The Female Kyuubi's Paradise

Chapter 1- The Kyuubi's true feelings

Author's note- A revised version of a story I wrote in the past. I hope it is better. This story will be between Naruto and a female Kyuubi. This will be during Naruto Shippuden, near the beginning. The kyuubi will be in human form, she will have long orange hair with small pointe fox ears atop of her head. She will also have one tail. Nine is way too many, they would just get in the way. She will also have a very curvaceous body.

This story will be about how the kyuubi is in love with Naruto, but she doesn't know if a human could ever love a demon.

Naruto's Age-sixteen

Disclaimer-I do not own the show or manga, Naruto.

Naruto has lived his entire life with a demon living inside of him. The infamous demon was none other than the Kyuubi and Naruto has loathed him ever since he was revealed. Ever since that fateful day Mizuki told him the Kyuubi, the one single demon that caused more pain in Kohana, was living inside of him.

Naruto hated the Kyuubi with every fiber of his being. Because of him, he had to struggle through pain and suffering never knowing what it was like to have friends, only knowing loneliness. He understood that pain and it hurt even more, having people talk about him behind his back, and people laughing or staring at him.

Little did he know, the Kyuubi wasn't a male, he was actually a female and she has been toying with him. Pretending to be a male Kyuubi when all along she was a female. All sixteen years of Naruto's life he thought the Kyuubi was a male.

It was currently one in the morning. Naruto was in his apartment lying on his bed trying to fall asleep. No matter how hard he tried, he couldn't. It was a scorching hot night and his body was steaming, sweat running profusely down his body. The heat was too much to bear for the young blonde.

Naruto's clothes were scattered on the floor. The only pieces of clothing he wore was his black pants. His head was gently against the pillows, staring up at the ceiling thinking how much he hated being alone every night. Night after night, he was alone in the darkness, no one to talk to. He glanced over to his right where no one was lying, just a pair of pillows.

I hate being alone night after night. In Naruto's mindscape, a certain fox was also feeling lonely.

Behind the seal-

Behind the cold metal bars of the seal, in the dark was a woman. She was lying on the water with long orange hair flowing down over her naked body, with dark whiskers across her cheeks and small fox ears atop of her head. She had soft creamy skin and a gentle face. It was none other than the infamous Kyuubi feared across all the nations, and she was waiting impatiently for Naruto to fall asleep. She would always wait.

She heard the thought Naruto had of being alone. If only. I could be with you, but you would never accept me. I caused you so much pain. The pain no one should have to bear. She curled up in a ball, and waited, and waited. The only site that made her happy was seeing Naruto.

Back with Naruto-

He finally dozed off to sleep, closing his eyes for the night.

Recently he had been having strange dreams about a woman and strange lights. He could never understand the dreams he would have.

In Naruto's dream-

Naruto was lying down in the middle of a lush forest. Leaves fell around him gently landing on the ground. He stared into the sky, the sky was gray and dark ash fell from it. He slowly sat up, looking around the forest he caught a glimpse of a woman.

The woman was lying down near a tree crying and surrounded by a strange black aura. For some reason he felt bad for the woman, he did not know why. He stood up and slowly walked over to her.

He was now standing directly over her. The woman slowly looked up, once she saw him standing near her she immediately stood up. Her gentle eyes looked up to him. He stared right back into her eyes. For a moment they both stared into each other's eyes in silence. He could see this woman but at the same time, for some weird reason he couldn't. It was like he was staring into a dark void, like he had some strange connection to her.

Before he could tell what was happening, the woman was running away with her hands covering face, sobbing. He reached his hand out towards her, but she was already too far. He chased after her. "Wait. Who are you?" He could never catch up to the woman no matter how hard he tried. He tried to keep this up.

Back behind the seal-

The kyuubi was still curled up in a ball behind the bars. She realized Naruto finally drifted off to sleep. She stood up ready and stretched, raising her fingertips high.

Over time she taught herself several distinct justus, she had all the time in the world to learn them. One special jutsu she learned was perfect for her situation. She could focus her charka and create a form of herself out into the real world. She still had a hard time using the jutsu.

The jutsu was very powerful and the user had to maintain full concentration for an entire hour to finally use it. She sat down on the water, crossed her legs and placed her hands together for the hand sign. She meditated for an entire hour, focusing her chakra.

Her entire body began to glow bright and the power of the jutsu created small ripples in the water around her. After one long hour, the jutsu was ready. She opened her eyes wide and the seal exploded, a form of her departures into the real world.

A cloud of smoke appeared in Naruto's bedroom. The smoke dissipated and the Kyuubi was standing in the room near his bed. She fell down to her hands and knees. The jutsu was still too powerful and she still had problems shifting into the real world. She closed her eyes and clutched her chest in pain.

The pain began to fade away. She slowly stood up and walked over to a small chair near Naruto's bed.

It was something she loved, she could just watch him sleep. Resting her head on her hand she watched him sleep peacefully.

She always enjoyed the comfort of being around him. He never had to say anything, she could just watch him for hours, listing to his breath and starring at his body.

For the past sixteen years the Kyuubi has been pretending to be a male, never thinking Naruto would accept her. What human would accept a demon? A demon who was one of the most fearsome beings on the planet.

So she used anger and rage to hide her true emotions. But her true feelings were something she truly adored… She truthfully loved him. She never felt this way towards anything. Her heart would beat whenever she thought about him, it was a weird feeling to her.

The Kyuubi has been with him for sixteen years. She had never met someone so resilient, passionate, and never quitting no matter what people told him. Having seen the days of him crying, being alone and how powerful he could be when he fought for the people he loved. For the first time in her life, she fell in love. In all her life she never thought she would fall in love with someone. She treasured the concept of love, it was still somewhat foreign to her. She never loved anyone other than Naruto, but with love comes hate.

She always hated herself for brining all the hatred towards her loved one. Always telling herself she was the true cause of Naruto's pain and wished she could do something. She just desired to be with him, but knew she couldn't. She wouldn't risk it, she wouldn't risk him finding out. The worst thing to happen would be if Naruto said she was nothing, just an evil being.

She has now been sitting in the chair for entire hour, thinking to herself. She couldn't wait any longer, the person she loved was so close. He won't notice if I get closer.

She stood up from her chair and gently tip toed over to Naruto's bed, her feet gently touching the floor. She slowly climbed up on the bed, climbing on top of Naruto. His almost naked body was right below her. If only we could be together. She stared at Naruto's peaceful face. Her red slits gazed over the young man. He looks so peaceful right now. His blue eyes, his spiky hair and those cute whiskers he has. She couldn't take it, she wanted to be with him more than anything else in the world. I want to kiss him, I wonder what a kiss feels like? She let her curiosity take over. A kiss was something she had seen humans do before and she noticed they seemed to like it whenever their lips touched together.

She began to gradually close the gap between her and Naruto's lips. Almost there, almost there. Her lips were so close, she could feel his warm breath on her skin. Right then at her perfect moment, she was finally going to risk it when, hernose started to snuffle. Not now. Why now?! She tried to hold her nose, but it was too much and she sneezed.

The loud sound echoed though out the room. The sound awoke Naruto and his eyes shot open. He observed his room for what created the sound.

It was pitch black and he couldn't see a thing. He noticed there was a silhouette of what looked like a figure. He noticed the figure was right above him and had what looked like fox ears.

"Who's there?" He asked. The kyuubi froze and frantically thought of what to do. She quickly disabled the jutsu.

She disappeared and Naruto could see a cloud of smoke. He moved and jumped out of bed to flip on his light. Flipping the light switch, there was nothing in the room just a thin layer of smoke. He was confused, he sworn something was there. That was weird; what's with the smoke. He looked back down at his empty bed. Great now I have to try to fall asleep again.

Meanwhile back with the Kyuubi behind the seal-

Of all times to sneeze!... Damn it, I was so close. Why do I have these fucking allergies? The kyuubi was back behind the seal pissed off with herself. She didn't get her one chance with Naruto. After sixteen long years, she was finally going to take that chance, and of course it backfired.

Back with Naruto-

Naruto slouched over, he looked down at his bed, irritated. He lazily lied back down onto his bed. It took him a while of tossing and turning, after an hour he finally fell asleep.

The next morning-

Naruto awoke to a dreary morning. He lifted his head and struggled to get out of bed. He was still drowsy, managing to stumble out of bed and headed towards his bathroom.

In the bathroom he gazed into the mirror, his eyes were completely bloodshot from lack of sleep. Walking over to his shower, he stumbled into it and turned on the cold water and washed away the grim and stickiness.

After his cold shower, he felt refreshed and walked into his kitchen to have some breakfast. He cooked up some random food quickly and ate, he was now ready for the day.

That was good. He finished his food and pulled on his clothes. He walked out of his apartment door and down the stairs out in to the sunlight. Today was one of his few days off, he could do whatever he liked.

What the hell should I do? An entire week off, no missions or training. He groaned, he would rather be on a mission. I guess I could go to the training ground, work on some off my jutsu. Naruto walked through the village towards training ground seven.

Arriving at the training ground he stretched. He began his training and practiced with several different jutsu for hours. He practiced his rasengan several times.

Naruto lost track of time and trained until late in the day. After a while, he was sweating and had trained long enough.

I am worn out. After that thought, the sound of a nice trip to the hot springs sounded great. He left the training ground with his gear and headed for the hot springs on the other side of the village.

He arrived at the hot springs and walked in. He pulled his clothing off and stepped in to the nice warm water. The water was always enjoyable and he felt relaxed. The boiling water feels great. He felt like nothing could worry him at this point. He let the warm feeling wash away all his problems.

Again Naruto lost track of time. He was starving, not eating any food since this morning. His stomach began to grumble. He groaned and thought of where to eat, it was a simple choice. He walked out of the hot spring and pulled on his clothes.

He walked through the village to ichiraku ramen for his favorite meal.

Arriving at the small restaurant, Naruto could see the steam rising. The sweet aroma could pull him right to the stand.

He walked up to the restaurant and sat down at the counter. He noticed Ayame was the only person working, not another person was there. She was currently cooking up some ramen.

Ayame glanced over her shoulder and noticed her favorite ninja was sitting at the counter. She turned towards him and walked up to the counter.

"Hey Naruto. Long time no see." Ayame stated with a bright smile. She was working a night shift by herself.

"Hey Ayame. You working by yourself tonight?" He asked.

"Yes. My father has me working all week. He said I need to work more often at my age and gave me some lecture about, not working as much as I should." She replied.

"That sucks." He felt bad for Ayame the only person working must suck and Naruto was the only one there.

"So Naruto, do you want three bowls of ramen, or two?" She asked. Naruto smiled, he loved how much Ayame knew him.

"Two bowls should be enough for today." He replied with a smile.

"Ok I will make those up, real quick." Ayame began to cook up Naruto's ramen.

"So Naruto you're not on some crazy ninja mission today?"

"No I have the next couple of days off."

"That's nice, I wish I had that."

Naruto and Ayame continued to small talk. Meanwhile one demon fox was not too happy on what was happening.

Behind the seal-

She was furious. She would always get jealous whenever women would come in any contact with Naruto. Not feeling comfortable with these strange feelings, she understood that other women were a threat to her.

He's talking to that ramen girl again... I can't stand this, I can't even do anything about it. There was nothing she could do but sit there and watch frustrated. She bit her lip in rage.

Back with Naruto-

Naruto devoured the bowls of ramen in no time at all. He paid Ayame, handing her some additional money, she tried to refuse but he wouldn't budge.

"Thank you Naruto." Ayame said pleased.

"Don't mention it." Naruto walked away and waved goodbye. He strolled back towards his apartment.

It's late, I should get back. Naruto headed back to his apartment. It was a long walk from the ichiraku ramen stand, but he didn't mind. Arriving at his apartment he walked directly to his bedroom. Naruto changed into his pajamas and plopped down onto his bed.

It's nice to be back. He lied down on his bed and tried to fall asleep.

Three long hours came and went and Naruto was still awake. He tossed and turned but the heat was too much to bear.

It's so damn hot. I can't take it anymore. Naruto stood up, he ripped off every piece of clothing beside his boxers. The warm air was more bearable. That's better. He lied back down onto his bed and had an easier time falling asleep. It took him only minutes to drift off to sleep.

Behind the seal with the Kyuubi-

Alright he is asleep. She used her jutsu again and existed into the real world. That feels much better. She looked over to Naruto. Her mind immediately went completely blank, her eyes were glued to his body. Naruto is practically naked. Her body began to move on its own, towards him.

She realized what she was doing. No I can't, I might wake him up… But come on just one kiss wouldn't hurt. She fought with herself whether or not to go to him.

I have to think this threw. She sat down in the small chair to think.

Every second that went by was another she wanted to be next to him more. Her entire body ached to be with him.

I can't take it anymore. It'll be for a second. She slowly walked up to the bed. Alright this is it; I have to be as quiet as possible. The kyuubi gently climbed on to the bed again and gently lied down next to Naruto. I am so close to him. She raised her finger and gently traced it down Naruto's body. Her one finger traced his chest; she could feel his warm muscular body. It was the first time she ever felt his body and her entire body had a strange reaction. She loved listing to his warm heart beat and his soothing breath.

She eased her back up against Naruto's strong body. For the first time in her life she was exactly where she wanted to be. Ah this is nice. She felt comfortable for the first time, her mind was at peace.

Naruto shifted his body and wrapped his arm around the Kyuubi's stomach. She jumped, surprised by the warm muscular arm. She could feel his warm skin wrapped around her naked stomach.

This feels breathtaking. Naruto liked what he grabbed and pulled it closer tohim and squeezed. He had a dumb smile spread across his face.

This could not be going any better. She knew, this could not last. I have to get up at some point, I can't have him finding me.

Well five minutes won't hurt. She wanted to relish every second of this moment. She loved the warmth of him; she was in complete bliss having a nearly naked Naruto holding on to her.

Time went by and she drifted off to sleep.

They slept through the night together, keeping each other warm.

The next morning-

Naruto woke up to a beautiful morning, the sun was shining and the birds were chirping. Something else though, a foreign feeling he had, he never felt so refreshed.

Another great day... Wait a minute… something is not right. Naruto looked down to his left and saw a woman. He was shocked.

"What the hell!" Naruto yelled. He jumped out of bed and saw the woman on his bed sleeping.

"Who are you! How did you get in here!?" Naruto frantically asked. The kyuubi was completely lost and had forgotten where she was. She heard someone yelling and tried to force the noise out. The noise was too loud and would not stop. She slowly opened her eyes to find who was yelling.

"What?" She gently questioned. She rubbed her eyes and realized where she was. She jumped to her feet and tried to dispel the jutsu. She tried to disappear, but for some reason the jutsu wouldn't work. Frantically she looked up at the stunned Naruto, trying her best to leave. It was no use it wouldn't work.

She understood the situation, there was no way getting out of this. She was tired of waiting. There's no way I'm getting out of this... Maybe he will accept me, I have waited sixteen years. She stood up and slowly walked towards him. Her hips swayed as she moved closer and closer. This is it, he will either accept me or reject me, but I have waited long enough.

Alright that is the first chapter, I hope the revised version was decent. Thanks for reading.