Naruto: densetsu no yonnin
CHAPTER 1
"hello" human talking
'hello' human thinking
"hello" human shouting
"GAKI" DIVINE ENTITY TALKING/SHOUTING
'GAKI' DIVINE ENTITY THINKING
GODLIKE, MOKUTON AND RINNEGAN NARUTO
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto.
CHAPTER 1: GAINING POWER AND GOING BACK
Naruto was a 17-year-old boy forever burdened because of the Kyuubi sealed inside of him by the death god himself. He woke up in his mindscape 'Ugh where am I' he asked no one in particular, when he saw he was in his mindscape his first thought was 'Am I dead'. He then started thinking back on the events that led up until now
(FLASHBACK THE VALLEY OF THE END)
The valley of the end, a place where legendary battles have taken place, battles that were so destructive that they reshaped the land such as Senju Hashirama versus Uchiha Madara or more recently Uzumaki Naruto versus Uchiha Sasuke. In the moonlight you could see two silhouettes standing on two different statues. The two figures could be identified as Naruto and Sasuke, both were once as close as brothers whether they showed it or not, but now they were to the point of being a replay of Hashirama and Madara. Naruto was standing on the head of the Senju Hashirama statue while Sasuke was standing on the head of the Uchiha Madara, his sharingan spinning wildly into the eien no mangekyo sharingan (spelling?). "Sasuke why, why are you doing this, tell me" Naruto asked while staring into the 6 pointed star.
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"I thought it was obvious, I am helping Madara release the Juubi so that he can bring peace to the world, a world where Itachi is still alive but I guess I also thought you would have been smart enough to not stare into my eyes, hn, looks like I was wrong about that too dobe" said Sasuke with a cold smirk, 'tsukuyomi' he thought as the sky turned cloudy and the moon became red. Naruto realising that he had been trapped in the genjutsu and screamed "But a peace where everyone is nothing but a slave isn't true peace" as he released a ridiculous amount of chakra releasing the jutsu "Shut up dobe what the hell would you know about true peace" said an enraged Sasuke as he charged a raikiri. "I know because I have been through suffering and I understand other people's pain" shouted a teary eyed Naruto as he charged a rasengan. "Narutoooo!" bellowed Sasuke as he jumped."Sasukeeee!" screamed Naruto as he jumped to meet him. When they clashed they literally tore the land to pieces but then something weird happened to Naruto, his eyes started burning and he felt his chakra slowly drain in miniscule amounts going towards his eyes but he kept going and his shoved itself into Sasuke's chest just above his heart in his subclavian killing him instantly . That was when he blacked out however he had never noticed the genjutsu cast over him by the Kyuubi 'WELL GAKI LOOKS LIKE YOU WILL DO GREAT THINGS…..I JUST HOPE THEY'RE FOR THE BETTER…..' Kyuubi thought as he trailed off and went to sleep.
(FLASHBACK END)
He couldn't stop his tears from falling at the thought of the memory but that was when he remembered where he was as just moments ago when Madara released the Juubi, from the Juubi being sealed into him to when they had fought to his little talk with Kami.
(FLASHBACK, JUUBI RELEASED)
"What will you do now Uzumaki Naruto, my plan is finally complete all that I need to do is absorb the Juubi and project tsuki no me shall begin a new era of peace that will never leave, hahahaha" cackled Madara. 'I need to find a way to stop this fast…wait a minute I-is t-the J-J-Juubi being absorbed into ME!' thought a shocked Naruto as silver chakra surrounded his body. "What the hell is happening, what are you doing Uzumaki" shouted a horrified and furious Madara. Then his eyes started to burn again and as the Juubi was fully sealed he felt a genjutsu release. Madara saw his eyes and then froze up in terror, the eyes staring back were not sapphire blue but metallic purple with four rings and 9 tomoe (comma) 'He has the rinnegan b-but that's not possible and why are there tomoe in the rings forget 9 of them!' he screamed in his head. He was so focused on the rinnegan that he never noticed naruto started to make hand seals "Mokuton: mokuryū no jutsu (wood release: wood dragon technique)" whispered Naruto. Madara was violently brought out of his thoughts when he saw a wood dragon was racing towards him. "Kamui" he said desperately the jutsu activated just seconds before impact.
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'He has the mokuton too what's next, those tomoe have given him the sharingan's power….. Why do I get the feeling I that I shouldn't have thought of that' thought Madara. Naruto who had yet to realise what he was doing held up his hand and whispered "susanoo". Madara was once again blown out of his thoughts as a purple almost grey like figure emerged from naruto and only for the fact that Madara still had his kamui activated he would have been killed on the spot. 'I knew I shouldn't have thought about the sharingan' thought a rather annoyed Madara because that his enemy was gaining more and more and even more power by the second and he knew that if he didn't kill the blond idiot soon he would be overwhelmed and he wouldn't be able to extract the Juubi to complete project tsuki no me.
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Madara then summoned his own susanoo when he noticed that Naruto's susanoo had not two or even three but four arms. Shocked with this and every other discovery that the blond was showing him he knew that the boy was mere minutes away from killing him if he didn't do something fast, so in a desperate attempt he held up his arms and chanted "Burn all evil and leave no ashes. Arise to my command the flames of amaterasu" he said in the hopes of killing the boy through his susanoo however to his surprise the boy simply shouted "Shinra Tensai (almighty push)" and the supposed un-extinguishable flames were turned to nothing more than cinders. What he didn't know was that the boy himself was unconscious while he was fighting someone else.
NARUTO'S MINDSCAPE
Naruto woke up in his mindscape, he was confused 'How did I end up in my mindscape' was his primary thought and then he could hear something, a small voice in his head calling him to it or as it sounded her. He then started thinking about his battle with Madara, did Madara defeat him, no, he could still feel his chakra being in constant use 'But who was using it' was the question running through his mind. It wasn't Kurama as he could not feel the kitsune's presence, but that would mean he was dead. Then he remembered 'I absorbed the Juubi… that will take a while to get used to saying' He thought weakly. "(sigh) Well I might as well go and find out who's in my mindscape this time" he said tiredly. He slowly made his way to the cage seal that contained Kurama or rather use to contain. When he got there though he didn't expect to see two women arguing. He started walking towards them when he heard that they were talking about something dangerous. "…..KNOW HOW DANGEROUS THAT CAN BE" said the woman within the cage. "YES I DO KNOW BUT I INVENTED IT SO NO IT WON'T GO WRONG" claimed the other woman before continuing, stating "IT SEEMS THAT OUR GUEST OF HONOR HAS ARRIVED" and she turned around to face the boy "Excuse me but exactly who are you two and why are you in my mindscape" asked a confused but cautious Naruto. "WELL THE ANSWER TO YOUR STUPID LITTLE QUESTION IS THAT, I, AM KAMI AND THIS, IS AKIRA-CHAN OR THE JUUBI IN HUMAN FORM" explained the woman who is now identified kami.
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"Wait…..KAMI" said Naruto "YES AND I AM HERE TO TELL YOU OF YOUR NEW….POWERS" said Kami "What new powers"asked Naruto confused but wary "WEELLL UM WHERE TO BEGIN" started Kami "OH JUST TELL THE GAKI AND GET IT OVER WITH" scowled the Juubi or Akira as she is now known as, obviously annoyed. "WELL WHEN YOU ABSORBED AKIRA HERE YOU GAINED THE JUUBIGAN OR BETTER KNOWN AS THE MANGEKYO RINNEGAN WHICH CAN DO EVERYTHING THAT THE RINNEGAN AND MANGEKYO SHARINGAN CAN DO BUT YOU WON'T GO BLIND AND YOU ALSO GAINED THE ABILITY TO USE ALL SUB-ELEMENTS INCLUDING MOKUTON,SHOTON,MEITON AND JINTON OH AND I HAVE GIVEN YOU THE ABILITY TO CREATE KEKKEI GENKAI AND GIVE THEM TO OTHER PEOPLE" stated Kami slowing down near the end to let everything sink in (AN/he will only be able to give ones like the 4 I mentioned NOT like the dust release). Naruto who had long since gone wide-eyed and started gaping like a fish closed his mouth and calmed himself before he screamed "Whhhaaaattttt" "NOT SO LOUD BAKA" shouted Akira. "Not so loud, how do you expect me to react, say 'oh is that all' and just walk away" shouted Naruto in a softer but still loud voice.
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"YES WELL I AM AFRAID TO INFORM YOU BUT WHILE MY SISTER YAMI WILL NO DOUBT BEAT MADARA QUICKLY IT IS TOO LATE TO SAVE EVERYONE SO I HAVE COME HERE TO SEND YOU BACK IN TIME" stated Kami. At first Naruto thought 'huh so that's who's controlling me' when he realised "Wait what do you mean send me back in time" he asked warily. Akira's face faulted and she said "ISN'T IT OBVIOUS WE'RE SENDING YOU BACK IN TIME SO YOU CAN PREPARE FOR MADARA EVEN KILL HIM IF YOU GO BACK FAR ENOUGHAND BEFORE YOU START SHOUTING ABOUT 'WHAT DO YOU MEAN IF I GO BACK FAR ENOUGH' YOU WILL BE SENT BACK FIFTY TO FIFTY-THREE YEARS, AROUND THE TIME OF THE DENSETSU NO SANNIN". Kami then stated "YES YOU WILL HAVE THE CHANCE TO HELP THE SANNIN, YOU COULD STOP ORCHIMARU FROM BECOMING A SADISTIC JUTSU CRAVING PEDOPHILE OR HELP JIRAIYA BECOME STRONG ENOUGH TO DEFEAT NAGATO SHOULD IT ARISE AGAIN OR EVEN HELP TSUNADE BY SAVING HER BROTHER NAWAKI, MAYBE EVEN HAVE HER FALL FOR YOU" said Kami while giggling. Naruto blushed furiously "Wh-wha-wha-what d-do y-you mean f-f-fall f-for m-m-me" he said stuttering.
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"OH JUST FALL IN LOVE WITH YOU, YOU'D BE THE PERFECT MAN FOR HER YOU KNOW" said Kami while Naruto if possible just turned a deeper shade of red. Meanwhile Akira was ready to burst out laughing at the boy's situation but instead said "AW DON'T WORRY GAKI, CHANCES ARE MORE THAN LIKELY THAT YOU'LL DO SOMETHING TO MAKE HER FALL FOR YOU,AND I SHOULD MENTION THAT YOU'LL BE IN A SMALL CHILDS BODY DEPENDING ON WHEN YOU ARE YOU WILL BE 6 MONTHS OLDER THAN TSUNADE, A LITTLE BIT TOO YOUNG TO BE IN THE YEAR AHEAD OF THEM BUT THE OLDEST IN YOUR CLASS AT THE ACADEMY" Akira said starting teasingly but honest in the end.
MEANWHILE WITH MADARA AND YAMI
"What the hell are you" roared Madara. "SORRY TO TELL YOU BUT NARUTO-KUN ISN'T HERE RIGHT NOW BUT SINCE YOU WANT TO KNOW SO BADLY MY NAME IS YAMI, GODDESS OF DARKNESS" stated Yami to the utter disbelief of Madara." What the hell are the god's getting in the way of my plans for" Madara practically screeched but was cut off by Yami "YOU WERE NOT MEANT TO INTERFERE WITH THE BOY IN THE FIRST PLACE, EVERYTHING WAS MEANT TO END WITH NAGATO BUT NOOOO! INSTEAD YOU HAD TO INTERFERE" she said with malice in her voice. "BUT WE MIGHT AS WELL FINISH THIS. SEEING AS HOW THIS DIMENSION WON'T EVEN EXIST IN A FEW MINUTES" she said mumbling the last part. 'Dammit at this rate project tsuki no me will be prolonged even further, that is if this worthless excuse of a god manages to make a miracle and bet me' he thought before continuing the thought with a chuckle 'What am I thinking even with a miracle she can't beat me' before saying "Yes let me show everyone that it's you worthless excuses of god's that are the reason we suffer so much". However this only proved to be lethal she screamed "MOKUTON: JUBAKU EISŌ NO JUTSU (wood release: tree bind flourishing burial)".
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Madara only got the chance to dodge because his sharingan saw it but didn't get a chance to counter as Yami roared "MOKUTON: MOKUJIN NO JUTSU (wood release: wood golem technique)" and then a huge golem burst out of the deity possessed boy and punched him sending him 40 feet back (sorry forgot to mention that while Naruto was talking to Kami, Madara's susanoo deactivated. Again sorry.) Madara stood shakily before using the tiger seal and saying "Katon:Gōryūka no jutsu (fire release great fire dragon technique)" but it was not to be as Yami said "MOKUTON: MOKUJŌHEKI (wood release wood locking wall)" and a large wooden half dome stopped the dragon in its tracks, Madara however was infuriated and made a different seal this time shouting "Katon: Mekyyaku no jutsu (fire release great fire annihilation)" trying to burn down the dome 'I will not be beaten by some lame excuse of a deity' he thought as he took his gunbai off his back and violently swung it whispering "Gunbai fanned wind" and the dome finally collapsed. He smirked thinking the goddess possessed boy had been crushed, but it was short-lived as Yami suddenly appeared behind him and yelled "OODAMA RASENGAN (giant spiralling sphere)" shoving the giant sphere into his back.
(Back with Naruto)
"Are there any more surprises you want to tell me before I faint" Naruto asked after regaining his bearings. "WEELLL THERE IS THE POSSIBILITY OF YOU HAVING THE PAPER KEKKEI GENKAI THAT THE BLUE-HAIRED GIRL WHOM WAS WITH NAGATO HAD BUT I'M NOT SURE ABOUT THAT ONE" said Akira but by now something that normally would have shocked Naruto no longer did. (AN/when I said GODLIKE Naruto, I MEANT IT) "OH AND THERE WILL BE SOME OTHER CHANGES, SOME ARE SET IN STONE LIKE HASHIRAMA DIDN'T GIVE THE BIJU AWAY TO THE OTHER VILLAGES OR THAT TSUNADE WILL CONTAIN ONE OF THE BIJU AND RANDOM THINGS LIKE WHICH ONE SHE WILL CONTAIN AS WE CAN ONLY ALTER SO MUCH WITH THIS RITUAL" Kami said before continuing "WELL NARUTO-KUN, WE HAD BETTER GET THE RITUAL STARTED". When they had the ritual set up Akira and Kami started chanting words that Naruto could only guess as an ancient language. Suddenly in a brilliant flash of light everything outside the seal faded into darkness.
(FLASHBACK END)
After remembering that, he could hear voices. 'Probably the medics' he thought 'Well might as well contact Akira and find out about this' but that wasn't to be as he practically felt her push him out with a whisper of "LATER GAKI".
END OF CHAPTER 1
AN/I AM JUST TRYING THIS OUT TO SEE IF I AM SUITED FOR WRITING BUT IF I DECIDE I'M NOT I WILL FINISH THIS STORY AS I HATE SEEING AN UNFINISHED STORY AND PLEASE INFORM ME OF ANY SPELLING MISTAKES OR MISTAKES IN GENERAL. PS I LEFT OUT THE END OF MADARA'S FIGHT ON-PURPOSE AND IF YOUR CURIOUS ABOUT WHAT HAPPENED READ ON UNTIL I GET TO IT