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Joined 11-22-07, id: 1427385, Profile Updated: 12-04-19
Author has written 2 stories for Mass Effect.

About me: I enjoy writing and coming up with stories and scenarios that I like to explore either with characters that I love from games or from my own mind. Humorous/adventure/romance type stories are generally what I'd like to write and become better at. Associates degree in Computer Information Systems as well as bachelor's degree in Web Design and Interactive media. I've taken scriptwriting (screenplays) in college and absolutely loved it.

Story: "Escape" is something I've been working on since the end of ME2. I planned on having 32 chapters but I'm not quite finished with "Escape" just yet.

Story: "Beyond" Was written after playing ME3 as a way to add elements that were left hanging that I felt needed closure. The ending left me a bit stunned/numb/whatever... the ending needed much more than we got. I would have rather had a triumph ending like ME2! ME3 is a bit depressing which I've only managed to do one full play through which is sad. I really didn't care for the dream sequence with the kid each time. I didn't feel the connection Shepard would have with a random child on Earth. Wasn't believable. I understand the reason but didn't care for it.

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. :)


I'm simply impressed with how games are developed. I'm more interested in games with a rich-story line with intriguing characters and the lush environments in which they live.

Mass Effect had been a part of my life since the launch of Mass Effect 1 on PC! Mass Effect: 2 was very enjoyable and my favorite.

I was a little disappointed in ME3 in some areas but impressed in others. Some areas of the game seemed rush while other parts were fantastic. Character development of certain character/involvement were lacking. Ashley Williams and Miranda Lawson come to mind. Both written by the same writer. Mass Effect does have some memorable moments I'll never forget. I laughed. I cried. It was an amazing journey playing my male Shep and molding him.

My main cannon shep is a colonist/ruthless soldier. ME1 majority - paragon, ME2 - mostly, if not all renegade. ME3 - 60/40 paragon/renegade. I love that Male Shep can finally dance in Puratory! Hah! Definitely eye-candy to me. :) I only wished Miranda's character was more involved in the story than overused plot with her sister but I did enjoy her character nonetheless. It was a lonely time for my Shepard(ME3) without her by his side. Miranda should have been more involved in the game. Did like the mention of her working against to help the Alliance with her Cerberus knowledge to help the Alliance war effort.

Citadel DLC: The best. Love, love the added scenes with Miranda Lawson, everything about the DLC was fabulous and hilarious. Thank you!

ME:Andromeda. I finally finished my first play through with 160 hours invested. I chose to go with male Scott Ryder with customized hair (default) and facial features (hair around his mouth... his father ended up reminding me of an elder who could fit in the Underworld Vampire clan. Laughs. Anyways, my Scott Ryder romanced Cora Harper. I was pleased with the mature romantic hookup and teasing that went on. I found both romantic options well done! I had a blast of a time playing this game on the PS4 way better than the PC version, I also own. Started a second play through with "Melanie" Ryder with Suvi's hair. Not sure who she'll end up with maybe Jaal or Liam and dabble with Reyes Vidal on the side. I do enjoy Vetra and Drack's character as well. I took them out with me the most along with Cora. Peebee is just wild and funny. I haven't finished my second play through, been busy with other great games!


Favorite movies: "Dune," "Blade Runner," "Underworld," and all "Star Wars" and "Star Trek" movies.

Favorite books: Dragon Age, Mass Effect and Dune

Favorite game developers: BioWare, CD Projekt Red, and Ubisoft.

Favorite games:

o NeverWinter Nights (Good game)

o Jade Empire (Good game)

o KOTOR 1 & 2 (Enjoyable)

o Mass Effect 1, 2, 3, Andromeda (all time favorites)

o Dragon Age 1, 2, 3 (great game/characters)

o The Witcher 1, 2, 3 (Third game was the BEST, enjoyed 2 as well)

o Gothic series of games (Fun RPG, companion type-game)

o Drakensang (Fun RPG, companion game)(Played a little bit of Drakensang online, not much though)

o Greedfall (Fun RPG game, romance not clearly defined/can be missed if you don't choose the three correct responses)

o Conan Exiles, Dawn of Man, Anno2205, Stellaris, Consortium, The Guild 2: Renaissance

o Fallout 4, Fallout Shelter (Like the building aspect/characters... open world)

o Outer World (interesting... just started)

o Star Wars Jedi: Fallen Order (Good characters/Story... intense jumping.. stuck on wall running on wookie planet :-/ )

o Assassin Creed 1, 2, 3: Brotherhood/Origins (great games) /Odyssey (haven't finished yet)

o Destiny 1 and 2 (enjoyable)

o The Division and 2 (enjoyable)

o Anthem (enjoyed it, finished main story... like the characters)

o Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic Online - 8 great years, non-stop subscriber

o Star Wars: Galaxies Online - ( 3 characters, unlocked Jedi, what a grind!)

o EverQuest 1 and 2 Online - (Fun while it lasted. Plane of Knowledge best) E2 - Loved the decorating houses/guildhall

o World of Warcraft Online - (Always fun to play. Enjoyed Legion expansion and unlocking new races)

o Elder Scrolls Online - (Interesting quests, combat is weird)

o Lord of the Rings Online - (Interesting quests)

o Red Dead Redemption 2 (all around fun game!), online improvements have helped. Enjoying the new roles: Trader, Collector and Bounty Hunter. Was approx 17 at beta now level 100.

Favorite TV shows:

o "Blind Spot," "Seal Team," "Strike Back," "NCIS: Los Angeles," "Chuck," "Bones," "Castle," "Rizzoli & Isles," "Covert Affairs,"

o "Expanse," "Kill Joys," "Fringe," "Farscape," "Orville," "Continuum," "Defiance," "Dark Matter," "The Gifted," "V," both old and new series, "The Clone Wars"

o "Blood and Treasure," "Manifest," "The Code," "FBI,"

o "Once Upon a Time," "Game of Thrones,"

o "Grey's Anatomy," "Station 19," "New Amsterdam,"

o "Stargate/Atlantis" series

o "Star Trek NG,” “Deep Space 9,” “Voyager," “Enterprise,” and “Discovery.”

Favorite Music:

Tina Turner, Vanessa Williams, Enya, Enigma, Expose', Atlantic Starr

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Hope From Ruin by Padbie reviews
The Reapers have been destroyed at great cost. And now, it's time to rebuild.
Mass Effect - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 15 - Words: 33,445 - Reviews: 126 - Favs: 92 - Follows: 156 - Updated: 7/12/2015 - Published: 6/28/2012 - Shepard, Ashley W.
Miranda: The Space That Separates by hardboiledgregg reviews
Having left the organisation that had been her home for the past twenty years, and facing a life in hiding, Miranda struggles to find her place in the galaxy. Further compounded by a past that refuses to let go. A story based around what Miranda got up to after Mass Effect 2 and during Mass Effect 3, written from a first-person perspective.
Mass Effect - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 27 - Words: 99,757 - Reviews: 124 - Favs: 80 - Follows: 94 - Updated: 4/21/2014 - Published: 5/9/2012 - Miranda L., Shepard
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Escape reviews
The Normandy escapes the Omega 4 Relay after destroying the collector base. Will Commander Shepard and ex-Cerberus Miranda Lawson find a way to stop the reapers in time? Can they handle the struggles they'll face as their relationship grows stronger? Does Miranda Lawson finally escape from her past and her father's influence? Contains some profanity and sexual content.
Mass Effect - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 50 - Words: 352,052 - Reviews: 122 - Favs: 218 - Follows: 237 - Updated: 5/30/2019 - Published: 5/30/2012 - Ashley W., Miranda L., Oriana L., Shepard
Beyond
The reapers have been defeated but at what cost to humanity? Ground zero. Devastation. Will Miranda find her beloved Shepard, left behind in the blast? The fate of those left behind and that of the Normandy have yet to be found.
Mass Effect - Rated: M - English - Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 13,810 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 13 - Published: 11/15/2017 - Admiral Hackett, Miranda L., Shepard