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On a cool misty night a lone bat flew over the bright street lights of the city of Paris. Anyone looking up from the city below would not have given it second though, Except for the fact that it look liked the creature was carrying a small pack in its claws.

The small creature was in fact Mavis and she was currently enjoying her favorite think about being a vampire, besides maybe being able to walk on walls, flying. Being able to glide along the night sky gave her a sense of freedom that she enjoyed. While she lived in the hotel with her father being able to fly around the sky of the castle was the closes she had come to freedom in her 118 years. But things were different now she had Johnny. They had been all over the world and he had showed her more of the world then she thought she would ever see.

She was currently on her way back from picking up a supply of blood rations that her father had sent her through one of his many connections. Throughout their entire journey her father had been using his connections that he have gathered over his countless years to send her a supply of blood beaters to whatever country or island they decided to go to next .She had luckily managed to keep it from Johnny this entire time. She knew Johnny knew that she drank artificial blood but she figured the last think he wanted to see was his girlfriend sucking at the end of an IV bag and blood stains on the side of her mouth. She was afraid it would scare him and make him second guess kissing her so she played it safe and kept her secret always telling him that her drinking blood wasn't really a necessity.

She made her way back to the hotel where she and Johnny where staying and landed on the balcony of the hotel room.

There was a puff of purple smoke and then there stood mavis on the balcony. She turned around and look and the city below. She could see the entire city from here. There were so many different colored lights in the city below and she could see the Eiffel tower as well. Johnny had reserved a room at this room with this view simply because she had mention to him that she had wanted to see the tower. She thought that was sweet of him to always be looking out for her. That's how her zing was always putting others first. Her zing and now also her boyfriend. Ha-ha she liked the sound of that

She opened up the glass door of the room and stepped inside. There she saw Johnny still asleep in bed.

Unlike Her Johnny was not yet use to the Nocturnal life Style and at time slept into the night. She had just stepped out for about half an hour to get a look of the town and to grab her supply.

She thought about waking Johnny before she left and telling him where she was going in case he woke up so he wouldn't be worried but decided against it and decided to let him sleep.

She watched him as he slept and the bad mess of bed hair that he had developed throughout the night

She thought it was cute and thought about whether or not she could get away with sneaking into to bed with Johnny.

Ever since they had first left the hotel she and Johnny never did sleep in the same bed, besides the rare occasion where they would fall asleep watching a movie or her listening to Johnny tell about his adventures.

She really didn't see anything wrong with them sharing a bed she actually enjoyed it Johnny always gave of a scent that she enjoyed whenever they were together.

But Johnny insisted on it so she never went against. Though that didn't stop her though from sometime slipping out of her own bed or tent and sneaking into Johnny's while he was asleep.

Usually she would wake before he would and would slide back out but one night she had made hers self a little too comfortable and she had ben woken up by a stuttering tomatoes face Johnny.

She sat at the end of the bed and looked at her zing. She was so grateful that Johnny had stumbled into the hotel that night. Since then Johnny had taken her to see things that she never thought she would be able to see living back at the hotel. She stood up and walked over to Johnny's back pack and dug out his Camera. Johnny had been taking pictures of their trip since the first started.

The first picture was of her standing behind the pyramids under the moon light sky, Egypt was the first place they decided to go. They saw the pyramids and meet some friends of Murray while they were there.

Johnny was surprised when she had told him that the sphinx was actual a self-sculpture made by the Sphinx himself and that humans had just taken credit for it.

She scrolled through the pictures until she got to one of their trip to Italy. The pictured showed mavis walking up the side of the Leaning Tower of Pisa.

This wasn't one of the bigger then reality shots though where you saw people holding up the tower by taking a picture at the right angle, this was of here actually walking up the tower. She thought it would have been funny to take that picture and she was right. Though she was laughing more at Johnny acting nervous worrying that she would be seen by someone.

After scrolling through more pictures she came across another that made her laugh. It was of Johnny dancing in front of one of the royal guards of Buckingham Palace. It was funny at first with Johnny break dancing in front of the guards who just stood there without moving.

She hadn't believed Johnny when he said that they wouldn't move. If that was the case what was the point of having them guarding anything? It would have been like if her father's suits of Armor back at the hotel only stood around all the time,…. like well regular suits of armor.

That was not the case however because they did not stay still forever. After a while Johnny had gathered a small crowd and everyone was laughing and taking pictures of him dancing and it was fun.

That was until Johnny tripped on one of his dance moves and lost his footing and when tumbling straight into the guard

That's when mavis learned that the guards could actual move and it was an awkward next couple of hours as they were scolded by the police.

It was while in Brittan that she and Johnny stopped at one of the pubs where she overheard a couple talking about Paris being the city of love, and the perfect place for couples.

She had told Johnny that she had wanted to go to the city but had left of the exact reason why only telling him that she had always wanted to see the city.

She got up and but the camera back in Johnny's bag and looked back at Johnny. That's when she noticed that Johnny's facial expression had change.

Before he had looked peaceful but now his face was contorted like he was in pain and was jerking in his sleep

Mavis walked over and put her hand on Johnny's forehead and while he was not running a fever he was covered in sweat. Both his forehead along with his shirt was covered in sweat

"Johnny" she whispered as she continued to watch him wondering what he could be dreaming of

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