Hi!, new account because I forgot my password, lol. First fanfic with Divergent, be kind… please?

Chapter 1. Finding home

Home, what is that? I wouldn't seem to know. If you ask me, I'd say, "I don't know" or "A house?" Right now me, Tobias, Zeke, Christina, Uriah, Lynn, and Shauna- yes, her too. No wheel chair- are walking, beyond the gates… to look… for anything, life, houses, anything that proves that something living was or is here. We are walking in a dense foggy forest, we've seen cat like creatures with human like hands that climb trees and eat fruits. we've seen more, but now, it's time to sleep, for tomorrow I have a secret that needs to be told.

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I wake up to see Tobias packing up the tents and blankets. I stretch my sore limbs and bones, and yawn.

"Hello sweet heart, morning." Tobias say's as he un-zips the pack with the canned food and salted meats. He gives me some of the cheese we packed, and a bottle of water.

"Mornin' and thank you"
I said as I nibbled the cheese. I had to breathe through my mouth, as not to smell the scent, and barf.

"Darling, you look green, are you ok?" Tobias says, his voice filled with concern shadowing his features.

Well, I guess there is no hiding it now, I start to feel the burning acid, and the metallic taste of a warning creep up my throat, bye-bye cheese. I sprint to a tree and vomit, I feel a hand pull my hair away from my face, and the other rub soothing circles on my back. I wipe my mouth with my sleeve and go back to the tent to get my tooth brush, Tobias at my heels.

Suddenly, though, I feel dizzy, and faint. The last thing I see is Tobias reach for me as I fall, and blackness falls over me as I lose consciousness.

So, what did you think, huh? Good, bad? No flames please, I know it's short, the other chapters will be longer, review if u like, I love u all, my awkward little divergents!