AN: HEY HEY GUYS GUESS WHAT? I AM REWRITING THIS STORY TO GET RID OF BORING BITS AND SHIT SO IF YOU HAVE THINGS YOU WANT ME TO GET RID OF ADD OR CHANGE YOUR KNOW WHERE TO SUGGEST THAT STUFF :P ANYWAY READ REVIEW AND ENJOY

Fangs POV-

She is so infuriating! These were my thoughts as I punched the wall of my room and watched as the blood ozzed out of my now new wound Note to self, stop inflicting pain on yourself. But why she always have to run away like this! I had been asking myself this as I started tugging on my hair, Star and I had just gone on a date the night before and when we got back star had broken up with him and Fang was confused he did everything right but she still broke up with him.

I looked at the clock on my bedside table and realized that i was going to be late for school as it was already 8.20 and so I got up and got dressed as quickly as possible putting my traditional black shirt and jeans on when I was ready I ran outside and whipped out my wings that's right WINGS and I flew to school, I got there the same time the bell went, i ran to my locker and grabbed my books for social studies and ran to class i sat down in my regular seat and stared out the window daydreaming. My thoughts where interrupted by my teacher, "Aright class today we have a new student her name is Maximum Ride I looked up and when i did my heart skipped a beat, I don't believe in love at first sight but this feeling was close to it.

Max's POV-

I hate this school, I hate this country and I hate this uniform.

These where the first thoughts that went through my mind in this classroom, as the teacher introduced me to the class, I looked around the room it was small 'well that wont help with my claustrophobia i don't think', oh great another thing to add to my hate list i thought sourly "alright Max you can take a seat next to Nick please." I looked around and saw the seat she was motioning me to sit at "thank you Miss" I said as i sat down at the table she asked me to sit she gave a pleasant smile and went to teaching. I tried to pay attention but then I got a piece of paper thrown on my table I picked it up with confusion and unraveled it.

'Hey are you new to the country?' It said, I quickly grabbed a pen and wrote back 'yea but its not the best country I have been to,' I wrote back and threw it back to Nick who had been watching me so I assumed he was the person to have written it and thrown it at me, after he got it he unravelled it and frowned and then wrote again "I could show you the best place in America if you want?' it said as I got it again I bit my lip and thought 'what the hell, why not' and i wrote 'Sure meet you after school?" I asked he got it and looked back at me and nodded.

The day flew by quickly and after school and I met Fang outside the school "So where are we going that's so cool?" He gave me a smile and said "follow me," I gave him a look and he chuckled "I promise I am not a pedo or anything." Something made me trust him and I followed him we were walking peacefully walking through the forest,

"this place is amazing whats the name of it?" he looked over at me and told me that it was treasure forest, I nodded in understanding. We eventually got to a clearing in the rain forest revealing a beautiful waterfall, my breath hitched when I saw a pure black doe staring at us.

"This place is beautiful" I said wistfulness in his voice, and he just smiled and kept walking until he walked up to the doe to my surprise it didn't run away and he started petting it "I used to come here as a kid this doe has been here since then, he eventually got used to me and we became friends, I named him Shadow." He said and gave me a smile " did your dad show you this?" I asked and his eyes instantly got sadder and I regretted asking I quickly apologized "I'm sorry I shouldn't have asked" he looked at me and said "my dad died when i was three and my mum is never around any more" he said with sad eyes I had to get his mind of it I had to get his mind off it and the only way to do that in my eyes is evacuating the situation.
"I am sorry this place is amazing and beautiful but do you want to head back? Its getting pretty late and I need to get home." He looked at me and there was something in his eyes disappointment? I don't know, and he nodded.

We were waking the same track on the way back I heard a snap of a branch behind me I whipped around to see who it was but by the time I did that two shots where already fired and I realized to late that I had been shot and I dropped to the ground writhing in pain.

Fangs POV-

"Oh my god! Are you ok?!" I yelled frantically she nodded and I started lifting her shirt to see the damage she tried to stop me when I did this but I told her I needed to check the wound so she relented and I lifted her shirt and gasped.

Max's POV-

Oh my god he is going to think I am a freak! But all he did was gasp I was confused, "it nipped your wing but it also hit in your arm, you'll be ok." he said
"what your not going to say 'Ahh! Your a freak! Get away from me!?" he looked at me like I was crazy and said "your not the only freak out there." He said as he picked me up and whipped out his wings now I gasped and then everything went black.

AN: HEY GUYS THIS IS MINIMOSS8 HERE WELL ITS ACTUALLY WELL MINIMOSS8HUNGERGAMES BUT I FORGOT THE PASSWORD OF MY OTHER ACCOUNT

SO I'VE MADE A NEW ONE SO I CAN CONTINUE MY STORY SORRY FOR MAKING YOU WAIT SO LONG! PLEASE REVIEW!