Alright to all my patient readers heres the very first real chapter of Harry Potter's Accidental Change. For those that have posted a review thanks.
For those that didnt read the Information Guide, you had better go read it as it holds some background info that will appear in the story and if you havn't read it you won't understand what is going on and think I just made it up to fit my needs when I already had it set up.
This next portion will be to answer some questions and make some comments about peoples reviews.
NamesLiveOn: I'm not sure what i'm going to do with Fleur. What I am going to do is take it slow and try and build up with the characters I already planned on putting into the story.
Uticadanno: If you dont like my information guide or any others I plan on putting in then don't read the story, they are there to help keep track of the story for everyone myself included. I have never planned on posting them without a chapter, only the first "prologue" as you put it was posted without a chapter. If you dont want to read them then don't I wont make you.
Hadrian Malfoy: I see your point about the story being popular. Its only been up about a week and its got almost 3k views without any real chapters. But can you tell me how many of that is because they think it will be a great story or because its a Harem Fic with someone other then Ginny or Hermione as the main Female characters?
Goldrune09: I hope this Chapter is to your liking as I spent alot of time trying to get it to be a good chapter and story. :)
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~~~HPAC~~~
An Eleven Year old Harry Potter sat in his compartment of the Hogwarts Express Train surrounded by four girls who each had different aspects about them that made them unique to the young man. The first girl and the girl he was closest too due to her loving and loyal nature was Susan Bones, one of two remaining members of the Ancient and Noble house of Bones and one of Harry's two mates. She had red hair, dark brown eyes and a light skin tone and like almost ever single female member of her house, her breast had already started to grow, while small now she knew that by the time she reachs maturity (17) her breast would be very large.
She was very Loyal and Hardworking, before she found out about Harry's past she was already trying to help by being his friend and after she found out about the abuse Harry went through growing up, her resolve to help him and prove to him not everyone was like the Dursleys only grew stronger. Her parents had made a Marriage contract to Harry's but it was set to be null and void should the Bones have a Male Heir to continue the line, as it was made during a time of war and set up mostly as a Last of Line clause.
The second girl was Susan's best friend Hannah Abbott and a member of the Ancient house of Abbott, who while being the oldest child did not have to worry about continuing her line like Susan did as she had a younger brother to contiune the line not that many purebloods would let her because she's Halfblood. Her father had gone out to celebrate his new engagment to his now wife Heather and ended up getting too drunk and slept with a muggle woman named Sarah. Unlike her counterpart Susan she was flat chest and had blonde hair and brown eyes, she knew that her breast would never be as large as her best friends. Hannah was very different from Susan but also alot like her, being more outgoing and not afraid to speak her mind inless of course what was on her mind would hurt her best friend.
The third girl was Daphne Greengrass and was the Heiress of the Ancient and Noble house of Greengrass. Unlike Hannah or her best friend she was expected to continue her line or her younger sister Astoria Greengrass would have too. Daphne had black hair like Harry's but her eyes where a sapphire blue color. She like Hannah was also flat chest with a light skin tone, she was also a Pureblood known as one of the five Pureblood Princess, the others being her younger sister Astoria, Susan Bones, Pansy Parkinson and Annabeth Malfoy, Draco Malfoy's older sister by two years. Daphne also happen to be Harry's second mate and was not happy when she found out that a Marriage contract had been written out just before she was born by her grandfather and had her father's Cyrus's concent to marry her off to the Potter Family in exchange for protection against Voldemort. She had pushed Harry away at first with her Ice Queen persona she made to keep Draco and his ilk away during the Pureblood parties she was forced to attend. But her Ice Queen persona cracked after Harry manage to worm his way into her life.
The last girl in the compartment was Tracy Davis a Halfblood witch from the Ancient house of Davis. She like Hannah did not have to worry about keeping her line going as her older brother Roger Davis would do that as he was Heir. She had Brown hair and light green eyes, she had also like Susan had breast growing and expected them to be large, maybe not as large as Susan as her family was known for having very large breast. she had a darker skin tone then the rest of the group so she always looked tan. She was Daphne's best friend and like Hannah was more outgoing and not afraid to speak her mind or make rude comments and gesturs if it meant making people (Draco) angry.
Harry sat there staring at the window watching the clouds just float around while lost in his thoughts about making more male friends to hang out with until he was slapped in the face by a very angry Daphne Greengrass.
"Ow what the heck was that for"? Harry asked while rubbing his cheek which had a red hand print mark that was slowly starting to disappear.
"For ignoring me when I been calling your name for the past five minutes" Daphne huffed out in annoyance at being ignored by her betrothed.
"Sorry I was lost in thought while you girls where talking" Harry stated before looking back out the window at the moving landscape unfortunately that proved to be a mistake as he was slapped again by Daphne.
"Why do you keep hitting me women" Harry shouted at Daphne after being slapped yet again. "Why are you always this voilent" He asked her while rubbing his red cheek and somehow manage to glare at his betrothed.
"You were ignoring me and then don't even ask why I was calling you"
"I figured you would tell me so i was admiring the landscape while listening to you and the rest of the girls, besides I was thinking on how my life changed so much since I had the accidental change" with that being said all four girls went quiet knowing Harry hadn't lived an even somewhat good life until his change where he spent six months stuck as a Wolf. (See Harry Potter and the Wolf Chronicles. coming soon)
Having spent six months on his own in the wild until he was found by Daphne while roaming near the edge of town for food. Their bond as mates was formed instantly. It was revealed by Ameila Bones who had been asked to investigate why someone was running around in their wolf form and forming a bond with the Heiress of the Ancient and Noble house of Greengrass. Hoping that this wasn't some old man trying to claim the Greengrass fortune they put the wolf in a full body bind and called Ameila who forced Harry to revert back to his human form, revealing to the adults a very scrawny kid who was covered in scars. The most notable and disgusting scar seemed to reach across his shoulders before turning around and leading down the middle of his back and down his right leg and stopping just above his ankle. Seeing the scars the adults approached the child slowly and cautiously as to not scare him or alert him to danger. What shocked them the most when they turned him over was the lightning shaped scar on his forhead, and the fact that he looked alot like James Potter. With the scar revealing that the child was Hadrian (Harry) James Potter and that he was the one who had chosen Daphne as his mate, the adults seemed to settle down a bit before they remembered that Harry was covered in scars, causing the adults to be really angry at dumbledore who had told them that Harry was in a safe and loving environment.
Before Harry could contiune down memory lane he was once again interrupted by someone opening the compartment door rather forcibly.
"What do you want" Harry stated rudely not liking the fact that this boy for interrupting his trip down memory lane.
"I been looking for you everywhere Harry, now why dont you come with me and leave these bints inless they are too be our toys if you catch my drift" a certain red head stated with a gleam in his eyes that sent shivers down the spines of each girl.
"Alright look dumbass I do not know you and have never given you permission to call me by my first name, second two of these girls are my fiances and i would never even let you touch them let alone 'use' them as you put it and the other two girls are best friends to my fiances so that puts them off limits to you anyways, and third you have already pissed me off by stopping me from remembered the pleasant past I had, not to mention you didn't introduce yourself and I would like to know the name of someone i'm going to dislike and possibly hate" Harry stated with a cold tone that didn't match his neutral facial expression.
"Come on Harry it's me Ron Weasley you're best friend, don't tell me these bints already put you under a spell" the red head boy named Ron stated while trying to get into a seat next to Harry but didn't count on Harry punching him and forcibly removing him from the compartment with a cold look of fury on his face.
"Well Weasley let me tell you this, I have never been you're friend let alone you're best friend and with the way you're treating my fiances and their friends I don't even think I want to be friends with you, so do me a favor and leave me and my girls alone you piece of crap" Harry said to Ron before he slammed the comparment door closed and locked it just before he closed the blinds and sat back down in his spot.
Looking at Harry the four girls in the comparment knew they had to somehow calm him down before someone else came into the comparment and Harry did something he would regret.
~~~HPAC~~~
Ok guys thats the end of this chapter, I will be working on the next chapter now when I got time but I have no idea when it will be posted, so bare with me please, to all my faithful readers thank you for sticking by me, im really sorry but i been rather busy and just so you know i havnt forgotten you i will be posting two maybe three chapters at once that will be much longer and will be starting at the sorting i dont feel like doing the rest of the train ride which is going to be pretty boring.
Now for all the reviews i have received thanks, those that gave me some advice thank you as well it helped and like i have said before im not that good of a writer so any advice that is helpful would be nice. Now for those that want certain people added to Harry's Harem or removed from it just forget it because everyone has a place. I already have a plot all set up but its going to take time to write out with school and work.
NSN out take care guys till next time