Brick or Dexter Re-write

Hi there guys! So I wanted something else to write, and the Zelda thing won't be coming out for while (if at all) and well, I was just looking over at this story, and I was like, "Dang, this is some bad quality writing."

Now, I personally don't consider myself that great of an author, but I do feel that I've evolved much past this style, and, well, I wanted to see how it would be if I re-wrote some parts or maybe even the full story of Brick or Dexter.

So, uh, yeah. I'm just gonna write this first chapter, and post that, and see if you guys like it? Even if you don't, I'm probably still going to re-write it, just in my own time, so it doesn't really make much of a difference.

So yeah. If you guys enjoy it and want to see some more re-written Brick or Dexter, I'd be glad to! Just leave reviews!

Remember, this is loosely based off of PPGD, the Power Puff Girls Doujinshi by Snafu comics, so any similarities are most likely on purpose.

This was the first story that I ever published on Fanfiction that got any reviews and, well, I feel like I owe anyone who enjoyed the story something. So here is a gift, from me to you.

Also, regarding the Zelda High School fic, I decided that I should do a Prompt fic. I feel like that would be fun and would make the most sense for what I want to do. The main pairing will still be LinkxZelda, but there might be a few lil' couples in there. I'm really getting excited. I'm going to just try to develop the idea more before starting it.

Enjoy!

"What a great view, huh, Flower?"

"Yeah," I answered, staring off into the horizon. It truly was a beautiful sight, the pale orange and pink hue of the sky as the sun sank down over the ocean at Townsville Beach. It made me feel refreshed, and I guess Brick knew it.

"I'm glad that we were able to see this together, Flower." Brick added with a smile. He turned towards me, catching my attention, before putting his hand on mine. "I wouldn't want it any other way."

"Yeah, yeah, whatever." I dismissed him with a wave of my hand.

"C'mon Flower? Ya' can't just give me one little kiss?"

"My dad's calling me. Sorry, Brick," I rolled my eyes and couldn't help myself from smiling as I began to get up.

"Aw, pleaaase~?" he begged, looking up at me. He reminded me of a little dog then which made me feel insanely guilty. And so, begrudgingly, I gave him a little peck on his cheek.

"Happy?" I asked him, smiling again at his antics.

"C'mon, Flower. I'm not Professor U. You can give me a real kiss," he smirked and winked at me.

"You're ridiculous," I dismissed him again, before beginning to walk. I could tell that he was following me.

"That's the kind of thing that a girlfriend does to her man, y'know?"

"I'm not your girlfriend, though," I replied, nonchalantly.

"Everyone says we might as well be,"

"I'm dating Dexter," I replied with a shrug. He just couldn't seem to grasp that fact.

"We look perfect together!" he put a hand on my shoulder. "Hey, c'mon. Look me in the eyes and tell me that you don't want to be my girlfriend."

"Again. Ridiculous." I answered him, giggling a bit at his persistence. "Look, I've seriously got to get home now. I'll talk to you tommorow, alright?"

He sighed before giving in. "Whatever. Love you," he added, before flying off.

Brick always tried to flirt with me. Even when we first met. In fact, that was probably how we first became friends. He had some pretty stupid pick-up lines, and I thought they were funny. I've never really thought of him in a romantic way, though. He is, I guess, objectively handsome. He's fun and funny. But, well, he just didn't compare to Dexter. Dexter was... well, he was almost like my second half. He was into almost all of the same things I was into! Comics, math, school, and a whole plethora of other things that nobody ever cared about enough to talk to me about.

Soon enough I made it home, and I immediatley got on making myself some lunch. I hadn't eaten anything since the morning, since school lunch was disgusting. There was nothing else but Peanut Butter and Jelly, and, well, since it was that or nothing I decided that that would be my lunch. It was weird. Peanut Butter and Jelly tasted so different from eachother, but they're perceived as the perfect match. I guess kind of like me and Brick.

After my quite random lunch and random thoughts to match with it, I decided that I should text Dexter. I promised him that I'd do so earlier, anyway. So I took out my touch screen and began texting him right away.

Blossom: hey Dex~ 3

I waited a few minutes and got no response and so I just sighed and went into my room. I was the first person inside my house as usual, since Bubbles had ballet, and Buttercup had football, and the Professor was out late at the new lab they built over near Townsville. I immediatley regretted leaving Brick so early. I decided to begin to get my homework done, as I had nothing better to do. Luckily, after a few minutes, I got a text back.

Dexter: hey Blossom. I hav bad news :(

Blossom: what happened?

Dexter: i hav 2 go 2 spain with my family 4 like 4 months

Blossom: oh. that sucks

Dexter: i will think of you every second we're away Blossom. I can't text you when im out of the country.

Blossom: what... what am i supposed to do, Dexter? well... i'm going to miss you...

Dexter: i love you very much, Blossom.

Blossom: i love you too, Dexter. Goodbye,

Dexter: it's not goodbye, Blossom. i'll see you in a few months.

I stared, dumbfounded at my math textbook. I just stared into space not moving until I felt the tears begin streaming down my cheeks. I bit my lip and used my right hand to wipe the tears from my eyes before stuffing my face back into my pillow. It didn't stop me from crying.

I'm thoroughly pleased with this one. I feel like it turned out pretty well, and I feel like it's a good preview into what would happen later if this story were to actually be a story. I would reimagine some of the events, adding in things that would have been more believable or more fun, or more interesting, and I'm personally really excited to see what will happen. This would probably be uploaded way more frequently than AT:C. So if you guys want it let me know!

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-Oh No. It's Happened.-