What can I say...

It's been a long time and here I am, back to wrap things up. I hope to be able to do it this time. Whoever read my story so far, knows that if it's not too good in the style it surely has a lot of work behind it and this means a lot of time. It's hard when life gets in the way...

Well, now I hope to be able to update the new edited version of every chapter more often and then go on and finish 'Lost with you'. The time of the updating depends on me and my beta reader/s, we hope we can make it, but you should know it's a long job to do.

About the new version of the story some old readers had manifested their fear of it being less detailed and more 'quick'. I hope you'll have the patience to stay tuned and find out it's not the case. Well, it is for the Prologue and Chapter 1, because I needed to make things flow a little bit more smoothly. I want the story to have an even more 'grown-up' style, not just in content but also in structure. So I had to handle some dialogues and description, but trust me the character analysis will be developed even more than before, I just wanted it to be more gradual and less redundant.

I also wanted to be less cheesy, that's not me ;) But plenty of emotion nonetheless!

Thank you for reading this story and thank you very very very much for leaving your reviews and comments, I love to know what you guys think, no matter if it's criticism, I want to learn and get even better.

Enjoy your reading,

Doc CB

08-10-2009

I'm sorry for the delay but I've suddenly found myself without a beta reader due to Getto Kunoichi's busy life. She's done a great job so far and I'm very thankful. Now I'm currently going through the really long list of beta readers trying to find one but it's not easy. I sadly have to observe that most beta readers wouldn't edit a story involving lesbian charachters...!

I hope to find someone soon and get on with the posting. Just stay tune and wish me luck!

PS: I had to change my pen name... long story you don't want to hear.

PPS: If anyone passing by want to offer her/his services as a beta reader... she/he will be more than welcome.

October, 11st

Good news,

I've finally found a beta reader and we're already working! I should be able to post next week, I'm sorry for the inconvenience.

Thanks again for your patience!

Doc CB