Long time coming but I'm finally putting this story up for adoption. For those who have followed and favorited this story thanks for the support and please check out some of my other stories that I've started recently.
Anyway sad update aside I'd feel like a jerk if I didn't leave you guys on a positive note. So I've decided to let you guys in on what my goals were for this story so hopefully if any of you want to continue it you can adapt some of my ideas.
Plot
When Suigetsu and Naruto go to Suna they meet the Sand Siblings who after being informed of Akatsuki decide to spend the timeskip training to fight them. In Suna Naruto and Temari begin to show signs of a romance and she helps Naruto learn the basics of Wind manipulation.
After leaving the village Naruto & Suigetsu go to Katabami Gold Mine where they meet Raiga. Suigetsu who can't stand the fact the Kiba blades are being used by an amateur like Raiga decides to fight him alone and through a long drawn out fight is able to overcome his lightning weakness and kill him taking the blades for himself. Naruto on the other hand after fighting Raigas men is able to unlock his mothers chakra chain ability. When both fights are over Suigetsu & Naruto find themselves surrounded by Kiri Anbu whose mission it was to kill Raiga but when seeing that Suigetsu is a Hozuki (A Clan they thought extinct) both of them are taken to Kiri to meet Mei who recently became a Kage.
When making it to Kiri Mei offers Suigetsu a place in Kiri, a chance to reform the Seven (In my story Chojuro died in the war), and the rank of Chunin. Suigetsu explains how he will only stay if Naruto does too. Conflicted on what to do Mei is able to persuade him to join Kiri by offering him the opportunity to visit the remains of Uzu and for both him and Suigetsu to become her apprentices. He accepts and both become Kiri ninja and are given the remaining Seven Swords. [Naruto- Kabutowari, Shibuki, Nuibari & Suigetsu- Kiba, Kubikiri, Hiramekarei]
Naruto decides to take a ship and go to the ruins of Uzu where he discovers that the island has been taken over by a clan of Crocodile summons. The Crocodiles were once a great ancient reptile clan on the same level as the Snakes until Manda betrayed them and took their lands for his own forcing them to migrate to Uzu. Naruto challenges the boss summon for control of the island and win he wins agrees that they can stay here but must promise to serve as his families personal summons from now on.
Meanwhile Suigetsu revisits his clan compound where he finds a scroll containing a summoning contract. Performing the jutsu Suigetsu is able to summon the 2nd Mizukage's (Gengetsu Hozuki) Giant Clam. The Clam is then able to get Suigetsu into a genjutsu world where he is able to talk to him while taking the form of the dead Mizukage. Their he explains how his last mission given to him by the Mizukage was to keep the scroll containing his jutsu safe and pass them on to a worthy heir. Accepting the scroll and the Clam as his personal summons Suigetsu becomes even more motivated to surpass his brother and ancestor in strength.
Following the timeskip both Suigetsu & Naruto are jonin and are heading to Suna on a political mission to form an alliance with them.
Same as canon except during the Deidara fight Gaara is able to trick him by replacing himself with a clone made of gold dust that is then used to capture Deidara. But before he can crush him to death Sasori appears and poisons Gaara whose Sand Defense was down due to his lack of chakra. They take Gaara like in the anime except when Kankuro goes to stop them he doesn't get poisoned. Kankuro who forgot to get his New Combat Puppets is stuck fighting Sasori with Crow, Black Ant, and Salamander but is able to get a piece of Sasori's cloak and replace himself with an exploding puppet before getting stabbed by his tail.
Same as canon except Temari isn't a Konoha ambassador so she is still in the village and is able to join rescue mission. The squad (Kankuro,Temari,Chiyo,Suigetsu, and Naruto) is able to follow Sasori's scent and are stopped like in canon. Blah Blah Blah Suigetsu vs Kisame & Naruto vs Itachi & Temari vs Deidara & Sasori vs Kankuro + Chiyo in a puppet Royal. Bc of the faster response time than in canon Gaara doesn't lose his Biju and with Kankuros new strength and assistance Chiyo doesn't die in her Sasori fight. End of the arc everyone is happy and Temari and Naruto kiss becoming an official couple.
Had an idea for a filler arc where Naruto is sent to Nadeshiko village in order to form an alliance. He fights Shizuka like in the anime and changes her mind about love. Instead of lovers they become best friends with Naruto always teasing her and setting her up on blind dates. Also as leader of the village Shizuka is able to convince her people that it's time to bring water country together again and decides to integrate her people into Kiri forming an official Nadeshiko clan with her as the head.
Filler arc they go to Kumo stop Hidan and Kakuzu from capturing Yugito and surprisingly she develops a crush on Suigetsu and shortly after they become a couple with them going to each other's villages regularly. (Please more people due Suigetsu x Yugito)
Another Arc where Suigetsu & Naruto are sent to retrieve Utakata and tell him the truth about how his master really did care for him. The arc mostly follows the anime except like Nadeshiko the Tsuchigumo clan decides to join Kiri and reclaim their former clan glory. Hotaru's seal is fixed by Naruto making it so she can control the amount of nature chakra she absorbs and use it like Sage Mode. At the end of the arc they are still ambushed by Pein who beats up Naruto bad but with the help of Suigetsu, Utakata, and a squad of Kiri Anbu are able to get him to retreat for now.
After recovering from his beat down Naruto is visited by Jiraiya who tries to convince him to come back to Konoha. He declines and says how by looking through Kiri's ninja files he now knows about his parents. Jiraiya apologizes for being a bad Godfather but Naruto forgives him and explains how he still loves his parents but can't see himself leaving the life he has made here in Kiri and warns Jiraiya about Pein. (Jiraiya goes anyway but only loses an arm)
Naruto knowing Pein will be coming to Kiri to take him trains to master Kyuubis chakra. He is able to reverse engineer a key for the seal and free Kurama. (Talks to parents and gets them to accept his home is Kiri now) Kurama explains to Naruto that even though their friends they must fight in order for his body to get used to the new balance of chakra. Naruto vs Kurama and Naruto is able to win. He can now freely become the flesh and blood Kyuubu like Killer Bee (Sorry but I find the gold Kyuubi shroud and transformation GAY)
Pein and Konan try to invade Kiri but like in Konoha Naruto was able to make a sensing barrier using the small islands that surround Kiri to know their coming and intercept them. Naruto vs Pein & Konan vs Mizukage (Mei Terumi) Mei kills Konan and Naruto ignores Nagatos sappy backstory and kills him stating how if he wanted peace he should have just stayed in Rain village.
Meanwhile Suigetsu who is with Yugito in Kumo is attacked by Kisame. One on one Suigetsu vs Kisame where after he kills him he earns Kisame's respect and takes Samehada as his own.
THE END
(Honestly everything else I planned was to be the same as canon except Sasuke is either killed or has his chakra sealed for life)
Characters
Temari is trained under Baki & Granny Chiyo's brother Ebizo who is revealed to be a Wind Jutsu Master and S rank ninja in his younger days. (I find it weird how they're called the Honorable Siblings but only Chiyo's skills are shown) When training she learns his signature Vacuum style and can now channel wind around her body to increase her speed.
Gaara decides to train alone where he gets partial control over Shukaku. He also goes through his father's scrolls and is able to unlock his magnet release and control his gold dust. After Sasori's death he is able to do the same with the 3rd Kazekages Iron Sand making Gaara the strongest Kazekage in history. He now uses Iron Sand as his ultimate offense, Shukaku automatic sand for Perfect Defense, and Gold Dust's heavy weight in order to capture and seal strong opponents. [Jutsu Idea: Iron Sand Pyramid Crash= Forming spinning pyramid and using repelling force to fire it at his opponent; strong enough to crack Susanno's ribs]
Shukaku I felt was underpowered compared to other Biju so I decided to establish that he has the least amount of chakra compared to the other beasts but he has the best control. Thus explaining why he can control 2 elements (Sand&Wind) while most Biju just get 1 (Kurama has no element in the fic). [Jutsu Idea: Tailed Beast Bomb Wind Rifle= Bc his beast bomb is the weakest Shukaku has learned how to charge his the fastest. So covering it in wind chakra he is able to shoot his bomb the quickest and most frequently.
Kankuro I wanted him to really grow so in this story he is able to persuade Granny Chiyo to train him in puppetry. However due to the lack in time Kankuro still can only control 5 Puppets at a time. However he is able to create his own original puppet squad. Kankuro will also be a trained medic. [Jutsu Idea Poison Marionette: By taking what he learned from Chiyo about Poison making and controlling people with threads Kankuro is able to convert his chakra to poison and the longer he controls you with his poison chakra threads the sicker you become. Sense it's chakra based their is no cure for excess exposure to it]
1) Wicked Child: A small child sized puppet that resembles Kankuro himself this puppet is extremely mobile and has a comical kid sling shot that fires bellets that explode on contact (Ussop from One Piece). [Secret Jutsu Triangle Assault: This Puppet produces kunai launchers from both its shoulders and inside of mouth and fires explosive kunai in rapid fire]
2) Anubis: d946/f/2009/338/c/8/anubis_warrior_concept_by_cdb_
This puppet has a double sided crescent spade that it uses to cut its opponents down. [Jutsu Howl of Anubis: The puppet opens its mouth revealing a storage seal that releases corrosive gas that when making contact with skin renders its targets skin so burned and dry they look like mummies]
3) Iron Golem: 0cee/th/pre/f/2013/018/2/0/iron_golem_by_
This large Puppet has a whole in its chest that functions as a cannon that fires huge iron cannonballs and its axe can channel chakra and fire energy waves at its opponents.
4) Batwing demon: . /darksouls/images/4/40/Batwing_ /revision/latest?cb=20130210183139
Skinny puppet has extreme flying abilities that combined with its spear make it a dangerous aerial opponent. It's tail also have a hidden blade containing strong sleeping toxins.
5) Heavy Knight: . /darksouls/images/f/f0/Heavy_ /revision/latest?cb=20130130035311
Big knight with a bigger shield this puppet serves as Kankuros main line of defense and its huge mace and tower shield defend him against enemies that dare get too close.
Naruto He has a dual Wind & Earth affinity that he channels through Kabutowari (Earth for Mallet & Wind for Axe). He is also able to form a cloak of rotating wind chakra around the axe making it into a chainsaw. With the Shibuki he has upgraded it with his own seals that allow it to absorb powerful jutsus (Ex- Amaterasu) and through them back at his enemies. Touching the blade of the sword can also result in Naruto placing curse seals onto your body that restrict movement. I also wanted him to be a great sensor and use the Minds Eye of Kaguya technique that Karin uses. [Earth/Wind Rasengan Planetary Ring: Naruto covers a Rasengan in wind chakra and summons surrounding earth to it. The wind is moving so fast that the Earth is cut to dust and forms a ring of earth around it. When fired the rings of the Rasengan cut into the ground causing the overall radius of the Justu increase as more earth joins the ring.]
Kurama I just always wanted him to be able to use those come shaped Biju bombs the 10 tails could use. They're powerful plus their range is ridiculous
Mei Lava chakra armor and her being able to use the heat waves produced by her lava to blind enemies
Suigetsu He learns to change the composition of his body from water to oil like the 2nd Mizukage resulting in him learning oil jutsus that are extremely flammable. By combing his water element with the Lightning Kiba Blades he is able to increase the power of all his water Justus. [Jutsu Storm Release Typhoon Blast: Using a surrounding water source Suigetsu turns into a giant water fish. He then uses the Kiba Blades to produce lightning and draw some from the environment. Combining these two elements he then is able to fire them like a laser beam similar to Darui but on a Biju Bomb level]
Alright thank you for following this story even though it didn't last long and I hope my random story ideas will motivate someone to finish what I couldn't and right an awesome story using this concept or something like it. Thnx for Reading.