This was fun to read actually. some of the elements were changed to give the story a different angle. Best part for me was hearing Ryuga scare people in the market.

I love it when Ryuga says “This is Sparta!“ He is way more enthusiastic like that of Tsubasa! Now the two must survive the night whether they like it or not! Great story...keep it up for all things Tsubasa Otori!

I love you

Now this is ether a one shot or you forgot to update but this story was/is awesome and as always Ryuga has done something wrong. Poor Tsubasa first putting up with Yuu and now Ryuga

update! I wuv this story so much! plz!

lol I would be Ryuga in this situation! ahahaha I love this story; it's very funny! Keep up the good work!

more :D

"THIS IS SPARTA"
Pure comedy gold.
Fun fAct: At a festival called the Cleaver Festival, Spartans would nail sausages to walls so old men could gnaw on them.

This was hilarious! I love how Ryuga is a troublemaker in this story. It makes everything 10 times funnier! Update soon please!

I always wanted someone to write a story like this,and it's hilarious and awesome!I hope there are more chapters to it! :D

LOL. Tsubasa's 2010 Toyota Camry is not SMALL! XD

Lol. Poor Tsubasa... This was hilarious! Keep up the good work, as usual!