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Joined 07-14-10, id: 2448088, Profile Updated: 03-21-18
Author has written 6 stories for Mass Effect, Katawa Shoujo, and RWBY.

Critikal here! Welcome to my dojo!


Update: 3/14: Realized I haven't updated this in a while. Okay, so the chapter's done. It's just going through edits some hopefully I can have it done before the end of the week.


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Persona Gaiden: New Class by Daniel Levinson reviews
Morigami Memorial Academy: home to Japan's elite students, yet plagued by escalating disappearances and suicides, collectively called "the Vanished." With new friends, and familiar faces, can transfer student Shou Tanizawa avert disaster? Lay your hand upon the wheel of destiny... A new Persona tale begins! (Updates coming soon. - 4/23/17)
Persona Series - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Adventure - Chapters: 23 - Words: 99,603 - Reviews: 73 - Favs: 58 - Follows: 61 - Updated: 4/10/2017 - Published: 7/23/2013 - Igor, Naoto S., OC
Midnight Rumors by aiyumi reviews
Persona 5 AU. Midnight was the time the Phantom Thieves ran amok. And according to rumors, it was also the time the sky might turn green, their school might transform into a scary place, and monsters might roam the streets. Makoto Niijima didn't believe any of that... until that night. Makoto and MC oneshot, Dark Hour in P5.
Persona Series - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,209 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 65 - Follows: 30 - Published: 6/10/2016 - Protagonist, Makoto N. - Complete
A Will of Steel by Kisdota-The Freak Gamer reviews
The weapons of RWBY and JNPR. They're a representation of each of them, an extension of themselves, the tools used to defend the world from the tyrrany of the Grimm threat. They could also be your best friend, like the sister or brother you never had, and sometimes they're a pain in the butt to deal with. Wanna see what I mean?
RWBY - Rated: T - English - Humor/Family - Chapters: 12 - Words: 44,036 - Reviews: 349 - Favs: 741 - Follows: 789 - Updated: 8/27/2014 - Published: 1/3/2014
Team MAPL by Copla of Meaty reviews
Mallow Rouge is a seventeen year old boy who's family owns a small multi-cuisine restaurant in the city of Vale. He dreams of one day being a Huntsman and defending his Kingdom. Unfortunately, less-than-average dexterity has kept him out of combat school. So is it some great miracle that he's selected as part of a recruitment program? Or a huge miscalculation? Only time will tell.
RWBY - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 8 - Words: 28,162 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 7/24/2014 - Published: 7/6/2014 - Ruby R., OC, Jaune A.
Adamo by Andrio reviews
A fanfic series focusing on Shepard and Tali's friendship, romance, and love, spanning Mass Effect 1 through speculative Mass Effect 3.
Mass Effect - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 35 - Words: 167,125 - Reviews: 758 - Favs: 1,131 - Follows: 780 - Updated: 4/29/2014 - Published: 5/30/2010 - Tali'Zorah, Shepard - Complete
Acerbus Praeteritus by deathunit100010 reviews
Raised by quarians, exiled from the Flotilla, Shepard left his past behind him, refusing to speak of how or why he was the way he was. One quarian becomes the first to attempt to find out everything, and more.
Mass Effect - Rated: M - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 26 - Words: 88,176 - Reviews: 249 - Favs: 334 - Follows: 241 - Updated: 9/24/2012 - Published: 7/13/2010 - Shepard, Tali'Zorah - Complete
Taking This One To The Grave by Jo247 reviews
Those who appear to be strong are sometimes the most sensitive. Those who spend their time protecting others, often need to be protected themselves. The three hardest things to say in life are 'I love you', 'I'm sorry' and 'Help me'.
Batman - Rated: T - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 18 - Words: 22,234 - Reviews: 40 - Favs: 41 - Follows: 24 - Updated: 4/11/2012 - Published: 8/3/2011 - Bruce W./Batman, Selina K./Catwoman - Complete
A Golden Heart by SergiusTheGreat reviews
Ex-N7 Commando and C-Sec agent Luke de la Vega meets a young, struggling quarian in the Citadel, unleashing a series of turning points that put both in the eye of the storm. Humor, romance and action in this story. Rated M for various reasons. Parody-kind. Dedicated to the writers who have made this such a great section of fanfiction.
Mass Effect - Rated: M - English - Romance/Parody - Chapters: 23 - Words: 83,218 - Reviews: 177 - Favs: 98 - Follows: 69 - Updated: 12/23/2011 - Published: 10/31/2010 - Shepard, Tali'Zorah - Complete
Dead Space: Playing the Game by EcoSeeker247 reviews
What happens when Isaac somehow gets his hands on the first Dead Space? Out of curiosity, he decides to play it, and soon, the others are joining in on the fun of seeing their game counterparts come to life. Rated T for mild suggestive humor & language.
Dead Space - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 25 - Words: 58,435 - Reviews: 203 - Favs: 260 - Follows: 127 - Updated: 6/6/2011 - Published: 3/9/2011 - Isaac C., Nicole B., C. Mercer, Kendra D. - Complete
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The Macabre reviews
Unknown to the rest of Remnant, the Huntsmen had once fought a shadow war with an organization known as The Macabre in the past. But as another year in Beacon begins, The Macabre have arisen again for reasons unknown and war threatens to reignite and engulf all of Vale. And four students have been dragged into it. As they try to survive, they'll learn the truth is far from simple.
RWBY - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 24 - Words: 130,971 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 22 - Updated: 6/13/2018 - Published: 1/27/2015 - OC
The Most to Lose reviews
In order to eliminate Team RWBY, Cinder orchestrates a violent Faunus uprising in the Schnee Dust Company and leaves Weiss' family in the crossfire. Forced to save the family, RWBY is thrown in the middle of a war for freedom, revealing the SDC's dirty secrets and the lengths people will go to survive.
RWBY - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 14,523 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 18 - Updated: 6/17/2015 - Published: 2/22/2015 - Ruby R., Weiss S., Blake B., Yang X.L.
Can You Confront the Past? reviews
As Hisao and Hanako nurture their growing relationship, Lilly must deal with a life-changing choice and its consequences. Meanwhile, a new student attends Yamaku with his own problems, including his failure to remember them. Post-Hanako's good ending. Hisao/Hanako, Lilly/OC.
Katawa Shoujo - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 10 - Words: 55,200 - Reviews: 39 - Favs: 68 - Follows: 87 - Updated: 4/14/2015 - Published: 2/20/2013 - Hisao N., Hanako I.
Crimson Depths I: Paragon reviews
A biotic quarian is raised in a human colony and joins the Alliance military. His seemingly simple tour of duty leads to the first steps in discovering a galaxy-wide conquest of control by a shadowy organization. OC/Kasumi romance.
Mass Effect - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 29 - Words: 173,078 - Reviews: 122 - Favs: 105 - Follows: 114 - Updated: 10/13/2014 - Published: 5/19/2012 - Kasumi G.
Paragon II: A Broken Heart reviews
Tali lost the love of her life. Now she has to return to the Migrant Fleet and do whatever she can to carry on Shepard's work. Slight AU.
Mass Effect - Rated: M - English - Angst/Adventure - Chapters: 21 - Words: 70,945 - Reviews: 34 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 18 - Updated: 3/16/2012 - Published: 6/6/2011 - Tali'Zorah - Complete
Paragon I: Never Simple reviews
A dedicated Migrant Fleet Marine is tasked with rescuing a quarian on her pilgrimage. What he finds is something the quarian race never expected.
Mass Effect - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 29 - Words: 133,242 - Reviews: 81 - Favs: 36 - Follows: 29 - Updated: 5/12/2011 - Published: 12/10/2010 - Complete