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Firestar vs Paperwork

Firestar the Hero of the clans, the one who slayed Scourge, and Grandpa of the Chosen Ones, had Fallen Victim to Paperwork. Yes Firestar has Fallen Victim to the enemy, bane, of all leaders.

As Firestar began his morning, Paperwork began Flowing through the camp like a Rushing River.

And so as the leader of Thunderclan, it was his responsibility to complete all the work.

Hours later, Firestar still filling out forms, and documents, was interrupted from his work, by Sandstorm, Dustpelt, Brambleclaw, and Graystripe as they each came in each Balancing Stacks of Paperwork at least four feet on either their Backs, or Head. Firestar Closed his eyes, Inhaled some air, exhaled and screeched "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"
After breathing for a few seconds, He once again screeched "CURSE YOU PAPERWORK, CURSE YOU!"

So How was it? was it better, or worse?