so spot-on! All the characters' thoughts and dialogue read exactly like the show and that is so tough to do. I also LOVE the fact that you've been nice to Mary. That is so rare to find in fanfics. I'm a huge Mary fan myself so when someone's story stays true to how she is intended to be I get veryyyy happy :) Great job! You're a brilliant writer :)

Oh, this is perfect, and really should have been a part of the show. It explains so much so very well.

I love the voice in this. You picked a great way to give Sherlock's thoughts a voice without either making it first person or getting too direct. Plus, it's an excellent missing scene.

:D good one!

Oh, this was hilarious and I love it.

Loved it! ! Too funny! !

Perfect in every way.

Yes! Definitely could be a deleted scene.
That was fabulous. Lol
Everyone was in character and it would've fit that episode nicely.
Well done! I loved it.

Hey OMG this was awesome! For once, a happy story, cuz S3 is kinda bleak. Love Mycroft and Sherlock's relationship. Despite it all, they care for each other. They just don't show it a lot...or like at all lol. “The loss of you would break my heart.” ; I laughed when I heard him say this cuz it was just so OOC! And cornering John and Mary (matchmaking /forcing them to makeup) and Myc... For Christmas. And yes, Mycroft hates Christmas. Anywho this was good! Keep writing for the bros and keep up the great work!

hahaha! brilliant! Hmm sherlock in a hospital gown. really Molly? great story!

Check and mate, Mycroft! This was so much fun to read. You capture the character voices perfectly and the pace of the show so well.