Bluelaia
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Joined 12-09-12, id: 4407742, Profile Updated: 10-15-17
Author has written 6 stories for Naruto.

Hey there!

This is Blu, and I'm a Spanish derp who likes to write things (awesome, right?).

Reading: I don't have a particular fandom or genre I prefer, as long as it's something I enjoy reading. The only thing I'm unlikely to read are stories that feature sex prominently, as I'm not particularly interested in it (unless it fits the story). My top priorities with fanfiction are avoidance of character bashing and a modicum of grammar/structure. I mainly enjoy reading about well-developed characters and their interactions with each other; worldbuilding is also a big favorite of mine. Taking an established universe and expanding on its concepts is fascinating to me.

Writing: I like to try and understand a character as best as I can, so I can reflect them properly in my works. I'm very bad at picking favorites or hating on things in general, so I'll try my best at treating characters fairly, but I'm pretty sure I'll eventually fuck up, if I haven't already, so there's that. Just have my word: I won't consciously bash any of them (if I do, please tell me!)

That being said, I also like to push their limits and put them in new situations, to see what kind of development I can come up with. Of course, sometimes I just feel a tiny bit evil and try to hit a character's weak points, to check out what I get out of it. I won't shy away from their flaws either.

Just like I do with reading, I love worldbuilding and constantly think about how to expand established universes. I'll develop "ships" (romantic or otherwise) purely to throw two or more characters at each other and see what happens.

No particular genre preference, either!


This is what you can expect of me. That being said, I only started writing in English a few years back, so any tips on how to do it better are way more than welcome! (I also by no means think there will be no flaws in my work... but that's the fun of it! Learning along the way, wohoo). Feel free to recommend any stories (even if they're not from Naruto) if you think I'd enjoy them. I'm always up for a PM if you wanna get wall of texted at.

I hope both you and I will have a fun ride with this (as wrong as that sounds...)


FANFICTION


Barebones: this one is tricky. It branches off from the canon towards the end of the manga - Sasuke beats Naruto, and chaos ensues. Its protagonist is Sakura, with Sasuke as an antagonist. It works with the premise of taking away all the things that hold those two to sanity. Slow-paced, detailed and quite brutal... it's focused on character development, in a world perhaps even darker and more despairing than the original. Insanity plays a big role in this one, too. The title's name, 'barebones', is a slight bastardization of a word used to describe something that has been stripped down to the bare minimums, its essential/core components.

23/05/2017 Note: this story was written in very unpolished drafts: I wanted to challenge myself and write a chapter each week (on top of translating them), with a word minimum of 5K words. I knew it would be a long story (I'm a naturally verbose author, aka I don't shut the fuck up), and my sketches were very rough. I knew how I wanted to end and how I'd get there, but it's still excessive in length and probably contains a lot of derpy narration (it was my first long story in English). I'm very proud of some chapters and concepts, but I'm under no illusion about how polished it is (though I appreciate criticism anyway! I still try to correct any mistakes I see during proof-reading, as of today).

Spanish translation: here, on the account Brisa Levantina.

WARNINGS for Barebones (for those who are curious):

Partiality. Narration is based on the character's point of view, so clarity depends on their mental state. Humanity. This is a story about overcoming pain and weaknesses in times of loss and darkness. Happiness is rare and difficult to earn. More than anything, this is all about self-acceptance - drawing parallels between grief, depression, self-hatred and other psychological issues that most people experience. Brutality. Expect suffering/pain, torture, abuse, rape (not necessarily in a sexual sense) and dementia - the amount of things the characters go through truly put their souls to test. Some will fail, some won't. Being important in this story or the original work doesn't grant them safety. Details. Slow, detailed plot. I work on the little things here and there that are supposed to make the characters and world "realistic". Characters, rather than being pawns changed to fit the story, are figures changed by the progression of it (aka, I value keeping them In-Character more than changing them for no reason, to fit the story). Lies. Morality is made by who states the rules (in other words: nothing is true, everything is permitted). Of Ninja. You can figure this one out on your own.

(Man, I was really damn adorable when I wrote this list).


Kaiten: my next big project, which I'm stupidly excited about, even if I make progress at a snail's pace.

There are three things you should know 'bout it:

  1. The Hyūga were massacred, not the Uchiha.
  2. The Byakugan and Sharingan are balanced to be equals. The Senju/Uchiha rivalry shifts to Hyūga/Uchiha.
  3. HinaSaku ship.

Details: The story will total about 100K words tops, with 12 chapters and 1 epilogue. I'm working to curb my verbose tendencies here (not on this overly long summary, but the story!), and also trying to ensure that every single scene furthers the plot in one way or another.

Themes/Warning: It will both be a story of simple, slice of life pleasures, and quite a few darker themes. They are never far apart from each other. I apologise in advance if some of you read some of the worst things the story has to offer, and find yourself uncomfortable or hurt in a way you didn't seek. (This includes facepalming because I said something stupid, or the story frustrates you).

Goals: I want to make an AU story where the characters still feel like themselves, and not just convenient plot devices with a particular flair. Even if their situations have changed, affecting the kind of people they are, I aim to make them feel true. Even if, after starting out similarly to their canon counterparts, their development splits further away due to how my story progresses.

Secondly, I want to use this story to comment on the dynamics of Konoha with a critical, yet not cynical eye. This includes the dynamics between clans as a whole, but also the finer details of jutsu and bloodlines. One of my main points of development is the Byakugan, which has been revamped to match the Sharingan (this one, in turn, has been nerfed).

Finally, this is my best attempt at what a HinaSaku relationship might look like in this scenario (both romantically and in general). There's very few stories about this pairing, even less than there are stories of either of them as a true main character. I did this mostly because I thought their dynamics would be fun to experiment with, as happens with most things I "ship". I also wanna give Ino and some other characters a spot at the forefront, 'cause I only ever see them as running gags in the background of other stories, or as static characters that never develop at all.

Lemons/Romance: I'll warn you, I'm not a lemon person; and while I can read stories that are mainly just romance, Kaiten isn't going to be it. It's a slow-burner, more focused on character interaction as a whole, and the ramifications of the AU's premise. That's not to say there won't be any fluff, but I will not ditch the plot/action for the romance.

Suspension of disbelief: this is due to the mere premise of this story. I have mapped the AU changes, which go back a very long way - it's plot-coincidental that some things remain the same (or very similar), and that most, if not all characters, are born at all. Other details have changed, such as some ages.

I've put a lot of thought into which changes to introduce, and what they would impact. I hope that the details will not bother you as you read (and I choose to believe that, however slim the chances of this particular AU happening as it is, they aren't zero).


The Naruto Effect: this fanfiction came to life as a dare from a friend - he wanted me to do something specific in an interaction between Sakura and Sasuke, and so here it is. The underlying meaning of it is emphasis on how the entirety of Team Seven do care for each other (and quite obvious hints to SasuSaku, of course), even if at times their communication is slightly less than derpy. The title would refer to Naruto's ability to 'knock some sense into people', oftentimes literally.

Of Ninja!: this is a derpy fanfiction that I update very, very rarely - there's very little plot, if at all. It's an attempt to be witty a la Rock Lee's Springtime of Youth. Each chapter is about 500-600 words. The little line I follow is that Sasuke didn't manage to escape the village after Itachi decided to show up again and fuck shit up for 'em lolz. Expect idiocy, dumb humor and all sorts of derpy things! This story will be scarce in updates, and since there isn't much progress you shouldn't expect it to be finished anytime soon.

Spring: this is a short chapter that came to mind, inspired by the general emotions of Naruto Gaiden. It's definitely an AU with a heavy feeling pretty much everywhere. It's SasuSaku, because these two didn't have enough sad stories to tell. I think the summary on the fanfiction itself does a better job than I could do here, so I'll leave it at this.

Time: a story I wrote in small snippets a long time ago - I wrote the first part in one sitting, abandoned it, and recently finished it (it's about 13.6K words in total, with chapters ranging between 200 and 600 words). In this one, I work with the premise of Sakura's sudden disappearance a little bit after Part 1's Exams - it has an (for the characters) unexpected effect on her team; she does come back, but to put it lightly, her state is not good, so it's almost as if she wasn't there... however, her influence keeps changing the future of her team.


Favorites, follows, reviews:

Personally, I appreciate support and/or feedback of any kind, it really makes my day to see that someone took their time for something I wrote! Positive or negative, it's interest on my work all the same. I'll try to pay back in kind, if the people reviewing me have stories that were updated/posted fairly recently. Supports boost for all, boo-yah. I follow stories that are interesting to me, either because they're new and I feel they have potential, or because I know them already and I'm just waiting for updates. I'm not very outspoken despite the excessive amount of words I use, so if you ended up here because my name popped up in your notifications: cheers to you, thanks for the nice times! I'll try to use favorites as a way to maximize exposition on stories that don't have much attention. I dislike character bashing and OoC behavior that isn't particularly explained (unless it's comedy), as well as grammar, so I'm going to be very picky with what I put up there.

That being said, I'll also add things I generally like... it's my Favorites list, after all! I'll just try to use it mostly for what I mentioned above.


Other accounts:

Bluelaia (AO3) (I'm aware that external links don't work, but here you have the reference)

About any of those, reviewing of any kind is welcome, since I want to do my best at putting out a decent story. As long as you people enjoy the read, it probably means I'm doing something right!

Cheerps.

PS.: Is this how you do a profile?

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50 Hakuchūmu by vanilluhbeaux reviews
A series of fantasies, centered upon Sasuke and Sakura. 48.) Summary: Itachi told him not to go in grandpa Madara's trunk and definitely do not ever under no circumstances EVER follow the instructions in that musty old book inside that trunk…but this was for something important, Sasuke swears.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 48 - Words: 84,551 - Reviews: 82 - Favs: 48 - Follows: 47 - Updated: 4/23 - Published: 2/1/2015 - Sasuke U., Sakura H.
A Twist in Time by wolf08 reviews
With Konoha on the verge of destruction, Sakura is sent on a last-resort mission to save her world by travelling to the past. Join her in coping with her old body's shortcomings, testing the natural laws of time, falling in love all over again, and rediscovering who she is. Time-travel. SasuSaku. REAL publication date: Jan 2015
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 42 - Words: 247,526 - Reviews: 4079 - Favs: 4,367 - Follows: 3,953 - Updated: 12/16/2018 - Published: 9/23/2007 - Sasuke U., Sakura H. - Complete
Defiance by K-chu reviews
She was a dove in chains. Hidden away in a tower and left to rot, without hope or dreams of salvation. She didn't mind however, because she'd rather be his prisoner than his loyal subject. SasuSaku, Dark.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Drama - Chapters: 7 - Words: 53,450 - Reviews: 641 - Favs: 724 - Follows: 831 - Updated: 9/6/2017 - Published: 9/28/2014 - Sasuke U., Sakura H.
Penthesilea by KuriQuinn reviews
Uchiha Sasuke was born in battle, and expects to die there. If the only difference he can make is to take as many of the enemy with him as possible, so be it. But one day, a chance encounter with an enemy warrior will alter the course of his destiny and that of his clan in ways he would never have imagined… [Warring States AU]
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 20 - Words: 78,954 - Reviews: 478 - Favs: 1,132 - Follows: 514 - Updated: 8/31/2017 - Published: 7/27/2017 - [Sasuke U., Sakura H.] Naruto U., Kakashi H. - Complete
Squirrel's Luck by Racke reviews
Sakura's team fails to pass their jounin-sensei's test, and the Genin Corps loom high and daunting. But Sakura was always too stubborn for her own good.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 19,382 - Reviews: 109 - Favs: 878 - Follows: 364 - Updated: 5/1/2017 - Published: 4/27/2017 - [Sakura H., Naruko U.] - Complete
The World Tree by M.M. Mendell reviews
The misadventures of Raiden, ROOT agent and reincarnated Pilot. It's been a long time since he's seen the sky in this world, but he knows that one day he'll soar with the clouds once more. (In which Danzo gathers together a bunch of hurt, abandoned, and emotionally-challenged children in an attempt to create the perfect army. It works a little too well.) [AU, SI/OC]
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Drama/Friendship - Chapters: 25 - Words: 57,553 - Reviews: 73 - Favs: 275 - Follows: 183 - Updated: 12/31/2016 - Published: 10/11/2016 - Danzō S., Izumi U., OC - Complete
Not Sick by Ser Serendipity reviews
In one world, after defeating his brother, Itachi Uchiha dropped dead, victim of a mysterious disease, and the future of the ninja world was set for the worse. However, in another, Itachi was not sick. From this small difference, many changes will spring, and many plans will be overturned. The path of the last of the Uchiha, and the world itself, will be altered forever.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Family - Chapters: 39 - Words: 331,120 - Reviews: 1903 - Favs: 2,623 - Follows: 2,288 - Updated: 8/20/2016 - Published: 11/24/2013 - Naruto U., Sasuke U., Sakura H., Itachi U. - Complete
The Importance of Aiming by black.k.kat reviews
COMPLETE. With the Kyuubi's help, Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke have successfully landed in the past, armed with a completely fleshed-out plan to get rid of the bad guys and save the world. (Again.) The only problem? When it comes to the transmigration of souls and time-travel jutsus done under the influence, Kurama has absolutely, incredibly terrible aim.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,824 - Reviews: 171 - Favs: 1,431 - Follows: 658 - Published: 4/27/2015 - [Naruto U., Sakura H., Sasuke U.] Kyuubi/Kurama - Complete
Heartbeat by letmeannoyyoutoday reviews
Sasu/Saku. From the beginning of their relationship, Sakura never failed to thank Sasuke for every little gesture that he made. It took a while for him to realize that the reason she did it was because, the moment she accepted to be his wife and give him all that she had left to give, she honestly never expected to receive anything in return.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 70,643 - Reviews: 984 - Favs: 2,288 - Follows: 1,843 - Updated: 3/4/2015 - Published: 7/31/2013 - [Sasuke U., Sakura H.] [Shikamaru N., Ino Y.]
Do Over by Kyogre reviews
Naruto and Kurama accidentally end up in the past, on the day of Naruto's birth, and are forced to live their lives all over again. They make the best of it, to everyone else's extreme confusion. (Alive Minato and Kushina, humor.)
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 7 - Words: 23,823 - Reviews: 1597 - Favs: 11,725 - Follows: 5,334 - Updated: 10/7/2014 - Published: 8/27/2014 - Naruto U., Minato N., Kyuubi/Kurama, Kushina U. - Complete
Ice Chest by MaliBiser reviews
Bijuu will play with their hosts' emotions, twisting them and turning them to their advantage, so Jinchuuriki need to take precaution. Their hearts should be made into ice chests where demons could be safely deposited. Uzumaki Mito was prepared. HashiMito oneshot.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,309 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 43 - Follows: 8 - Published: 9/15/2014 - Mito U., Hashirama S. - Complete
i let it fall, my heart by arabesque05 reviews
Sasuke's memories of Sakura are not based on sight. No: Sakura was a press of desperation along his back, a sob to "please, don't hurt them". Sakura was a cool hand around his wrist, startling against his feverish, new-cursed skin. Sakura was the taste of apples; the breeze of an open hospital window; the stinging pain of a third Chidori. Sakura resides in the heart.
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,225 - Reviews: 87 - Favs: 559 - Follows: 70 - Published: 7/31/2013 - Sasuke U., Sakura H., Madara U. - Complete
Hokage Kakashi by Mirror and Image reviews
Whoever thought Hatake Kakashi would make a great Hokage needed to be killed. Slowly.
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,858 - Reviews: 322 - Favs: 3,239 - Follows: 702 - Published: 6/2/2012 - Kakashi H. - Complete
Freedom in the Eyes of Another by Oroburos69 reviews
The Wave Mission was a failure. They got caught, captured, taken-it didn't end well. Now Sakura has a half-heard order, uncut fingernails, and more desperation than bravery. One way or another, she's getting Team Seven out today. Complete.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Angst/Adventure - Chapters: 5 - Words: 20,684 - Reviews: 394 - Favs: 2,983 - Follows: 741 - Updated: 9/14/2011 - Published: 8/12/2011 - Sakura H. - Complete
Transcendental Idealism by TwinEnigma reviews
The Kyuubi is bored, left to himself deep within his prison. At least, until the bizarre arrival of a strange visitor. Philosophy, crack pairing, one shot
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,411 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 82 - Follows: 19 - Published: 2/5/2011 - Kyuubi/Kurama, Sakura H. - Complete
Lost And Found by Lady Silvamord reviews
At the time, asking Sasuke to take her with him when he left Konoha seemed like a great idea. The outcome of that decision, though, throws Sakura into a predicament which leaves her at the mercy of the one person she would never have expected. ItaSaku AU.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 19 - Words: 206,516 - Reviews: 1659 - Favs: 1,797 - Follows: 679 - Updated: 5/4/2010 - Published: 10/13/2009 - Itachi U., Sakura H. - Complete
Sasuke is a Moron by Natarie reviews
It started as many things are prone to: With a bet and the Akatsuki. Women are always right. Therefore, whatever happened, it was all his fault. One-Shot Crack
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 23,764 - Reviews: 389 - Favs: 1,834 - Follows: 331 - Published: 6/21/2009 - Sakura H., Akatsuki - Complete
Love Lockdown by Lady Silvamord reviews
They say it takes a village to raise a child. Similarly, it takes the entirety of Akatsuki to help Itachi get the girl. ItaSaku, complete.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 66,700 - Reviews: 812 - Favs: 1,933 - Follows: 501 - Updated: 11/30/2008 - Published: 11/4/2008 - Itachi U., Sakura H. - Complete
Manifest Destiny by marvel26 reviews
The end of all things...
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Supernatural - Chapters: 5 - Words: 4,365 - Reviews: 49 - Favs: 69 - Follows: 10 - Updated: 6/8/2008 - Published: 4/15/2008 - Aang, Toph - Complete
got a boy in the war by Lisse reviews
Naruto's parents don't so much fall in love as accidentally trip over it. Manga spoilers.
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,433 - Reviews: 162 - Favs: 1,162 - Follows: 139 - Published: 3/4/2008 - Minato N., Kushina U. - Complete
Challenges by Durgas Dragon reviews
Lee confuses Suna
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 922 - Reviews: 45 - Favs: 265 - Follows: 33 - Published: 2/3/2008 - Lee R., Gaara - Complete
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Kaiten reviews
Hinata is seven, and there are three things she knows about herself: she is always alone, because she doesn't deserve love; she is worthless, because she can't do anything right. She is a monster, because she failed her family and got them all killed. However, can she break the chains of fate? [AU-The Hyūga are wiped out instead of the Uchiha. No bashing! SakuHina/HinaSaku. Abuse.]
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 40,486 - Reviews: 46 - Favs: 90 - Follows: 134 - Updated: 11/11/2017 - Published: 4/11/2016 - [Sakura H., Hinata H.] Ino Y., Neji H.
Of Ninja! reviews
Sasuke fails to leave Konoha at the end of Part 1. Add crack, youth and copious amounts of stupidity, put them in 500-word chapters and you have this story. What's the worst that could happen? ...What do you mean with "this isn't healthy for the mind, please stop"? The Springtrain of Youth has no brakes!
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 2,655 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 22 - Updated: 4/11/2016 - Published: 3/27/2015 - Naruto U., Sasuke U., Sakura H., Kakashi H.
Barebones reviews
At the end of the war, two rivals fought to death. Sasuke Uchiha emerged victorious, but the price he paid left him bereft of sanity. Consumed by his darkness, he massacred the Shinobi Alliance. He tortured Sakura Haruno, scarring her mind and body for life. He tried to kill her, yet against all odds, she survived. Broken, she lost everything... but will she succumb?
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 43 - Words: 227,388 - Reviews: 163 - Favs: 152 - Follows: 149 - Updated: 3/26/2016 - Published: 2/26/2015 - Sasuke U., Sakura H. - Complete
Time reviews
One day, Sakura suddenly disappeared. When she returned to Konoha, many things had changed. The gears of time never stop spinning, and Team Seven was abruptly thrown into chaos, forced to keep moving forward. If only things were easy... [AU-ish, half angst and half fluffy humor.]
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 50 - Words: 17,198 - Reviews: 70 - Favs: 110 - Follows: 109 - Updated: 3/4/2016 - Published: 11/21/2015 - Naruto U., Sasuke U., Sakura H., Kakashi H. - Complete
Spring reviews
Sooner or later, the lively beauty of spring must come to an end. "She hid her illness for so long, even from Tsunade-sama. That day, we all realised that the girl we knew was very different from the real one. Naruto-kun asked why she never told us… and she said that it was because she didn't want to be weak anymore. Deep down… she must have felt very lonely." [One-Shot, AU]
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,628 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 84 - Follows: 18 - Published: 4/23/2015 - [Sasuke U., Sakura H.] Sarada U. - Complete
The Naruto Effect reviews
The war is over. Sasuke is about to leave Konoha on his journey through the world. Seeing Sakura freak out because of it, Naruto decides to step in and help his friends out. After all, he doesn't say "believe it" for nothing.
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,750 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 4 - Published: 12/19/2014 - Naruto U., Sasuke U., Sakura H. - Complete