Here is a rewrite of Trapped Inside. I have BIG plans for this story so watch out. I've been working on future chapters and future villains. So tell me what you think

"When are you going to tell them?" Sam asked as they walked to Danny's house after school.

Danny sighed. Sam knew this was a touchy subject for him, but Danny had kept his secret for far too long. It had been a year since the accident, which she still felt guilty for. He had been killed -or half killed whatever- because she had convince him to go into his parents' Ghost Portal. So it was her responsibility. His parents were no idiots, how many people could invent all those ghostly weapons? They were sure to find out eventually so it would be better to ease them into it.

"I don't know Sam, I've planned on telling them but..." He trailed off.

"But you always chicken out after the first word ow!" Tucker yelped as Sam whacked him over the head.

"What Tucker meant to say," She shot Tucker a look. "Is that your afraid that your parents won't accept you. They will."

"Yeah dude remember after Freakshow kidnapped our 'rents and exposed your identity to the world? "

"How could I forget?" Danny muttered

"They didn't hate you or rip you apart molecule by molecule! It seemed like they loved you even more!" Tucker added, throwing his hands up for emphasis.

"I know! But a lot of ghost attacks have happened since then and Phantom has gotten a lot more bad publicity and it's just you never know..." Danny replied, suddenly interested in his sneakers.

"Danny." Sam put her hands on his shoulders looking him in the eye. "You need to trust them. They're your parents."

"Sam's right, man."

Danny smiled and put his arms around his two best friends. "You guys are right, I do need to trust them. But I will need some backup. They're me parents what could go wrong.

Sam smirked. She knew Danny was worried under that smile. Danny was terrified of his parents would hate him or even turn him over to the idiotic Guys in White. Who could blame the half-ghost for being worried? But his parents wouldn't do that. Maddie and Jack love their son and will probably love him more once they realize he had gone into "the family business"

Danny was brave, smart, cute, and would do anything for the people he cared about. He would make sure everyone else's lives were perfect even if it meant ruining his own. That's why she loved him and if only he loved her back. Well, she didn't think he did- did he?

The halfa shivered and stopped walking, a blue mist escaping his lips.

"I AM THE BOX GHOST!" Danny rolled his eyes and turned towards his friends.

"Going Ghost." He muttered, morphing into his alter-ego. His icy-blue eyes changed into ecto green. Raven black hair turned to white and his skinned paled dramatically. Danny now wore a black hazmat suit with white gloves, boots, belt and his logo on his chest. His legs went together to form a ghostly black tail. "Be right back, guys.

As Danny shot off into the sky, Sam noticed a green and sliver van sticking out of an alley.

"Sam, I-" Tucker was interrupted by another shout.

"Run young halfa! RUN!"

After a moment this was followed by loud shot and a familiar scream of pain.

"Danny!" They yelled in unison.

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"Boxy, where are you?" Danny taunted scanning the streets for signs of the blue ghost .

He paused. Where was that pesky Box Ghost? No one was screaming in terror nor was there any signs of floating cardboard. What was going on?

"Run young halfa! RUN!"

Danny spun around towards the voice and his breath caught in hims throat.

His dad was standing in front of the Fenton Assault Vehicle, which was parked in an alley. The Box Ghost was at his feet, trapped in a blue net which meant it was ghost proof. Danny froze at the huge gun in his father's arms.

"What's up da-Jack? He asked casually, his voice cracking.

"You're going down, spook!" Jack shouted, hefting his gun higher.

"Nice gun. What's it do?"

"Oh, this? This is the Fenton Ghost Shocker! It traps spooks like you in ghost-proof material and shocks the ectoplasm right out of ya!" Jack announced proudly.

Danny gulped. Skulker has a few of those and they aren't his favorite things to be shot at with .

"Can't we settle this differently? how about you turn around and I fly away like this never happened?" Danny asked.

"Now Maddie!" Jack bellowed.

There was a loud blast behind him and a green net fell over him (The Box Ghost and Danny have different color nets because TBG wasn't caught with the Fenton Ghost Shocker which uses green nets because blah blah ectoplasm infusion blah, yeah. Just telling you all so I get NO complaints about this) He had enough time to see his mom poised on a dumpster grasping the same gun as his dad. She then pushed a green button on the weapon.

Electricity coursed through his body. Danny screamed in agony, squeezing his shut against the pain. Danny fell from the sky as he sunk into unconsciousness.

Here it is. PLease review and tell me:

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That's it. I'll probably update every... Monday? That way you can look forward to on this day.

-Ash out