A/N: So this was actually an assignment for school that I just so happened to get inspiration from a moe filled scene from chibitalia, let's see if you can guess ;)
This piece is supposed to be a sort of free form poem, so please don't judge the format and the way the words jump around. it was originally written in couplets too.
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Disclaimer: I do not own Hetalia, but I do own this poem.
No worries to feel
Plenty of work to do
Young minds
Simple thoughts
It was when summer winds blew
When the summer sun rays shone, hot
I worked outside, sweeping the lawn
A simple task for a little fawn
Little did my childish mind know
That day, it was your time to go
So you walked outside in your black cape
Walked out in your black hat and robes
"Venniciana, my dear, I have to go"
With that he offered his hand soft, pale
My eyes shut tight, tears leaking out
That is when he muttered those words out
"You'll gain more power than you've ever had before-
-If you join my side, forever, as mine"
A small silence formed before my answer came,
"No" I replied with a wavering cry
His eyes widened in shock and despair
Like a deer in the head lights being struck mid-air
"No?" he questioned, grabbing my shoulders tight
"Why Not?!" he exclaimed, shaking me, filling me with fright
"To save you" I countered, looking down in despair
"This is what happened to grandpa. And his fate I don't want you to share"
He stared at me with sadness in his cerulean eyes
With an understanding nod and a regretful goodbye
I gave him a hug, a quick parting gift too
The first thing that came to mind and possession, my broom
He took the gift graciously, with a smile and a twist
Then suddenly he leaned forward, and we had our first and last kiss
One last hug, a turn, a snap, and a crunch
Heading toward the marching bunch
I called and I waved, I bid him farewell
Then he shouted a promise, I believed to well
He promised return, a hollow feat
But my hope never was never at damper
With no worries to feel, and work to do
The years dragged on, where were you?
A/N: Did ya guess what it was? Just in case you are horribly lost and confused, it's the scene where Holy Rome is leaving Venniciano confessing his love and making hollow promises of his return. I think its good but, i need your guys' opinion so PLEASE REVIEW