So I was really starting to hate this story so I felt that some editing needed to be done. I'm gong to be posting some revisions of the first few chapter and so on and I will get the new chapter out soon. So sorry for leaving you hanging. And here is the revised versin of Chapter onee, I think it sounds better than before. Post a review of PM me with comments if you have any!
This is my first fanfic so please no flames. I hope you enjoy it and I'll try to update whenever I can.
Chapter One
Percy's PoV
The campfire was just dying down as Annabeth and I made our way back to the cabins. The awful singing was finally over and we were free to get to sleep, much needed break from saving the world. AS we approached her cabin we said our goodnights, knowing that he siblings were not my biggest fans (the hole over-protective brother thing was really annoying when she has like twenty older brothers).
Once I was back in my cabin I collapsed on my bed, exhausted from all the training that came with camp. I literally spent like two hours sword fighting with Ares and Athena cabins, and then climbed the rock wall on the highest setting, after which I had archery. I was just grateful to have a moment to lay down and sleep. And once i closed my eyes everything exploded.
My eyes snapped open just as something hit me with the force of a car, but on fire. I felt myself lifted into the air and thrown back to the ground. I tried to get up but none of my limbs were working, it was as if I didn't have them. People screamed and shouted around and I worried that they were being attacked to, but I looked up to find a bronze bull charging at me, again. I just had to piss of all the monsters, didn't I? I was the size of an elephant and had glowing red eyes looking at me with fury. I tried to me but i was stuck in the fiery ruins of my cabin, and my powers would not let me put it out. All the smoke was suffocating and my whole body burned. just as i was sure I would be crushed by the creatures hooves I blacked out, gladly going to the dark, painless abyss of unconsciousness.
Annabeth's PoV
After being walked to my cabin by Percy and letting my heart slow I got into my pajamas and looked over one of the many projects I got from Daedalus's laptop. The man was a genius, and no matter how many files I opened there is always another project that amazes me. Just as I sat down for a good look I heard an explosion outside. I jumped and ran outside, wondering what could have went wrong this time and praying that Percy was not in the middle of it. And then I saw the Poseidon cabin in flames. The cause, a giant bronze bull roaring to a stop. It was the same we fought when Tyson first camp to camp what felt like centuries ago. The bull turned on a dime and charged back at the cabin. "PERCY!" I screamed, hoping to see him climb out, stand up, anything. But no such thing happened, and I ran towards his cabin, trying with all my heart to make it before the bull. Just as it was in the remains I opened it's mouth, ready to spit fire, but a spear came out instead. Clarisse stood behind, sweating from the heat, stoney expression on her face. The rest of her cabin were pushing the beast away as she dragged Percy out, over to a group of Apollo's children. I pushed my way through a crowd that seemed to appear out of nowhere. As I came to the front I saw Percy laying on the ground, eyes closed and body unmoving. I kneeled by his side, wanting to cry, scream, and die all at once. But Chiron's voice brought me back to the real world.
"What happened here?!"