Well this is my first time writing a fanfiction. All along I've been just reading other peoples work and thinking they're stories are awesome so, I thought why shouldn't I give it a try. If my story sucks please do say so but in the most respective way. I don't mind bluntness unless it's just plain rude. Thank you and I hope you enjoy my story.

Chapter One:

CPOV:

I come from a town called New Salem. I was peacefully living there until my parents were murdered in a house fire. They were murdered by vampires. For centuries witches and vampires have never gotten along, they were always out for each other's neck. I never really cared for going out and seeking blood that is until one of their kind murdered my parents for no reason. Right now I am on my way to a town called Morganville, a town where the vampires live just like New Salem where we witches live. I am easily able to move there due to my intelligence so the vampires don't mind my sudden move to their town. Also it's pretty normal for a human to move there since they need them to donate their blood for vampires to survive on. As the taxi driver goes past the welcome sign I snort at the message; "Morganville a place you'll never want to leave from". More like a town you can never escape from. The taxi driver drops me off at Morganville High School. I enter the building and go straight towards the office dragging my bags along.

General POV:

The secretary looks and asks "May I help you?" "Sure" Claire responds," I just moved here and wanted to sign in to the new school." The secretary said "In order to do that you must come with a parent\guardian- "the secretary stops talking when she looks up into Claire's eyes due to the mind control that Claire was subjecting her to. The secretary almost as if a new person smiles and says "I'll just need you to sign these papers and write down what classes you wish to take and my name is Mrs. Blake ".

"Hi Mrs. Blake my name is Claire Lovejoy and sure, no problem" Claire lies to her and after she finishes everything she asks Mrs. Blake if there are any places where she can live at and Mrs. Blake gives her a flyer of the Glass House where it says they're looking for someone to room for a $100\month. Perfect, Claire thinks and she heads out of the high school and heads on over there in another taxi. As she heads out she can't help but admire the beautiful home. She walks up the steps and knocks on the door and there opens a Goth looking girl. Her first thought was that she was a vampire but when she mumbles a few chants under her breath she's relieved to find a pulse.

The Goth girl exclaims "Hi, my name is Eve and please, please tell you're asking about renting a room here I desperately need another girl to dorm here I suffer enough with two boys—"she stops speaking at the sound of laughter. At first the Goth girl glares and asks why she's laughing feeling offended. Claire looks up and tells her she was laughing at her rambling and yes she wishes to ask about dorming feeling deep connection with the Goth girl named Eve. "My name is Claire Lovejoy by the way" Claire tells Eve as she walks in the door of the house known as the Glass House.

Yeah I know it was short but I just wanted to know if guys think I should continue or if my story sucks so much that I should go back to reading and stop writing.