"You look gorgeous Dawn." Ash blushed, studying Dawn's remarkable outfit. She was wearing skinny jeans with a off-the-shoulder, short sleeve crop top with a large kiss marked at the middle. She had her hair loose like the previous night but this time, it was side swept and some strands acted as her side swept fringe. She wore flats with this look and stunning jewelry.

"Thanks Ashy, you look gorgeous yourself." Dawn replied, blushing lightly as well. He was wearing ripped denim jeans and a plain white t-shirt that was accompanied with a black leather jacket. He wore the trainers he had the previous night and his hair remained spiky.

"Off we go then." Dawn smiled, taking his hand as they walked to the park. It was a block away and didn't need the use of Ash's red convertible, and the day was beautiful and they had decided to take advantage of the nice weather and have a walk.

"I see 'em!" Dawn gasped, as she pointed to the two sharing a picnic under a oak tree. Ash smiled as he put his hands around Dawn's shoulder as she looked in his eyes and giggled, and they both deliberately walked past them.

Both took notice of them and gasped. Of course, they did know that the couples were their previous ex and jolted up to see them. Dawn had pulled off the outfit perfectly and her slender figure was shown off as Paul looked in awe.

Ash looked more then just simply mature. He looked ravishing and like a man in his late teens. They instantly wanted them back and although they knew that they both were involved in a relationship, they bolted towards them to greet them and snag their previous partner back.

"Hey Dawn! You look awesome today, wanna get some ice cream?" Paul insisted, smiling as he winked at her.

"Hey Ash!" Anabel smiled. "Remember the crap I said about you being immature? It was just me and my illness! Come back to me please! I have a picnic basket with your name written all over it!" she protested, pulling at his hand.

"Uh... Anabel? You cheated on me and plus, I am going out with Dawn now so I can't. Anyway, she made me breakfast before we left and to be honest, it made yours taste and look like something that you fished out of the garbage bin. But I can't be to sure you haven't..." Ash snickered, forcing his smile to wither as he tried to play it cool.

"Uh Paul?" Dawn began. "Ash was just about to get me ice cream and he said he'd give his heart and soul just to make him happy. Shame that you didn't do that a couple of months ago, or else we'd still be an item. But who am I to complain? I've got the best thing a girl could ask for... Ashy." Dawn grinned, dabbing her lips on Ash's lips.

"Ugh, him/her?!" They said together in disgust. The couple nodded and walked away, pleased at how their plan had worked out. And at the corner of their eye, they could see a bunch of children chomp down on some food and pigeons eating it up.

"Well... this has gone great Ashy. And if you don't mind..."

"Sure, I'll get you an ice cream Dawny. And I was telling the truth back then. Your breakfast does make her food seem like garbage!" Ash chuckled, leading her to the ice cream truck. Dawn ordered a Mr. Bubbly as Ash ordered a triple coned, four scooped with three different flavour, and sprinkles, ice cream.

"Wow... big man, big stomach." Dawn teased, giggling. "But I love you because you're you. Screw childish, you're perfect the way you are.." Dawn finished, bringing a smile to his face as he leaned closer and pressed his lips against hers.

It was short, but it sent fireworks and their heads spinning. Not to mention the small audience that awed at the scene, and the 'couple' that blew up seeing this. They pulled away and smiled as Ash breathed his words of thanks to his new girlfriend.

"Thank You."

I did some calculating and I figured out how old I was when I did this ^^
I was bloody eleven and a half, so damn close of being twelve! How do I know? Because when I save it, it shows in my file what day I had saved this so... there I go!

I can see how I improved through the years comparing this work to my others so... yeah ^^
I have those gentle critics to thank for this! :D Lol. And no point pointing improvements here because this was when I was bad with grammar, punctuation and how I structure my sentences!

See ya people and thanks for reading! If I get nice reviews I'll post the other stories on here and see if you get a real good kick out of any of the others too! Te he x