Falling Stars

By Shadow Flame 777

Rating: T just in case

Disclaimer: I do not own Avatar: The Last Airbender, because I would be rich, but I'm no.

Here is the first chapter, short and simple. Please send feedback and rate and review. Critiques and suggestions are appreciated.

Aang

Spiritual force in the form of a beam of light opened the rock that shielded the avatar, making others cover their eyes. The boy's eyes lit with unknown spirit energy from lives past as he rose up in the underground world in Ba Sing Se. He rose with a righteous angry look on his face, rage filling his glowing eyes. He was floating, so high, so proud and was to the evil, like a monster from the closet came out to play; but to the good; he was like a bright beacon when lost at sea. But the true monster from the closet shot her own beam of light at him, striking him in the back. Writhing with electricity in his veins, he stopped; all strength and pride snapped in an instant. The prodigy smirked as her golden eyes saw the lad face the scythe of the reaper, death's black aura filling the area. Blue eyes cried as the daughter of the ocean saw her beacon darken, and her star fall, so bright yet so short lived.