Ok, I was walking through Wal-Mart the other day and was listening to my favorite Skillet song "Monster" and was in the electronics section when I noticed the new Hansel & Gretel movie. Me being the fan of both the hot and sexy Jeremy Renner and fairy tales with a sick twist, I got it. As I was on my home, I was jamming out to Monster when inspiration struck. The song got me thinking about writing my twist on the movie. And here it is.
Madison's grown up outfit. Same as Gretel's except the sleeves on her corset are bell sleeves.
The secret side of me
I never let you see
I keep it caged
But I can't control it
So stay away from me
The beast is ugly
I feel the rage
And I jus can't hold it
It's scratching on the walls
In the closet, in the halls
It comes awake
And I can't control it
Hiding under the bed
In my body, in my head
Why won't somebody come and save from this
Make it end
I feel it deep within
It's just beneath the skin
I must confess that I feel like a monster
I hate what I've become
The nightmare's just begun
I must confess that I feel like a monster
I, I feel like a monster
I, I feel like a monster
My secret side I keep
Hid under lock and key
I keep it caged
But I can't control it
'Cause if I let him out
He'll tear me up, break me down
Why won't somebody come and save me from this
Make it end
I feel it deep within
It's just beneath the skin
I must confess that I feel like a monster
I hate what I've become
The nightmare's just begun
I must confess that I feel like a monster
I feel it deep within
It's just beneath the skin
I must confess that I feel like a monster
I, I feel like a monster
I, I feel like a monster
It's hiding in the dark
It's teeth are razor sharp
There's no escape for me
It wants my soul, it wants my heart
No one can hear me scream
Maybe it's just a dream
Maybe it's inside o me
Stop this monster
I feel it deep within
It's just beneath the skin
I must confess that I FEEL LIKE A MONSTER
I hate what I've become
The nightmare's just begun
I must confess that I feel like a monster
I feel it deep within
It's just beneath the skin
I must confess that I feel like a monster
I've gotta lose control
It's something radical
I must confess that I feel like a monster
I, I feel like a monster
I, I feel like a monster
I, I feel like a monster
I, I feel like a monster
Tears shed from fear, young Madison watched as the witch opened the doors for more children to become trapped…like herself. Like any naïve child, the raven haired girl couldn't resist the candy that made up the house. And when the doors opened, her curiosity got the best of her. Once inside, the doors slammed shut. The witch immediately chained Madison to the wall with a shackle around her neck. Calling her a common beast, the witch cackled in hysterics as an idea formed in her toxic mind. "A common beast? Quite interesting. But now that I look at you, I don't see a common beast." The witch then raised her wand and chanted a spell. Yellow lightning shot out and struck Madison. She screamed in pain, but her screams then became howls. Her dress ripped off her suddenly growing body, black fur grew over ever inch of her creamy white skin, her once ocean blue eyes were now bright yellow. She was a wolf. But no ordinary wolf. She had bulging muscles all over her body, the kind of physique a man could only dream of having. Instead of paws, her hands grew claws. She was more than an ordinary wolf, she was a werewolf.
The witch laughed as Madison whined and howled. She squirmed on the ground in pain and confusion. How could this happen to her? Did God forsake her for some unforgivable sin? These were thoughts she had days ago, when the witch explained the spell. "You feel it, don't you?" She smirked. "When your heart beats faster, you cause the wolf to come out. It becomes harder and harder to resist. Until you finally unleash the beast, the pain becomes worse and worse."
Now Madison was laying on the ground as she saw the witch lure in two more children. It was horrible. The were a little older than her. and what made it even worse was that one of them was a boy. Here she was with nothing to cover her body but the tattered remains of her dress, and of all times, a boy is now in her presence. But the boy, who she learned was called Hansel, had modesty and never looked at Madison. His sister, who's name was Gretel, always tried to help when the witch wasn't around. The twins thought she was just some poor child who's fate would be the same as theirs. But it all changed one night. It was when the witch hit Gretel with a shovel. She didn't care if she was naked, Madison tried in vain to launch herself at the witch. Her heart rate sped up and her body transformed. The wolf might have been created by the witch, but that didn't mean it liked her. It was that very night when the witch decided to cook Hansel. The night when the children watched as the frightened little girl transformed into a monster.
With her heightened vision, Madison saw Gretel pick up a nail. She could see the gears turning in the sister's head. As the witch grabbed Gretel to threaten Hansel, she silently tossed the nail to Madison, who had calmed down and shrunk back to her original form. The younger girl nodded and started to pick the lock on the shackle. Within seconds, she heard the lock click. She then tossed the nail back to Gretel without the witch's knowing. Madison had to sit down and watch Gretel fuel the fire for the oven. "This oven's not hot enough!" The witch screamed at Gretel. "More wood!"
As the witch stormed off to get Hansel, Gretel started to pick the lock on her own shackles. Madison had watched for the witch to warn the girl when she'd see her. The moment she saw the ugly crone, she knocked on the floor with her knuckles. The older girl tried to hurry, but the witch soon dragged her brother toward the oven, not even paying attention. When she opened the oven, Gretel finally unlocked the shackles and ran to get the butcher knife the witch carelessly left on one of the tables. When the witch finally noticed Gretel was no longer tied up, she turned and growled at her. She then used her wand and threw a spell at the little girl.
Madison nearly screamed. But she was stunned silent when she watched the spell pass right through Gretel and not harm her. "What?" She questioned her wand. Gretel took this opportunity and ran up to stab the witch three times. The witch screamed in pain as her blood splattered onto the girl's face. When she fell, Gretel ran to cut the ropes holding Hansel's hands together. With her back turned, the witch stood and raised her wand to send another attack. She never got the chance when the werewolf lunged and bit the hand holding the wand. Madison refused to let go until she ripped the witch's hand off. She spat out the small appendage and growled with blood dripping from her mouth. Hansel then grabbed a long piece of fire wood and clobbered the witch. She fell on the door of he oven and screamed in pain from the heat. all three children then ran to shut the oven door and Hansel was the one to lock it.
All three children...or really two children and a werewolf, stared at the window on the oven and watched the witch burn. As she calmed down, Madison's form shifted from beast to human. Gretel found a table-cloth and wrapped it around her so she wasn't completely naked. She then turned back to the oven and sneered, "Is it hot enough for you now?" And with that, all three watched the witch burn in the fire.
"My sister and I never saw our parents again. But we did find a friend. And now, it was just the three of us. But we learned a couple of things while trapped in that house. One: Never walk into a house made of candy. Two: If a witch has a werewolf chained to a wall, it means the werewolf wants to kill her. And three: If you're gonna kill a witch, set her ass on fire."