You may be asking yourself why I am writing an update here. I did, after all, finish this story around a year ago.

Basically, I've started a rewrite of this! You might not be very interested being as you've already read this one, but even though I'll be sticking to the basic story of this I will be writing it a little differently, and I will mention things which should have been mentioned in this version.

I've had reviews on this recently about loops in the story, and trust me, I know. I was fourteen (and maybe fifteen at the end? I'm not sure) when writing this and I wasn't as mature as I am now I am sixteen. My writing has improved since I wrote this, so I feel like it could turn out to be a great story.

If you're interested in reading it, it is my most recent story, 'Concealed Torture'. If you go on my profile you'll find it pretty quickly. I didn't want to simply change the chapters on this one as I wanted to keep it up as a memory of how (bad) my writing once was.

To those of you who read it, thank you! I was going to take quite a long break from writing due to worsening medical problems but hey, the urge to rewrite this was just too great.